A little help please..can someone rate my team...=p

[Crypted Wolf]

ok this my team and it terribly weak...well...(im kinda exzatrating)
scyptile@leftovers
Trait;overgrown
Nature:modest
-tunderpunch
-leafblade
-crunch
-protect\toxic\hp(ice\fire)

Frealigatr@lum berry
Trait:torent
Nature:relaxed(dont laugh at this nature it take advantave of its defence)
-rockslide\
-icebeam\sward dance
-hydropump
-brick break\crunch

slaking@<~~~not sure mabye c band or lechi berry?help!!
Trait:u know this..
Nature:adamant
-hyperbeam
-slack off
-shadowball
-bulk up

skarmory@shell bell\leftovers\lechi berry
Trait:sturdy
Nature:impish
-drillpeck
-spikes
-steelwing\toxic
-agility\roar

salamance@leftoves\lechi or salac berry(mixed sweaper)
Trait:imitate
Nature:brave\lonely\mild
-dragondance
-rockslide\return\bodyslam
-flametrower\hydropump
-dragonclaw\crunch

sugest better pokemon too please =)
pokemon im think about:
medagross(brave\ardmant)
heracross\sizor(aradmant\jolly\careful=sizor,impish=heracross)
tyranatar(aradmat\quiet)
dragonite(lonely\naugnty\mild)(not using a dragondancer i allready got a salamance and its not truely physical sugest more special stuff plz)
latios\latias(modest\clam){i got a clam latios modest latias} i know its messed up...
charazriad(lonely\mild)
kyogore{gentle<~~i tryed to get modest =( ... }(will not use much)

 

[Sc1z0r PwN0rZ]

ok this my team and it terribly weak...well...(im kinda exzatrating)
scyptile@leftovers
Trait;overgrown
Nature:modest
-tunderpunch
-leafblade
-Leech Seed
-Substitute

Frealigatr@lum berry
Trait:torent
Nature:relaxed(dont laugh at this nature it take advantave of its defence)
- rockslide
- icebeam
- hydropump
- Swords Dance

slaking@<~~~not sure mabye c band or lechi berry?help!!
Trait:u know this..
Nature:adamant
- Earthquake
- Fire Blast
-shadowball
- Return / Body Slam

skarmory@shell bell\leftovers\lechi berry
Trait:sturdy
Nature:impish
-drillpeck
-spikes
-Rest
-roar

salamance@leftoves\lechi or salac berry(mixed sweaper)
Trait:imitate
Nature:brave\lonely\mild
-dragondance
-rockslide
-hydropump
-Earthquake

Go with Kyogre :
thunder
Calm mind
Surf/Hydro Pump
Substitute/Ice Beam/Rest

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10charlimit

 

[Crypted Wolf]

ok thank you but are the natures ok and are the fine?i have no idea about evs so dont put that.i alsmot dont want to over use leftovers and lechi berry

 

[magnemiteZ]

ok this my team and it terribly weak...well...(im kinda exzatrating)
scyptile@leftovers
Trait;overgrown
Nature:modest
-thunder punch
-leafblade
-crunch
-Dragon Claw
Or the subseeding one.

Frealigatr@ Leftovers
Trait:torent
Nature:relaxed(dont laugh at this nature it take advantave of its defence) If you don't want speed, ok I guess... ._.
-EQ
-swords dance
-hydropump
-brick break\Rockslide

slaking@ Choice Band
Trait:u know this...
Nature:adamant
-Return
-Brick Break/Aerial Ace (If you are scared of Fighting types)
-shadowball
-EQ

skarmory@ Leftovers
Trait:sturdy
Nature:impish
-drillpeck/Steel Wing
-spikes
-Rest
-roar/Whirlwind

salamance@leftoves\lechi or salac berry(mixed sweaper)
Trait:imitate
Nature:brave\lonely\mild
-dragondance
-rockslide
-EQ
-Aerial Ace
This team is seriously Bolt-Beam weak! 4 of the pokes are killed by it!

sugest better pokemon too please =) Though this isn't "Give me good Pokemon"...

metagross@ Leftovers
Adamant Nature
-Agility
-EQ
-Meteor Mash
-Shadow Ball/Explosion

heracross@ Salac Berry
Adamant Nature
-Endure
-Reversal
-Rock Slide
-Megahorn

scizor@ Leftovers/Salac Berry
Adamant Nature
-Agility/Swords Dance
-Substitute
-Silver Wind
-Baton Pass

tyranatar@ Leftovers
Adamant Nature
-Dragon Dance
-EQ
-Rock Slide
-Return/Aerial Ace if you are scared of Fighting types

dragonite@ Leftovers
Mild if you want more special
-Fire Blast/Thunder Bolt
-Dragon Claw/Ice Beam
-Substitute
-Focus Punch

latios\latias@ Soul Dew
Modest/Whatever you have
-Ice Beam
-Thunderbolt
-Psychic
-Calm Mind

charazriad(lonely\mild)<-- Just no

kyogore{gentle<~~i tryed to get modest =( ... }(will not use much) <-- can no longer be arsed.

...Quote says it all really

 

[[Kingdra]]

Your teams fine

 

[Crypted Wolf]

thx guys can anyone tell me what should i replace for slakng perhaps blot-beam defence(fighting master's advice) snorlax,milotic, joltion or even lanturn(i dont like lanturn but it the best chosie)

 

[Slasher]

ok this my team and it terribly weak...well...(im kinda exzatrating)
scyptile@leftovers
Trait;overgrown
Nature:modest
-(any move besides thunder punch thats stronger)
-leafblade
-crunch
-protect

Frealigatr@lum berry
Trait:torent
Nature:relaxed(it's fine)
-rockslide
-icebeam
-hydropump
-crunch

slaking@FocusBand
Trait:idk
Nature:adamant
-hyperbeam
-slack off
-shadowball
-yawn

skarmory@leftovers
Trait:sturdy
Nature:impish
-drillpeck
-spikes
-toxic
-roar

salamance@leftovers
Trait:imitate
Nature:brave
-dragondance
-fireblast
-hydropump
-crunch

Heracross@FocusBand/ChoieBand(if you're gonna use only Megahorn)
Trait:idk
Natureany)
-Megahorn
-Bulkup
-(any other move)
-(any other move)
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[DragonDance]

lol focus band.
lol yawn slaking.

 

[Freakshow]

ok this my team and it terribly weak...well...(im kinda exzatrating)
scyptile@leftovers
Trait;overgrown
Nature:modest
-(any move besides thunder punch thats stronger)
-leafblade
-crunch
-protect

Frealigatr@lum berry
Trait:torent
Nature:relaxed(it's fine)
-rockslide
-icebeam
-hydropump
-crunch

slaking@FocusBand
Trait:idk
Nature:adamant
-hyperbeam
-slack off
-shadowball
-yawn

skarmory@leftovers
Trait:sturdy
Nature:impish
-drillpeck
-spikes
-toxic
-roar

salamance@leftovers
Trait:imitate
Nature:brave
-dragondance
-fireblast
-hydropump
-crunch

Heracross@FocusBand/ChoieBand(if you're gonna use only Megahorn)
Trait:idk
Natureany)
-Megahorn
-Bulkup
-(any other move)
-(any other move)
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please don't rate if you don't know what you are talking about

 

[Crypted Wolf]

rofl! whats the point of putting drgon dance if not going to put a phicial move.
besises i dont have another dragonclaw so tunderpunch is the only other choise i got for scyptile.salamance also needs stab.

 

[snorlax]

i dont know if that kids post was worth rolling on the floor laughing

i thought it was fuuny only because it was sad