A Beginner's Work

[Hoshi no Kabii]

I just got into spriting, and would like the opinion of others.

A trainer card:

Those are the only sprites that I made that I dont think are total crap and I am willing to showcase. Ill post more here when I create more.

 

[Kinginsoar]

I'm not so sure bout Charazard, but I like the the mix better.

Oh yeah, and good trainer card.

 

[Hoshi no Kabii]

Made another:

 

[♥~Darkness Within~♥]

The Charizard is okay, The Scyther/ Aerodyctal mix is werid but okay, the Trainer card is good, Aswell a sthe bulbsaur good job overall

 

[~*Pearl*~]

Good work. But you've to improve at Revamps, use the current sprite as reference and do a bit of line-art. Don't use colours like that. Revamp the wings like the original ones.
Use the flames.

 

[Hoshi no Kabii]

How's this one?

 

[Dark Pheonix]

The outline is terrible sorry to say. Other than that i like your work. Another promising new spriter

www.freewebs.com/howtosprite has usefull tips if you are a beginer

 

[Mega Trickster]

Very good work. Don't worry I suck at revamps too D=

 

[Hoshi no Kabii]

Yay, I got to make a few more before I go on vacation!

A cel shaded Mew, Glowing Psyduck, and a line-less Flareon. I personally think the Flareon came out very good.

 

[Samayowa]

Those are good for a beginner. Keep up the good work!

 

[Hoshi no Kabii]

I'm back!

A devamp Crobat and a revamp Golbat. I dicided to work on everyones' favourite batty friends.

 

[~*Pikafan*~]

Wow... Those are pretty good for a so-called beginner. Keep it up!

 

[Jedi Flygon]

Thats not bad for a beginner! Heck, Its perfect for a beginner. I mean, beginner spriters are far away from how good you are!

 

[Brandon-kun]

You aren't bad for a begginer but not good for a expert but you are fine. XD. Your revamps and Devamps are good and the Charizard recolour and Scyther mix is okay keep it up you will be good and you won't even notice.

 

[Hoshi no Kabii]

Update:

Yay, its a PNG!

 

[Hoshi no Kabii]

Meh, just something I slapped together. Hu-rah for PNG!
Any suggestions for it? Should I lose the tail?

 

[~Flareon~]

I liked the trainer card, it looks very awesome. And the Pikachu/Skarmory mix looks very cool. Keep it up!

 

[[Kingdra]]

Good for a beginner I don't like the Charizard's wings (pretty bad shading)

 

[Hoshi no Kabii]

This was supposed to be a mightyena-machop mix, but for some reason, after I made it, it turned green and all distorted. The lighter gray dissappeared so the shading is screwed up.O___o. Whenever I copy and paste sprites now, they turn greenish. Anyone know how to fix this?

 

[~*Pikafan*~]

What paint did you use?