Advance format YGO deck

[legendary_dude]

monsters: spells: Traps:
Ebon magician curran Ante Raigeki break
Black illusion ritural Spellbinding circle
Mine golem convulsion of nature Dust tornado
Twin headed behemoth Fissure Type 0 magic crusher
United resistance Mystical space typhoon Trap hole
Silpheed Remove trap Magic Jammer
Barrel dragon De spell Nutrien Z
Relinquished
Gagagigo
Archfiend soldier
Dark blade
Kiryu
Red eyes
Dark driceratops
Penguin soldier
Jerry beans man
chaos sorcerer
obnoxious celtic guard
Theban nightmare
Spear dragon
Gemini elf
Master kyonsee
Kabazauls
Adhensive explosive
silent magician LV.8
Kaiser seahorse
Drillroid
Blue eyes
Silent magician LV.4


please tell me if I need improvements. This is a beatdown deck.

 

[Judai Yuki]

Good god i'll do it later.

 

[Mikau]

Can you maybe put it in a readable format.

 

[Silver Arrow]

^What he said

Anyway, he has twenty nine monsters, seven spells and traps. Hmm... lets think... last time I checked Worlds End Deck, it was summat like 120 monsters or cards altogheter. A fourth of that is this guys monsters.

Okay, heres what you should do.
1. Take out all the weak/feeble monsters to make a monster lineup with a theme(eg. 17 dragons or monsters that support Blue eyes)
2. Have a look at RaikouRiders and the good peops in this place's deck and get some inspiration from them.
3. Get some good spells and traps that supports your theme(eg. Spiritual Wind Art - Miyabi for a WIND deck)

And that somes it up. Oh and make sure your deck has less than fifty cards, its the best.

 

[Mikau]

I see you haven't fixed up your writing/typing. Fix that then we will help you.

 

[yami_of_light]

id help if i could understand lolz