Adventures Of Samus Aran! And Dark Samus,

[Prime Wolf]

0.o Thats a long title.

Anyway, i have made a new comic, based around Smaus and Dark Samus (there froends) trying to get Meta Ridly to give them back a humiliating photo of Samus, but hwat else a long the way?

Comic 1 (The Picture!)
Comic 2 (Kraid let himself go!)
Comic 3 (Thats weird....)

Next comic coming soon

 

[Charizard Champion#06]

How is Samus friends with Dark Samus? They are mortal enemies! One thing in this comic that you can improve on is the writing. Add a few periods instead of commas between your sentences.

 

[Prime Wolf]

How is Samus friends with Dark Samus? They are mortal enemies! One thing in this comic that you can improve on is the writing. Add a few periods instead of commas between your sentences.

Its a comic, whats the point in making it identical to the game, its just an idea. And yeah i agree i need to work on the text, after i posted and checked the links were working i saw typos =/

 

[UltaFlame]

cool! i liked this comic! haha ridley is going to post that picture on a samus site! maybe! that was funny. i laughed my head off.

evrything i noticed was already posted...

 

[parasectdude]

It's okay, I suppose. I don't get the plot much, but still. The introduction was good, and it seems like it's going to be a humorous comic (a little like mine, spot the boasting there).

 

[Prime Wolf]

The plot is samus trying to retrieve the pic from Meta Ridly.

Comic 2 (Kraid let himself go!)

 

[UltaFlame]

hahaha funny. samus fought kraid on a pokemon battle scene.

 

[Charizard Champion#06]

And yeah i agree i need to work on the text, after i posted and checked the links were working i saw typos =/

I always check typos because I post. So that's why Kraid wasn't in Prime. Anyways I think the second one was a lot funnier.

 

[Prime Wolf]

Update

Comic 3 (Thats weird....)

And thanks for the comments everyone