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A Troubling Trip: A Sprite Comic

.:Tremolo:.

POKEMON CRYSTAL PWNS
Here's my new comic, don't worry, there won't be any lame backrounds after the first comic. Here it is!

Comic 1

Newest Comic:

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blueguy

used Metronome!
It didn't really make any sense...

My question is this: why do you keep on starting comics you never continue? Stick with one and follow through with it.
 
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! IT'S SO CONFUSING! You keep on starting new comics and never continue! JUST STICK TO ONE! Anyway, that first episode was weird.
 
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Euphoria

Guest
Well, it's alright, but it doesn't make sense. Why does he wish his life was different? There is no indication of a plot. And the actions seemed a bit.. 'rushed'.
Speech bubbles aren't that bad, and the layout is neat.
I would work on making the comic a bit longer, or using statements that make the story a bit more clear.
^^
 
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