.:A land called Ages:.

[Momiji]

Welcome to my first comic ever! whoot whoot! So this comic fallows a few trainers across a new land called Ages. Before you go all judgy on me, I'll tell you this: The comic jokes are stupid and un-original. It is an actual account (If you can call it that) of the trainers. Pokemon sprites and overworlds by me. Unless I say otherwise on my "Thanks" section... Well with out anything else to say, READ AWAY!!

A Land Called Ages​

.::Volume 1: Neopath Town and the rise of rivalry!::.


Chapter 1: A New Begining and a Mistery Pokemon

Chapter 2: Pointless Talk and an Inmoblie Wingull

Chapter 3: A New Challenge!

Chapter 4: One-on-One!

Chapter 5: Gryphog! On to Ocean View!!

Chapter 6: Colette's New Friend


.::Volume 2: A new plot! Ocean View gatherings!::.


Chapter 7: All in order, "The Fallen One"

Chapter 8: Adventures in Ocean View (Part 1)

Chapter 9: Adventures in Ocean View (Part 2)

Chapter 10: Adventures in Ocean View (Part 3)

Chapter 11: Let the Story Unfold!

Chapter 12: Rage Island!!

Chapter 13: Munching on a Gyarados

Chapter 14: Scientist and Azu return! Reaching Ages


.::Volume 3: Ready set Goals!::.


Chapter 15: Clothing makes the trainer! Ready set goals!

Chapter 16: VS James and Arcanine!

Chapter 17: Campus Tour!

Chapter 18: Fight for James! Panduy!

Chapter 19: The Name's Hikari! The next great Coordinator! (Hikari sprite and OW by me. Do not use)

Chapter 20: A new rival! Hikari! *New


.::Volume X: Extra "Chapters"::.
(These have no time line in the actual comic and are to be read as "gag episodes")


Chapter 001: It's time to due, due, due, due, duel! (Part 1)

Chapter 002: It's time to due, due, due, due, duel! (Part 2)

Chapter 003: It's time to due, due, due, due, duel! (Part 3)

Chapter 004: In Memory of... *New

*~~-- Extras --~~*​

.::Maps of areas::.
(Do not use)

Neo Path Town: Chapters 1-5

Union Cave: Chapters 5-6

Ocean View Town: Chapters 8 and 12

Ovean Forest: Chapters 9-11

Route 1: Chapters 8 and, 11-13

Rage Island: Chapters 12-13

Route 2: Chapters 14 & 15

Taiky Forest: Chapters 16 & 18

Pokemon Academy: Chapters 17 & 18

Pokemon Academy F2: Chapters 18


.:rofiles::.
*CAUTION IF YOU HAVE NOT READ ALL CURRENT EPISODES SOME BIOS MAY CONTAIN SPOILERS*

Momiji's Profile

Colette's Profile

James' Profile *New *Spoilers, be warned.

Fei's Profile

.:Thanks to:.​

Coronis (Jhoto/Kanto overworlds)
SPPF's Sprite resource (Attack sprites)
D-Man's and Gridiron's D/P Rips (For 4th gen pokemon back sprites)
PokeSho for Misty's OW

More chapters to come that is if you guys like it And plz if you don't, then tell me why. But don't tell me its not funny, cuz its not supposed to be... The reason its not supposed to be is b/c Im the worst joke writer you'll ever meet. So I hope you enjoy.

 

[XxGreivousxX]

you are crazy sicko these are AWESOME no offense neo, these are better than yours holy sh** 574398560455873409/10

o btw did you already make all the fakes? PM or reply here, i just wanted to offer something

 

[blueguy]

The new textbubbles are nice, and thank you for not stealing from me this time, because you DID. It's not bad, but it's not that good either. Just because you've set it in a new region, it doesn't mean that using a journey isn't bo-RING... I'll read it more thoroughly later...

 

[Momiji]

Xx GreivousxX Thanks Im glas you like 'em. And yes I did make the pokemon.

blueguy rather than opening that door again I'll take the criticism. I'm trying to think of ways in which I can make the whole "Adventure" thing not as boring However I think that the new region and the new pokemon will help make it less of a boring journey comic.

And plz could you both stop sapming in my thread? Thank you.

 

[Magical Trevor]

Wow nice comic and cool speech bubbles but it's bit confusing. Do the speech bubbles in the way people wuld read them. for example when Momiji said ''hey noticed how the wingul hasn't moved'' and Fei says ''Whatever who cares'' I read it ''whatever who cares'' ''hey notice how the wingul hasn't moved''

 

[ForeverFlame]

Nice bubbles!
I agree with Mutten, too. I used to do this with my comics until someone brought it to my attention. Everything was backwards! I read through them and it seemed pretty confusing. Now I make sure that I won't do that again.

 

[Momiji]

Ok! I shall try an fix that for the next chapter , I didn't actually realize but yeah. I'll also try an fix some of my spelling errors for the next chapter.

Edit: Well I've tried harde to make sure the strips are easier to read. But I don't know if it's any better.

And episodes 7 and eight should be up any second now .

Hopefyllu what Im planning will make thi not the old boring adventure story. Just wait 'til they get to the main land

 

[SoulGuardian]

Momiji this is a wonderful comic! The sprites are well done, it is unique, everything in this comic is wonderful! Keep up the good work!

 

[WM-WaterMaster]

Likes and Likes

I really love your comics.The speach (SP?) bubbles are really cool.
I also like the trainers also the pokemon.
I also get mixed up with the people when they talk. x.x
Other than that they are great!
;194; WM;194;

 

[Hiro xd]

WEll the speech bubbles are awsome and its a very good region. It starts good but now that its a adventure, lets hope its not like the rest

 

[Momiji]

Hey guys!

Once you read chapter 11 (Which you have to click to make the image larger.) tell me if it's easier to understand who's talking.

And chapters 9-11 are up!

 

[Hiro xd]

Great new episodes! Thoe it is a bit rushed but other than that its awsome! Great job Momiji!
Keep up the good work!

Hiro XD

 

[blueguy]

Hey guys!

Once you read chapter 11 (Which you have to click to make the image larger.) tell me if it's easier to understand who's talking.

And chapters 9-11 are up!

Since you don't seem to have anyone giving you a competent review, I thought I'd do you the favor...

"Phampy"...? "Phampy"?! *ahem* It's phanpy, I believe. Seawolf? Come on, I'm sure you can do better than that. Names for official pokémon aren't so glaringly obvious, are they?

Your dialogue is really badly pieced together, and sounds awkward... and what further complicates it is that it's spelled terribly. Your speechbubbles are really nice, but what you put in them, and where you put it, is ugly. Don't suffocate your words; give them room to breathe. I would also recommend that you don't use smilies, such as the "T_T" you utlilized in Episode 9, because it's unprofessional, and isn't actually text. Your character wasn't saying "T_T", was she?

Your edited sprites, particularly for pokémon, appear well-made, but if compared to real sprites look odd. This is because of the way they were outlined. Certain parts of the sprite need dark outlines in order to give the impression of three-dimensionality.

For all of its many flaws, there's something I like about your comic... maybe it's the way it looks on occasion, despite the fact that the words are pretty vapid... I can't really put my finger on it...

-blueguy

 

[zuloon]

This comic rox0rz!
I'm serious. I love all the pokemon so far, and the starting town is actually interesting. Unlike stupid Kanto starts.

 

[Momiji]

Since you don't seem to have anyone giving you a competent review, I thought I'd do you the favor...

"Phampy"...? "Phampy"?! *ahem* It's phanpy, I believe. Seawolf? Come on, I'm sure you can do better than that. Names for official pokémon aren't so glaringly obvious, are they?

Your dialogue is really badly pieced together, and sounds awkward... and what further complicates it is that it's spelled terribly. Your speechbubbles are really nice, but what you put in them, and where you put it, is ugly. Don't suffocate your words; give them room to breathe. I would also recommend that you don't use smilies, such as the "T_T" you utlilized in Episode 9, because it's unprofessional, and isn't actually text. Your character wasn't saying "T_T", was she?

Your edited sprites, particularly for pokémon, appear well-made, but if compared to real sprites look odd. This is because of the way they were outlined. Certain parts of the sprite need dark outlines in order to give the impression of three-dimensionality.

For all of its many flaws, there's something I like about your comic... maybe it's the way it looks on occasion, despite the fact that the words are pretty vapid... I can't really put my finger on it...

-blueguy

Ok so I need to work on:

1) Dialouge
2) Smilies (Which I don't know if I don't want to use. Despite you saying their "unprofessional" I like 'em. But I can try to use less of them)
3) Pokemon Shading and Names (Which I agree with. But Sewolf was all I could think of )

And I guess I can start to make the characters talk more "human" if you know what I mean. B/c I do understand that their dialouge is "rushed" in the sence that they say what needs to be said to simply get to the next point. So I'll try to work on that for the next few episodes, hopefully it'll get better.

PS: YAY! At least most of you like it despite its "flaws". So for you guys I promise to fix it and make it better

 

[magmaman]

This is the best comic ever

 

[Celeste]

Just wondering when are you going to come out with another part to your comic? because I think this is a very good comic and probably the only one I actually like.

 

[Russian May]

OMG! Super!

 

[Pokefan26]

Everything is good. But you need to give the characters more emotions than just giving them the regular face they had.

 

[blueguy]

Would you all stop posting already?! >_< If you're curious as to whether or not Momiji will update perhaps you should send him a PM instead of continuing to ask with one-liners!