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A New Trainer in Hoen

T

Tenshi

Guest
A New Star in Hoenn

A new trainer has begun her journey in Hoenn. This comic was hand drawn by the author herself. Hope everyone could enjoy this.

Rate: PG-13

Volume 1

Act 1
Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
Page 7
Page 8
Page 9
Page 10


Act 2
Page 11
Page 12
Page 13
Page 14
Page 15
Page 16
Page 17
Page 18
Page 19
Page 20
Page 21
Page 22


Act 3
Page 23
Page 24
Page 25
Page 26
Page 27
Page 28
Page 29
Page 30
Competition
Page 31


Note : From here on, it's all inked ^^ (And better drawings)
Act 4
Page 32
Page 33
Page 34
Page 35
Page 36
Page 37
Page 38
Page 39
Page 40 BONUS !




Volume 2 (NEW)

Act 5
Page 41
Page 42
Page 43
Page 44
Page 45
Page 46
Page 47 NEW
Page 48 NEW







Tenshi's Favourite scenes
Cover (NEW) I adore my NEW Cover ^^ *hugs*
Page 5 Polly goes Satr Wars ^^
Page 12 Ayumi's mum is evil. he he......
Page 17Shabu looses temper ^^
Page 18Shabu can really run !!
Page 20Kane's Shabu lol
Page 28Cheese........
Page 29Kate's a phyco
Page 30Kate's expresion of despair and revenge......
Page 33My First Cliffhanger



Votes for beauty contest (lol)Beauty Contest

Ayumi : 10

Voted by
1. Rinrei
2. Sequoia
3. Avegaille Spellman
4. Angel Torchic
5. Champ Kevin
6. Seviper
7. Rommie
8. Deoxys Trainer
9. Brinda
10. Zikachu

Kate : 5

Voted by
1. Mutanton 91
2. Hybrid Fusion Blaziken
3. Blaziken King
4. Kidodi-Sempai
5. Blaze Kick

Winner : Ayumi

Note : If I spelled any names wrong or you suddenly changed it. Please tell me

Tenshi's reason : I just wanna put something different up. It'll be fun ! ^_^


Rules for the competiton
1. Vote only once !

2. Choose the competitors wisely.



Random Art
Ayumi


FAQ

I can see there are many questions to be answered about this comic. So I though about putting up a FAQ section.

Q : Is Ayumi and Kane having a relationship going on ?
A : I'm not sure yet though. Depends on the readers on what sort of coupling they like. I'll think about it, and this answer will be revealed as the story goes on.

Q : What is Kane's pokemon ?
A : Kane's pokemon will be revealed slowly. He only uses them when it suits him.

Q : What is this manga based of ?
A : It's based off pokemon of course. Emerald version !!! lol. So there will be twists in the story.

Q : How old is Ayumi ?
A : She's 3 years and a half old.....in real life. But in this story, she's 13. So I'll be celebrating Ayumi's birthday and mine at 21 March ^^

Q : How was Ayumi created ?
A : Ayumi's birthday is the same day as Tenshi's ^^. The story....Tenshi's mother gave a piano musicbox to Tenshi. And for some reason, at that very moment, Catherine (Ayumi) poped into Tenshi's 20% brain. lol. Note : Catherine is Ayumi's real name and real self. To know more about Catherine. The link to my other manga 'Destiny's Hope' is in my sig.

Q : Ducks ?! What's with the ducks on Ayumi's PJs in Page 35 ?????
A : Ayumi's mum made that PJs for Ayumi. That PJ is pick with happy ducks printed on them ^^ ((sad really......)) . Actually, her evil mum forced Ayumi to take it on her journey. Poor girl, nothing goes right for her. Don't worry, Ayumi also has other PJs, which are 'normal' lol.


Thanks to Imageshack for hosting the images.
 
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Rinrei

<- Kawaii ^^
That was short. But yet it's sooo cool! I love your drawing style! I rated this thread as Excellent! Keep up the good work!
 
S

Sapphire

Guest
Cool XD I like your drawing style. I hope you update soon.
 
R

Rugaji

Guest
That was short. But yet it's sooo cool! I love your drawing style! I rated this thread as Excellent! Keep up the good work!

Well it is the first comic, so don't expect it to be long. But I really like your style, very good in my opinion. It takes some talent to draw like that. I can't wait for the next one. I can't really rate it yet because it has just started, but I like it nonetheless.
 
T

Tenshi

Guest
Thank you soooo much

Thank you for the reviews ! I promise I'll draw another one soon. Hope I could try on different pokemon though.....Anyway, thank you all so much. You guys make my day .
 
T

twystick

Guest
comments

its all sketchy. Ever heard of inking and photoshop?
 
T

Tenshi

Guest
Absol Trainer said:
Polly's sleeping pose on page to is very cute :p This whole comic is drawn in a fresh new way. Me likey!

Thanks. I'll try to make Polly cuter.

Oh, and I never heard of ink photoshop thingy. Well this comic was drawn by pencil all the way so it may be a little sketchy. PLease bare with it.
 

Sequoia

Well-Known Member
-_- hello? it was hand drawn dude...XDD new style for manga/comics, everyone's doing sprite comics...so, exept for the majority of writos in it, it's pretty good...keep up the great work!
 
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twystick

Guest
what i mean is, INK IT USING A PEN OR INK USING PHOTOSHOP!
you dont know what photoshop is? o_0
 

Sequoia

Well-Known Member
are you dissing me? cos if i didn't know what Photoshop was, would i be here? NO! so stop telling her to ink it, cos it's fine
 

Rinrei

<- Kawaii ^^
Well, it IS fine... Juts stop quarreling in Tenshi's thread... Oh ya, I hope you get you update soon, Tenshi!
 

Avegaille

ジャッジメントですの!
Okay, I finally managed to read your comic after getting back home and it was hillarious! You draw so well! I hope you'll continue it!
 
T

Tenshi

Guest
twystick said:
what i mean is, INK IT USING A PEN OR INK USING PHOTOSHOP!
you dont know what photoshop is? o_0

I know what's photoshop is. I just got kinda mixed up just now. Sorry.
Unfortunately,I don't have photoshop. But thanks for the idea.

And thanks to everyone who reviewed this little manga.
 

Avegaille

ジャッジメントですの!
Tenshi said:
I know what's photoshop is. I just got kinda mixed up just now. Sorry.
Unfortunately,I don't have photoshop. But thanks for the idea.

And thanks to everyone who reviewed this little manga.

You're welcome! The way you drew skitty is so cute and your main character, forgot her name sorry, is also funny when her mum is around! XP
 

Rinrei

<- Kawaii ^^
Cool! The new one is nice. You draw Prof. Birch well! Keep going!
 

Avegaille

ジャッジメントですの!
Rinrei said:
Cool! The new one is nice. You draw Prof. Birch well! Keep going!

Yes she does and now I'm viewing page four! Your sister can draw really quickly Rinrei! Aren't you lucky you're the first to see it?
 
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