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A Song I wrote

Evan Turner

You are my only fear
I was just sitting at home, so I decided to write a song. It's called Corpse Bride.

Long ago
You left me for dead
The one who saved my life
Was the one who caused my fall

Your voice
The most beautiful sound I’ve heard
Is the cause of all this pain
The pain that caused my final fall

Why did you have to go?
Why did you have to take me down?
Why couldn’t you just let me be?
I see it now

Long before the time of your death
I had the strength to fall and bring myself back up
But now after you’re big strike
You bring it all back
And though my heart’s not beating
It never stopped bleeding
You cause all this pain
My Corpse Bride

Your eyes, so full of hope
Turned to hate, and brought the pain too fast
You promised me you’d stay
A promise never kept

Please let it stop
Please let me drop
Please just let me leave
The feeling that love once was weaved
By the angels who felt the heave of your voice inside my heart that never wants to go away
Please just let me go!

In time before your fall
We lived in joy that stalled
The future that left me to drown
In the rain that brought me pain
I want to let you go
But it just won’ go away
Cuz when your heart stopped beating
It also stopped bleeding
Unlike the heart that I still carry on for the one I loved
You’re the dove I see in my dreams, the pain of all my scenes
The very hurt you sold, the very dirt you told
That you would come back for me

So please, just let me leave
I don’t want to go one like this, with the pain you had me bear
Like a fable with no cause
Like a devil’s only child.

Oh how the pain hurts
I’ll remember you the most
As the catalyst
Of everything that hurts
Remember you’re the one
Who scarred me for life
Just listen one more time
For old time’s sake
Please don’t leave…

R&R please.

 

icemew

Banned
Wow. Depressing but really good. The only thing I'd suggest is maybe making the stanzas a bit more regular in length. The ending was great, the way it shifts from leave to don't leave, really creepy.
 
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