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Hello, this is waterdragon. On FanFiction.net, I am known as AeroGreymon8.0, so some of you people might recognize this fic. Well, here's to a not-so brand new fic.
Disclaimer: I do not own Pokemon or any related affiliations.
This is my first Pokemon fic. Please be subtle, but firm in your comments. I want an honest review, but please don’t make it a flame.
“Well Pikachu, it’s off to a new league!” A Trainer dressed in a blue vest, black shirt, and blue jeans had said.
“Pikaaaaa” Pikachu yawned. The ferry was nearing the island of Marita. Ash could see many other islands surrounding it. There was even a large tower on of the southeastern islands. The ferry just whizzed past the main part of the main island and circled around the northern island and docked on the northeastern coast.
Rose Town was a small port with few houses. The largest structure in the town was a medium-sized house with a glass dome in the backyard.
“Well, Professor Oak said to find Professor Willow’s laboratory. So, where is it?” Ash asked.
“How am I supposed to know?” May questioned irritably
“Maybe it’s up your butt and around the corner,” Brendan sneered.
“Shove it, big mouth!” May said. She then took out a hammer and bopped Brendan on his head. The force of the stike was so great that Brendan was driven into the ground.
“Owwwwwww!” Brendan winced.
“Come on, guys. We need to find his laboratory.” Ash ordered.
The threesome (and Pikachu) strolled around the town, trying to find the laboratory. They then decided that the structure with the glass dome was the most laboratory-like and approached it.
“Hey look! There it is!” Brendan called.
A figure in a hat turned around and revealed herself to be Professor Willow. Of course, our heroes didn’t know that.
“Hello. Can I help you?” she asked.
“Can you point us in the direction of Professor Willow?” May asked.
“Sure. You are looking right at her.” The Professor said.
May, Ash, and Brendan all had their jaws on the ground and sweat drops on their foreheads.
“Come on. Let me show you around the Pokemon Garden,” Prof. Willow said.
Before they walked in, however, Prof. Willow took their Pokedexes and upgraded them in her supercomputer.
“Here you go. They even now have the Poke Finder program. It will help you find where a Pokemon is located,” Prof. Willow explained.
The group started to hike through the garden and saw a number of Pokemon, including a Silcoon, Electrike, Grovyle, and a Lapras in the middle of a lake. As they walked toward the warehouse, a girl in a black skirt with a pair of shorts and a light-blue and midnight-blue shirt just ran up to her.
“Excuse me! Professor Willow, I’m ready for my first Pokemon,” she said excitedly.
“Of course. Would you like to see the new Pokemon you three?” Prof. Willow asked Ash and the other two.
“Sure,” they said in unison.
The group walked into the warehouse, but they didn’t notice the three shadowy figures in the treetops.
“Jessie, can we get out of this tree now?” one of them complained.
“Grrrr. Fine!” Jessie said in disgust.
“Hey, did you twos hear what that beautiful professor just said?” a cat-like Pokemon asked. “She said she has new Pokemon in there.”
“So?” Jessie and James said in confusion.
“Imagine the Boss waking up with nothing to brighten his day. Then when he sees the Pokemon, he’ll give a smile and say, ‘This is a fantastic gift. I’ll give Meowth and his two useless friends a promotion,’” Meowth said.
“What do you mean by useless?” Jessie asked angrily. She then got out a fan and slapped him silly with it.
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Meanwhile…………………………………………………………
Our heroes were standing in front of a circular table with three Poke Balls on it. A gigantic screen was right behind it.
“Here are the Pokemon you can choose from, Linda. Leoflame,” a picture of a lion cub with a flame burning at the tip of its tail appeared on the screen. “Ocealine,” a picture of a blue cat with a raindrop made of a blue crystalline material on its tail appeared on the screen. “And Felivine,” a picture of a green cat with a thorny vine for a tail appeared on the screen.
“Wow! Those are all so cool!” May said in amazement.
Linda put her hand on her forehead and thought, ‘Let’s see. I want a Fire-type, but the second gym would give me a few problems. So I’ll pick…’ She then said, “I have made my decision. I will choose Felivine.”
“Okay then, here you go,” Prof. Willow was about to give the Poke Ball, Pokedex, Poke Phone, and Pokemon Laptop to Linda, but a blur just flew by and snatched the stuff out of her hand. “What..?”
“Hahahahaha!”
“Prepare for trouble!”
“Make it Double!”
“To protect the world from devastation!”
“To unite all peoples in our nation!”
“To denounce the evils of truth and love!”
“To extend our reach to the stars above!”
“Jessie!”
“James!” ”Team Rocket blast off at the speed of light!”
“Surrender now, or prepare to fight!”
“Meowth! That’s right!”
“Not you three again!” Ash shouted in anger.
“Team Rocket!” Brendan and May interjected.
“Oh no, not Team Rocket!” Linda and Prof. Willow said simultaneously.
“They aren’t dressed like Team Rocket members. Look at that hair. It’s so bad and out of shape. That Meowth needs to take a bath; I mean look at all that dirt in his fur!” Linda said.
“HEY!” Team Rocket said with offended voices.
“Enough chit-chat! Go Dustox! Use Psybeam!” Jessie commanded.
A beam of colorful energy was fired toward Linda.
“Go Swampert!” Brendan shouted. “Use Hydro Pump!” A jet of water was fired at high pressure and knocked the stuff out of Dustox’s limbs.
“Pikachu, use Thunder!” Ash commanded. A golden bolt of electricity hit Team Rocket, causing them to blast off.
“Looks like Team Rocket’s blasting off again!” they shouted.
“Here is your stuff, Linda,” Brendan said.
“Thanks!” Linda replied. She then took her stuff politely. “Come on out, Felivine!” Felivine popped out of her Poke Ball.
“Feeeellll,” Felivine yawned and stretched out on the floor. Ash and Brendan sweat dropped while May and Linda were saying,
“Awwww, that’s so cute!”
Just then, a boy the same age as Linda came down and said, “Mom, the Phanpy are fighting again!”
“Not again! Hold on, I’ll be right back!” Prof. Willow said.
“So,” the boy said, “you got yourself a Pokemon, huh?”
“Yeah, Matt, I did. What are you going to do about it?” Linda asked angrily.
“How about a battle?” Matt asked.
“Fine by me! Felivine, are you ready to battle?” Linda said. She turned around and saw that Felivine was licking the base of her tail.
Matt rolled his eyes and said, “Let’s take it outside!”
The group walked outside into the Pokemon Garden and started the battle.
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Battle Stats: Linda’s Felivine vs. Matt’s Leoflame
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“Leoflame, I choose you!” Matt cried. He threw a white Poke Ball with a red line going through the middle, a Premiere Ball.
“Leo,” the Lion Cub Pokemon roared cutely.
“Leoflame, use Ember!” Matt commanded. Leoflame breathed a blazing cluster of flames toward Felivine.
“Felivine, block it with Bullet Seed!” Linda ordered. A group of seeds negated the embers. Felivine fired another Bullet Seed and hit Leoflame in the face. “Now, use Vine Whip!” Felivine’s tail extended and smacked Leoflame in the head.
“Leoflame, use your Scratch attack!” Matt said. Leoflame extended his claws and slashed Felivine across the chest. “Now, use Bite!” Leoflame then bit Felivine and, without needing orders from Matt, used Ember.
“Felivine, finish it off! Use Leech Seed/ Vine Whip combo!” Linda ordered. A seed came out of the flower at the end of Felivine’s tail. Thick vines grew out of the seed and constricted Leoflame as Felivine whacked him with her tail.
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Battle Condition: Felivine: 5 HP
Leoflame: FAINTED
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“Well, Linda, I’m impressed. You beat me!” Matt said. “On your first battle, too!”
“Thanks, I guess,” Linda replied. They shook hands.
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Weeeeeeeellllllllllll, I think this is a good place to leave a cliffy.
In the next chapter...
Ash, Brendan, and Linda get registered for the Pokemon while May gets a Contest Pass issued to her in Forest City’s Welcome Center.
Also…
Team Rocket interrupts Ash’s gym battle. What will happen.
Comment to find out.
Disclaimer: I do not own Pokemon or any related affiliations.
This is my first Pokemon fic. Please be subtle, but firm in your comments. I want an honest review, but please don’t make it a flame.
“Well Pikachu, it’s off to a new league!” A Trainer dressed in a blue vest, black shirt, and blue jeans had said.
“Pikaaaaa” Pikachu yawned. The ferry was nearing the island of Marita. Ash could see many other islands surrounding it. There was even a large tower on of the southeastern islands. The ferry just whizzed past the main part of the main island and circled around the northern island and docked on the northeastern coast.
Rose Town was a small port with few houses. The largest structure in the town was a medium-sized house with a glass dome in the backyard.
“Well, Professor Oak said to find Professor Willow’s laboratory. So, where is it?” Ash asked.
“How am I supposed to know?” May questioned irritably
“Maybe it’s up your butt and around the corner,” Brendan sneered.
“Shove it, big mouth!” May said. She then took out a hammer and bopped Brendan on his head. The force of the stike was so great that Brendan was driven into the ground.
“Owwwwwww!” Brendan winced.
“Come on, guys. We need to find his laboratory.” Ash ordered.
The threesome (and Pikachu) strolled around the town, trying to find the laboratory. They then decided that the structure with the glass dome was the most laboratory-like and approached it.
“Hey look! There it is!” Brendan called.
A figure in a hat turned around and revealed herself to be Professor Willow. Of course, our heroes didn’t know that.
“Hello. Can I help you?” she asked.
“Can you point us in the direction of Professor Willow?” May asked.
“Sure. You are looking right at her.” The Professor said.
May, Ash, and Brendan all had their jaws on the ground and sweat drops on their foreheads.
“Come on. Let me show you around the Pokemon Garden,” Prof. Willow said.
Before they walked in, however, Prof. Willow took their Pokedexes and upgraded them in her supercomputer.
“Here you go. They even now have the Poke Finder program. It will help you find where a Pokemon is located,” Prof. Willow explained.
The group started to hike through the garden and saw a number of Pokemon, including a Silcoon, Electrike, Grovyle, and a Lapras in the middle of a lake. As they walked toward the warehouse, a girl in a black skirt with a pair of shorts and a light-blue and midnight-blue shirt just ran up to her.
“Excuse me! Professor Willow, I’m ready for my first Pokemon,” she said excitedly.
“Of course. Would you like to see the new Pokemon you three?” Prof. Willow asked Ash and the other two.
“Sure,” they said in unison.
The group walked into the warehouse, but they didn’t notice the three shadowy figures in the treetops.
“Jessie, can we get out of this tree now?” one of them complained.
“Grrrr. Fine!” Jessie said in disgust.
“Hey, did you twos hear what that beautiful professor just said?” a cat-like Pokemon asked. “She said she has new Pokemon in there.”
“So?” Jessie and James said in confusion.
“Imagine the Boss waking up with nothing to brighten his day. Then when he sees the Pokemon, he’ll give a smile and say, ‘This is a fantastic gift. I’ll give Meowth and his two useless friends a promotion,’” Meowth said.
“What do you mean by useless?” Jessie asked angrily. She then got out a fan and slapped him silly with it.
-----------------------------------------------------
Meanwhile…………………………………………………………
Our heroes were standing in front of a circular table with three Poke Balls on it. A gigantic screen was right behind it.
“Here are the Pokemon you can choose from, Linda. Leoflame,” a picture of a lion cub with a flame burning at the tip of its tail appeared on the screen. “Ocealine,” a picture of a blue cat with a raindrop made of a blue crystalline material on its tail appeared on the screen. “And Felivine,” a picture of a green cat with a thorny vine for a tail appeared on the screen.
“Wow! Those are all so cool!” May said in amazement.
Linda put her hand on her forehead and thought, ‘Let’s see. I want a Fire-type, but the second gym would give me a few problems. So I’ll pick…’ She then said, “I have made my decision. I will choose Felivine.”
“Okay then, here you go,” Prof. Willow was about to give the Poke Ball, Pokedex, Poke Phone, and Pokemon Laptop to Linda, but a blur just flew by and snatched the stuff out of her hand. “What..?”
“Hahahahaha!”
“Prepare for trouble!”
“Make it Double!”
“To protect the world from devastation!”
“To unite all peoples in our nation!”
“To denounce the evils of truth and love!”
“To extend our reach to the stars above!”
“Jessie!”
“James!” ”Team Rocket blast off at the speed of light!”
“Surrender now, or prepare to fight!”
“Meowth! That’s right!”
“Not you three again!” Ash shouted in anger.
“Team Rocket!” Brendan and May interjected.
“Oh no, not Team Rocket!” Linda and Prof. Willow said simultaneously.
“They aren’t dressed like Team Rocket members. Look at that hair. It’s so bad and out of shape. That Meowth needs to take a bath; I mean look at all that dirt in his fur!” Linda said.
“HEY!” Team Rocket said with offended voices.
“Enough chit-chat! Go Dustox! Use Psybeam!” Jessie commanded.
A beam of colorful energy was fired toward Linda.
“Go Swampert!” Brendan shouted. “Use Hydro Pump!” A jet of water was fired at high pressure and knocked the stuff out of Dustox’s limbs.
“Pikachu, use Thunder!” Ash commanded. A golden bolt of electricity hit Team Rocket, causing them to blast off.
“Looks like Team Rocket’s blasting off again!” they shouted.
“Here is your stuff, Linda,” Brendan said.
“Thanks!” Linda replied. She then took her stuff politely. “Come on out, Felivine!” Felivine popped out of her Poke Ball.
“Feeeellll,” Felivine yawned and stretched out on the floor. Ash and Brendan sweat dropped while May and Linda were saying,
“Awwww, that’s so cute!”
Just then, a boy the same age as Linda came down and said, “Mom, the Phanpy are fighting again!”
“Not again! Hold on, I’ll be right back!” Prof. Willow said.
“So,” the boy said, “you got yourself a Pokemon, huh?”
“Yeah, Matt, I did. What are you going to do about it?” Linda asked angrily.
“How about a battle?” Matt asked.
“Fine by me! Felivine, are you ready to battle?” Linda said. She turned around and saw that Felivine was licking the base of her tail.
Matt rolled his eyes and said, “Let’s take it outside!”
The group walked outside into the Pokemon Garden and started the battle.
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Battle Stats: Linda’s Felivine vs. Matt’s Leoflame
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“Leoflame, I choose you!” Matt cried. He threw a white Poke Ball with a red line going through the middle, a Premiere Ball.
“Leo,” the Lion Cub Pokemon roared cutely.
“Leoflame, use Ember!” Matt commanded. Leoflame breathed a blazing cluster of flames toward Felivine.
“Felivine, block it with Bullet Seed!” Linda ordered. A group of seeds negated the embers. Felivine fired another Bullet Seed and hit Leoflame in the face. “Now, use Vine Whip!” Felivine’s tail extended and smacked Leoflame in the head.
“Leoflame, use your Scratch attack!” Matt said. Leoflame extended his claws and slashed Felivine across the chest. “Now, use Bite!” Leoflame then bit Felivine and, without needing orders from Matt, used Ember.
“Felivine, finish it off! Use Leech Seed/ Vine Whip combo!” Linda ordered. A seed came out of the flower at the end of Felivine’s tail. Thick vines grew out of the seed and constricted Leoflame as Felivine whacked him with her tail.
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Battle Condition: Felivine: 5 HP
Leoflame: FAINTED
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“Well, Linda, I’m impressed. You beat me!” Matt said. “On your first battle, too!”
“Thanks, I guess,” Linda replied. They shook hands.
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Weeeeeeeellllllllllll, I think this is a good place to leave a cliffy.
In the next chapter...
Ash, Brendan, and Linda get registered for the Pokemon while May gets a Contest Pass issued to her in Forest City’s Welcome Center.
Also…
Team Rocket interrupts Ash’s gym battle. What will happen.
Comment to find out.
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