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Agaki's Fakemon.

Agaki

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Here I shall put my fakemon. Pretty obvious eh? Anyway, lets start off:

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Gradion. Normal/Flying, similar to a Porygon 3, but it would be too much of a hassle to evolve it from a Porygon 2. So I assume it should evolve from a Porygon by level.

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Electel. Electric/Dragon, I suppose it could be like a more SP. Attack heavy Dratini.

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Electral. Electric/Dragon, SP. Attack heavy Dragonair? Evolution of Electel.

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Shuce. Bug/Rock, Baby form of Shuckle.

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Shuffort. Poison/Rock, Alternate evolution to Shuce.

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Musra. Grass, Baby form of Shroomish.

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Harkat. Dark/Water, Alternate evolution of Carvhana, more speedy and heavier SP. Attack than Sharpedo, can also learn a few poison moves.

I'll make more of these once I can think up some ideas :p
 

LannyZ4444

Well-Known Member
Nice. The first three lack some kind of shape or...I don't know.....something that makes them good. There is no form to "Porygon 3" and it seems smushed. The same can be said about Electel. You also seem to have trouble with your outlines. Notice how the gold and black conflict throughout the whole sprite. Try to fix that with either making certain outlines all black and certain ones all gold, or remove the black completely. You'll find it adds a nice effect, if that's what you want.

Moving on, Shuce and Shuffort are very clever. There is a black spot above shufforts head that I advise you to remove. It looks awkward. With these two, I will suggest for you to remove all black outlines and switch them with a dark color.

Musra and Harkat are by far your best. Shading is excelent, but the outline problem still remains. It is not as bad though. I personally don't enjoy the black outline in any sprite, but whatever floats your boat really.

Keep up the good work my friend! You look like you have what it takes to be a great spriter!
 
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