A new pokemon fic

[Antarctica]

Hello everyone who is reading this, I came up with a new pokemon fic, I call it, "A fossil's quest". It starts off with the two Kanto prehistoric pokemon, Omanyte and Kabuto. They come off on an island to an organization with pokemon who came to train and live there (except for the legendaries). They're eniemes are the two Hoenn region prehistoric pokemon, Lileep and Anorith. There is also a facility similar to the Pokemon League but it has pokemon instead of humans. They must beat the strongest pokemon (after they reach their final state, Omastar and Kabutops) to become one of the world's strongest pokemon yet! Can they do it? Oh yes one more thing, do you want to see Omastar and Kabutops battle Cradily and Armaldo in a might be violent fight? You'll see when I go make the rest of the chapters to my story. So...Who do you think will win? Ha! Ha! I'm not telling you! You'll have to figure it out yourself or you can read and find out. Anyways, someone reply to this. And I'm gonna ask some questions so I hope you guys feel nice and talkative. Bye now.

 

[CHeSHiRe-CaT]

Hmm...I'm not sure about that... I mean, it's original, but it's usually traditional for the "gym" style quests to be left to OT fics. I'm not saying you should make an OT fic, but Pokémon battling Pokémon in the gym sort of way in facilities just weirds me out a bit Instead of facilities that are similar to gyms and the Indigo Plateau, I'd suggest maybe taking a more "natural" approach.

Say that there's a sort of "guardian" for each village/town/certain place, and they could go on a quest to defeat each one on the island until they reach the head honcho. Just a suggestion; this plot does sound good. It's just the Pokémon-being-too-much-like-humans thing I'm not too sure about. I'd try it if you think you could pull it off.

 

[Antarctica]

You know...That's sort of one of the things thats came to my mind when I came up with this story. I will do that. The part of what you said about a guardian for each village. Thats what I'll do! Thanks!

 

[CHeSHiRe-CaT]

You're welcome ^^ And I'm sure there's many others who would suggest some things to you. One question crossed my mind, though: how were the prehistoric Pokémon able to make their appearances? I mean, according to the games/anime, most of them come from fossils, or they've been slumbering somewhere for a long time. How are you going to bring them into this new world (unless these are the prehistoric times)?

 

[Antarctica]

Because if you've seen the episode "Attack of the Prehistoric Pokemon" you would know that they are still existing today. You get them as fossils in the game. If you've seen the episodes you will know that they are not fossils, they are still alive.