A Normal Day in the Life of Steven - my 1st sprite comic

[RushingTwilight]

Yeah it's kinda bad. But I like it. I was listening to Eminem at the time.

 

[Capt.Miko]

It's good. The only crit I can think of is to use speech bubbles instead of text-under-panel.

EDIT: forget me suggesting speech bubbles (most comics look better with them) ... Your comic is one of the few that can get away with not using them. and for a first comic, this one is very good

 

[XxGreivousxX]

youre like based on speech bubbles, you say to have them everywhere

 

[Magical Trevor]

it's good. But it is a comic I like without speech bubbles. And that means it's a bit basic

 

[RushingTwilight]

Thanks. ^^ I don't really like using speech bubbles though, because it takes me forever to erase the background in it.

...hope that made sense.

 

[Magical Trevor]

Thanks. ^^ I don't really like using speech bubbles though, because it takes me forever to erase the background in it.

...hope that made sense.

Don't worry about erasing the backround when you go inyo shapoes the bottom one is the shape without a border just use that.

 

[Controller of Flames]

Make your right click button a different colour and set it to the 2nd button in the move option. Then paster the text, make a box, then fill the eintire canvas to the right click button then try to move i on the comic.

WHAOMYGOSH IT"S MAGIC!

 

[RushingTwilight]

Okay. Thanks!

 

[Pokefan26]

Pretty good. I suggest you make all the textboxes the same size.