Koridojo_Blaziken
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Daybreak (a PMD fanfic)--TITLE CHANGE!!
(EDIT: TITLE CHANGE!!)
Before we start this fanfic off:
I just want to make it clear that this was intended to be the first of a Mystery Dungeon trilogy. However, due to my getting the plot formed for the second story sooner, this one was posted later. Just so long as you all know that.
No, it's not some sappy romance or comedy. And yes, I know it's REAL original to have a fanfic based off of the PMD games (*sarcasm meter breaks from overload* O_O), but I just felt like it. Bear with me here, okay?
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"I'm sick and tired of this routine!" Darienne's father shouted. "It never changes! You keep PROMISING you'll 'fix things up tomorrow', but you keep blowing it off! Look at this!" He slapped the report card down inches away from a cowering Dai's face. "You call THIS acceptable?! With these grades, I'm surprised we even let you out of the house some nights!"
Dai sat with her head hung, thankful that her long bangs were falling over her face so they more or less hid her forming tears. She just wasn't naturally aggressive, and couldn't take anybody yelling at her. "Dad..." she began helplessly.
"Marcus, honey, please," her mom pleaded. "This is hard enough on her as is. Besides, you're just scaring Terrence--"
"Don't even give me any of that parental crap!" Dai's father whirled on her. "You know perfectly well what's going on! Failing classes! Shirking responsibilities! And you're still sticking up for her!" He turned his attention back to Dai. "I demand an explanation for this rubbish, young lady!"
"I-I don't have a reason, okay, dad??" Dai said, her voice wavering as she fought to stay composed. "I can't just magically snap my fingers and get one! I don't know why all this is happening, it just happened!"
"Don't even try to convince me with that," her father said in a menacingly low voice. "I'm not taking "I don't know". I asked for you to explain, and I want an answer!"
"Stop it!" Dai's mom shouted, her voice rising angrily. Across the table, Dai's younger brother Terrence started hiccuping through his scared tears and clutched his stuffed parrot, Cracker, even closer to himself.
"Darienne Phillips!" Dad shouted. "This is all your fault! Why can't you ever make a decision even roughly in the neighborhood of sane once in a while?!"
At this point, Dai's temper finally snapped. "Just shut up and get off my case!" she shouted, not even realizing what she was doing. "You think I don't already worry enough about this without your screaming at me all the time?! Just shut the heck up and leave me alone!" IT all became too much for her to even try to handle, and she jumped up from her seat and dashed up the stairs to her room, ignoring her father's demands to "get your sorry hide down here now!" Upon reaching her bedroom, she slammed the door shut and pushed the lock button in. There, she thought with cold satisfaction. That should get me some time. Acting automatically, she tossed a backpack onto her bed and started throwing stuff in. Clothes. Her wallet. A couple writing notebooks. One of the notebooks fell out and hit the floor, and a photograph fluttered out. Struggling to keep from bursting into tears, Dai bent down and gently picked up the picture, examining it as if it were an alien antique.
The picture had been taken when she, Mom, and Terrence had gone on a trip to SeaWorld. Dad had been away on a business trip--it was just the three of them, free to enjoy themselves as they wished. Dai's seven-year-old alter ego stood in front of a dolphin tank, grinning crazily and squeezing the life out of a plush Shamu toy. Saphire-blue eyes shone out from a freckle dotted face, and a stringy auburn braid hung out from beneath a pink PEEWEE SOCCER cap. This old girl, clad in shorts and a smiley-face tanktop, seemed like a total and complete stranger to Dai. Here she was, eight years later--the freckles had disappeared, her hair had darkened to an earthy brown, and her eyes had become a shade of gray, her outfits now ranging mostly around jeans and Asian tops. To Dai's displeasure, she was a bit short for 15 years old, referred to by most as a 'petite'. Nauseating.
And, to tell the truth, Dai hadn't been able to really smile like that for ages.
Dai sighed, gently tucking the photo and notebook into her backpack before zipping it shut and hoisting it onto her shoulder. She opened her window and lifted herself out by the branch of an oak tree growing next to their house. She clung to the branch, panting for breath (she'd been in gymnastics for a while, but that was years ago.), then resumed her silent but speedy climb down. Far above, she heard her father banging against her door. Too late for him to do anything--once on the ground, Dai started running. She had already decided where to go in case something like this happened.
Five minutes saw her at the doorstep of a tidy, single-story house. Taking a deep breath, Dai tapped on the door. Twice, pause, tap. Please, let Maggie be home... she prayed. Sure enough, the door clicked, and she found herself face to face with a black-haired teenager a few inches taller than her.
"A...Deedee?" Maggie brushed some hair out of her face, looking concerned. "Are you okay? What are you doing h....is everything okay?"
"Don't ask," Dai said miserably. "Any chance of spending the night here?"
"'Course, c'mon in." Maggie stood aside to let her in, and Dai hesitantly walked into the entranceway. The house seemed comfy and inviting...and yet, she was struck by how empty it seemed.
"Mom's still at work," Maggie explained. "Had to cram for a long-term project. C'mon, you can have the bed. I'll take the couch."
"Maggie...." Dai said, feeling self-conscious. "I...thanks for letting me do this. I mean, I know it's last minute and all, but....thanks for doing this."
"Eh, not a problemo, DaiBeta." Maggie grinned at the nickname she'd just invented. "What are buds for? You got pajamas?"
"Yep. Thanks, again."
- - - -
"So...shouldn't you at least tell your mom what you're doing?" Maggie said in a low voice. Around them, the gym echoed with whistles and basketballs thunking against the floor. "I mean, she must be worried to hec--"
"Nu-uh." Dai shook her head and stepped up to the free-throw line. "Dad would bully it out of her, then I'd be back home, and I'd REALLY be in for it. Thanks, but I'll take Door #3." She threw the basketball at the hoop, grimacing as it bounced crazily off of the rim and fell towards the two friends. Maggie caught it.
"But Darienne, that's not necessarily a bad thing," a classmate from the opposing team said. "He really does care for you--he probably just doesn't know the exact right way to show it...point on me." She snagged the ball from Maggie and landed a perfect hook shot in the basket.
"Score Blue Squad," the coach blared over his bullhorn. "Five to Six. Get your head in the game, Phillips! Doggson!"
"Yeah, right." Dai scoffed, trying without much sucess for a carefree tone. "If you knew him, you probably wouldn't--"
"Ya know what I think?" a boy piped up. "I think Dai should report him to the ASPCA. For emotional neglect."
"Dude, the ASPCA's supposed to prevent animal abuse, smart one," another kid called out. "Sheesh. Where were YOU when they were passing out the brains--"
"Oh, for Pete's sake! Will you people just freaking drop it, already?!" Dai angrily pitched the basketball at the backboard and whirled to face them. Normally she would've just weathered it all through, but she was starting to become oddly apprehensive... "This is my problem! Okay, so maybe I'm not dealing with it the best way possible, but that doesn't mean you all have to go--"
Pain suddenly exploded in her skull as the basketball ricocheted off the basket rim and slammed into her head. Dai immediately crumpled on the hardwood floor, gasping for breath.
"Omigod! Dai!"
"Is she okay??"
"She may have a concussion..."
"Sweet! Dude, you see any blood??"
"Ewww. You are seriously disturbed..."
"Dariene! How bad is it??" The coach's voice cut into her scrambled thoughts. "Scale of one to ten, how bad?"
"Uh.....what...?" Dai mumbled hazily. She was starting to feel spacey and lightheaded....
"Somebody take Phillips to the office," the coach instructed. "FAST."
"Me," Maggie immediately said.
"I'll go, too," a blond boy from Dai's class volunteered. Working together, the two friends looped Dai's arms over their shoulders and hobbled off to the office.
"Um...Dai? You're going to be okay, right?" Maggie asked, shakily trying for some faint humor. "You can't just go off to the hospital and leave me all alone..."
"...what...hero....can't see what...not strong enough..." Dai mumbled almost intelligibly. She felt almost as if she were floating through a green haze. Words were faintly floating to her...
Time has come...finally found our hero....
It is time for you to fulfill your role....
Save us...
Dai blacked out.
TBC......
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End of first chappie. What'd ya think? =3
(EDIT: TITLE CHANGE!!)
Before we start this fanfic off:
I just want to make it clear that this was intended to be the first of a Mystery Dungeon trilogy. However, due to my getting the plot formed for the second story sooner, this one was posted later. Just so long as you all know that.
No, it's not some sappy romance or comedy. And yes, I know it's REAL original to have a fanfic based off of the PMD games (*sarcasm meter breaks from overload* O_O), but I just felt like it. Bear with me here, okay?
- - - - - -
"I'm sick and tired of this routine!" Darienne's father shouted. "It never changes! You keep PROMISING you'll 'fix things up tomorrow', but you keep blowing it off! Look at this!" He slapped the report card down inches away from a cowering Dai's face. "You call THIS acceptable?! With these grades, I'm surprised we even let you out of the house some nights!"
Dai sat with her head hung, thankful that her long bangs were falling over her face so they more or less hid her forming tears. She just wasn't naturally aggressive, and couldn't take anybody yelling at her. "Dad..." she began helplessly.
"Marcus, honey, please," her mom pleaded. "This is hard enough on her as is. Besides, you're just scaring Terrence--"
"Don't even give me any of that parental crap!" Dai's father whirled on her. "You know perfectly well what's going on! Failing classes! Shirking responsibilities! And you're still sticking up for her!" He turned his attention back to Dai. "I demand an explanation for this rubbish, young lady!"
"I-I don't have a reason, okay, dad??" Dai said, her voice wavering as she fought to stay composed. "I can't just magically snap my fingers and get one! I don't know why all this is happening, it just happened!"
"Don't even try to convince me with that," her father said in a menacingly low voice. "I'm not taking "I don't know". I asked for you to explain, and I want an answer!"
"Stop it!" Dai's mom shouted, her voice rising angrily. Across the table, Dai's younger brother Terrence started hiccuping through his scared tears and clutched his stuffed parrot, Cracker, even closer to himself.
"Darienne Phillips!" Dad shouted. "This is all your fault! Why can't you ever make a decision even roughly in the neighborhood of sane once in a while?!"
At this point, Dai's temper finally snapped. "Just shut up and get off my case!" she shouted, not even realizing what she was doing. "You think I don't already worry enough about this without your screaming at me all the time?! Just shut the heck up and leave me alone!" IT all became too much for her to even try to handle, and she jumped up from her seat and dashed up the stairs to her room, ignoring her father's demands to "get your sorry hide down here now!" Upon reaching her bedroom, she slammed the door shut and pushed the lock button in. There, she thought with cold satisfaction. That should get me some time. Acting automatically, she tossed a backpack onto her bed and started throwing stuff in. Clothes. Her wallet. A couple writing notebooks. One of the notebooks fell out and hit the floor, and a photograph fluttered out. Struggling to keep from bursting into tears, Dai bent down and gently picked up the picture, examining it as if it were an alien antique.
The picture had been taken when she, Mom, and Terrence had gone on a trip to SeaWorld. Dad had been away on a business trip--it was just the three of them, free to enjoy themselves as they wished. Dai's seven-year-old alter ego stood in front of a dolphin tank, grinning crazily and squeezing the life out of a plush Shamu toy. Saphire-blue eyes shone out from a freckle dotted face, and a stringy auburn braid hung out from beneath a pink PEEWEE SOCCER cap. This old girl, clad in shorts and a smiley-face tanktop, seemed like a total and complete stranger to Dai. Here she was, eight years later--the freckles had disappeared, her hair had darkened to an earthy brown, and her eyes had become a shade of gray, her outfits now ranging mostly around jeans and Asian tops. To Dai's displeasure, she was a bit short for 15 years old, referred to by most as a 'petite'. Nauseating.
And, to tell the truth, Dai hadn't been able to really smile like that for ages.
Dai sighed, gently tucking the photo and notebook into her backpack before zipping it shut and hoisting it onto her shoulder. She opened her window and lifted herself out by the branch of an oak tree growing next to their house. She clung to the branch, panting for breath (she'd been in gymnastics for a while, but that was years ago.), then resumed her silent but speedy climb down. Far above, she heard her father banging against her door. Too late for him to do anything--once on the ground, Dai started running. She had already decided where to go in case something like this happened.
Five minutes saw her at the doorstep of a tidy, single-story house. Taking a deep breath, Dai tapped on the door. Twice, pause, tap. Please, let Maggie be home... she prayed. Sure enough, the door clicked, and she found herself face to face with a black-haired teenager a few inches taller than her.
"A...Deedee?" Maggie brushed some hair out of her face, looking concerned. "Are you okay? What are you doing h....is everything okay?"
"Don't ask," Dai said miserably. "Any chance of spending the night here?"
"'Course, c'mon in." Maggie stood aside to let her in, and Dai hesitantly walked into the entranceway. The house seemed comfy and inviting...and yet, she was struck by how empty it seemed.
"Mom's still at work," Maggie explained. "Had to cram for a long-term project. C'mon, you can have the bed. I'll take the couch."
"Maggie...." Dai said, feeling self-conscious. "I...thanks for letting me do this. I mean, I know it's last minute and all, but....thanks for doing this."
"Eh, not a problemo, DaiBeta." Maggie grinned at the nickname she'd just invented. "What are buds for? You got pajamas?"
"Yep. Thanks, again."
- - - -
"So...shouldn't you at least tell your mom what you're doing?" Maggie said in a low voice. Around them, the gym echoed with whistles and basketballs thunking against the floor. "I mean, she must be worried to hec--"
"Nu-uh." Dai shook her head and stepped up to the free-throw line. "Dad would bully it out of her, then I'd be back home, and I'd REALLY be in for it. Thanks, but I'll take Door #3." She threw the basketball at the hoop, grimacing as it bounced crazily off of the rim and fell towards the two friends. Maggie caught it.
"But Darienne, that's not necessarily a bad thing," a classmate from the opposing team said. "He really does care for you--he probably just doesn't know the exact right way to show it...point on me." She snagged the ball from Maggie and landed a perfect hook shot in the basket.
"Score Blue Squad," the coach blared over his bullhorn. "Five to Six. Get your head in the game, Phillips! Doggson!"
"Yeah, right." Dai scoffed, trying without much sucess for a carefree tone. "If you knew him, you probably wouldn't--"
"Ya know what I think?" a boy piped up. "I think Dai should report him to the ASPCA. For emotional neglect."
"Dude, the ASPCA's supposed to prevent animal abuse, smart one," another kid called out. "Sheesh. Where were YOU when they were passing out the brains--"
"Oh, for Pete's sake! Will you people just freaking drop it, already?!" Dai angrily pitched the basketball at the backboard and whirled to face them. Normally she would've just weathered it all through, but she was starting to become oddly apprehensive... "This is my problem! Okay, so maybe I'm not dealing with it the best way possible, but that doesn't mean you all have to go--"
Pain suddenly exploded in her skull as the basketball ricocheted off the basket rim and slammed into her head. Dai immediately crumpled on the hardwood floor, gasping for breath.
"Omigod! Dai!"
"Is she okay??"
"She may have a concussion..."
"Sweet! Dude, you see any blood??"
"Ewww. You are seriously disturbed..."
"Dariene! How bad is it??" The coach's voice cut into her scrambled thoughts. "Scale of one to ten, how bad?"
"Uh.....what...?" Dai mumbled hazily. She was starting to feel spacey and lightheaded....
"Somebody take Phillips to the office," the coach instructed. "FAST."
"Me," Maggie immediately said.
"I'll go, too," a blond boy from Dai's class volunteered. Working together, the two friends looped Dai's arms over their shoulders and hobbled off to the office.
"Um...Dai? You're going to be okay, right?" Maggie asked, shakily trying for some faint humor. "You can't just go off to the hospital and leave me all alone..."
"...what...hero....can't see what...not strong enough..." Dai mumbled almost intelligibly. She felt almost as if she were floating through a green haze. Words were faintly floating to her...
Time has come...finally found our hero....
It is time for you to fulfill your role....
Save us...
Dai blacked out.
TBC......
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End of first chappie. What'd ya think? =3
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