A boy named Twixx

[Twixx]

Hey, this is my first comic so don't be too harsh.

Episode 1- A Cry for Help
Episode 2- The injured Charmander
Episode 3- Good news!

 

[Divine_Light]

Eh ^_^;, It isn't that good, The "Twixx" sprites are just re-colours and you can still see the red outline, But atleast it ain't JPGed

 

[Feity]

its best if you only resize things by incriments of 100, unless you're using Photoshop. Overall, it's not bad, a lot better than some of the stuff here, but it's best to have more than one issue before you start posting them.

 

[Twixx]

thanks for the replies,
I made episode 2 and am making episode 3. Hope you enjoy!
Episode 2- The injured Charmander

 

[-Thomas-]

Ok, I have some harsh criticism, but it is duely needed.

1) Get rid of that font. Use on that is more readable.
2) If you are going to use a border, do so around both screen dialogue and action.

If you do this, your sprite we be considerablly better.

 

[silverdragon]

yeah remove the font change it to something more readable
and the out lines of the sprite i can still see the color red
but except for those things i like it

 

[Twixx]

I tried to fix it up a bit by giving Twixx a better sprite and using different font.
Here it is.
Episode 3- Good news!

 

[Blaze Dragon]

Sorry, but I will have to say a few things
1)Use speechbubbles, all like them better
2)Change the font
3)The character is only a recolour
4)It looks like the normal cliche of: "Proffesor (insert tree here) gives me a Pokemon and I do a journey for obtaining 8 badges and becoming a champion"
5)Charmander didn´t seem bad...in fact, it seemed like on top health. Try to change their faces