A Return To Kanto!

[Aqua_Charlie]

heres my comic, Return to kanto, it features some new areas and pokemon and its my first comic.
it willl be updated regularly so enjoy

CHAPTER 1 : episode 1

CHAPTER 1: episode 2

CHAPTER 1 : episode 3

CHAPTER 2 : episode 1

CHAPTER 2 : episode 2 (By the way natu is like pikachu (a super uber) )

 

[jhoto moto]

Thats helaireous "fungisnap" its too funny I am going to keep on reading.

 

[Aqua_Charlie]

i did try to make it a bit funny,but fungisnap was the only name i could think!
Do you have any ideas for new pokes ( FUSIONS )
Episode three is nearly ready

 

[Aqua_Charlie]

Episode three is ready and im developing chapter 2!

 

[Flaming Charizard]

ohh could you use this one it's name is Your Choice http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a261/hashivenu11/Whisvee.gif

 

[Aqua_Charlie]

Ok that will be in the next episode!
Thanks i will give credit
if you can make evolutions and a backsprite then it can be caught

 

[Mega]

It's good but beating the gymleader was too easy.

 

[Aqua_Charlie]

Thats why the badge was called USELESS and it does nothing, it was actually a fake gym set up by him to help him train more!

 

[Mega]

Thats why the badge was called USELESS and it does nothing, it was actually a fake gym set up by him to help him train more!

Oh I forgot that

 

[RandomCharizard]

Hmm
Suggestions:
Get talk bubbles,text in mid air is realy boring.
Try some original spriting,dont just use regular nintendo sprites edit some.
Try to find a good font one good website for fonts is www.dafont.com

Comments:
The comics realy Unoriginal,the story line is also Unoriginal. Dude come up with soemthing on your own. >_>;
Next the page lines are messed up try to make them straight.

That is all D:

 

[Flaming Charizard]

okay Give Me A Few Minutes

 

[Jindai]

you still need a fusion? look at my sig. but ask flaming charizard first, he made it for me.

 

[Pikachuboy]

a good and funny comic!

 

[Aqua_Charlie]

The comics realy Unoriginal,the story line is also Unoriginal. Dude come up with soemthing on your own. >_>;
Next the page lines are messed up try to make them straight.

what is that supposed to mean?#and thank you for all the comments!
;300; ;300;

 

[Flaming Charizard]

here's The Back Sprite Of Whisvee http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a261/hashivenu11/Whisveee.png
Evolutions On The Way

 

[Aqua_Charlie]

i just lost all of my files, fake pokemon for the comic, routes,towns,cities and gyms
This means i will no longer be able to continue this comic.

 

[Flaming Charizard]

That Sucks I Hate That

 

[RandomCharizard]

what is that supposed to mean?#and thank you for all the comments!
;300; ;300;

It means,most of the character names are from the ORIGINAL games.
The story line is also the same as many comics. "Badge Badge,quest,Badge,Bage," Get it?

 

[Aqua_Charlie]

If i can get this closed i will make a brand new comic, unique storyline,new pokemon,Different names, cause all of my other files corrupted>.>

 

[Flaming Charizard]

easy just go and delete your first post