A pretty picture I made

[DucksGoMooful]

Just something I made in Paint.
http://i43.*******.com/1zlgow1.jpg
Just a little Naruto/YouTube fandom. Tell me what you think please!

 

[~Light]

That's really bad you know.

 

[Ace of Shades]

Try anything but pretty.

not trying to be mean being honest

 

[DucksGoMooful]

Well, that's fine. It's the first one I've done, so I wanted to show some people
Thanks for the criticism. But could you describe what exactly isn't good?

 

[Ace of Shades]

the fact that the images are two totally different things

 

[DucksGoMooful]

That's what I was going for. If you don't know what the picture is about, I'll tell you.
There's a very popular YouTuber named Toby Turner, and the picture on the right is of him. On the left (the orange mask) is a masked character from Naruto named Tobi. Since their names are so similar and no one knows who is actually under the orange mask, I thought I'd make a funny picture of who it could be.

 

[Miltank Lover]

The lighting on the kid clashes with the anime style of Tobi, the transition isn't fluent and the angle is kinda off. Please don't consider these comments to be mean or cruel or anything, least I want to do is discourage people from making art What I can recommend in general is to experiment a lot and if the results aren't perfect in your opinion always ask yourself first: "what could I have done to make it even more awesome?"

 

[DucksGoMooful]

Thanks for your comment, I appreciate the help. Now that you mention it I do kind of see what you mean.