Albino Kirby's Adventures!

[Poseidon]

This is like my second comic, so strong critism is wanted. I want to make this better so yea.^^ This was also based on one of my older comics. Enjoy! Sorry, the episode 1-5 are in bmp the rest are in png images. Thanks for your cooperation. Also, I need more critism. Please post if you read, I'm not demanding you though. Critism is very much needed and wanted. I really need critism because I want to get better at this, so I need your posts.^^
Main Characters

Chapter 1:
01:The Note
02:The New Person
03:It is...
04.0:HI!
04.1:Not Again
05:Evil Begone
06:Armour
07:Chikara
08:Exit
09:Still Chubby...
Chapter 2:
10:Sun's Fiery
Specials:
01.0:First Fight
01.1:The Fight(Continued)
02.0:Enter Fatso Flamo
02.1:Enter Fatso Flamo(Continued)

Episode 10:Sun's Fiery

Changes have been made.
More soon.

Credits:
The Spriters Resource Where I got my Fire Emblem stuff to put into my comic and background. Also thanks for some of the Kirby base sprites, I edited them.
Also, thanks to all the people that read and posted.^^

 

[Chloemew4ever]

The panels are a little too small. That's all I can think of for now. x3

 

[Poseidon]

Oh. Okay. I'll see if I can fix that. Since this one was old and based on an old on the panels will be fixed soon. Also, is there an image hoster that won't shrink the image if its too big?

~Poseidon~

Edit:Next ones up.

 

[Chloemew4ever]

I think Imageshack's a good hoster. Also, you forgot the white background for the text on number five =3

 

[Poseidon]

I think Imageshack's a good hoster. Also, you forgot the white background for the text on number five =3

Yea, I know. The newer ones are going to fix that. Please bear.^^

~Poseidon~

 

[Dark Lucario]

This looks good, I'd like to see this comic progress. Good luck!

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

The fifth one needs speach bubbles.

 

[Poseidon]

The fifth one needs speach bubbles.

Yes. I know. Chloemew4ever pointed it out too. >< I'll fix it since these are kinda old ones, before Serebii changed some rules. The new ones are out.

~Poseidon~

Edit:Episode 6:Armour, is now up. I've made the changes that you guys said you wanted.
Edit 2(Don't wanna double post no matter how much this is dieing): Episode 7:Chikara is up. Enjoy.

 

[Dark Lucario]

Live, thread, LIVE!
There, it's not dead anymore.

 

[Poseidon]

Yay. Episode 08:Exit is now up. Enjoy.

Edit(It's dieing><):Episode 09:Still Chubby... is up.

 

[Dark Lucario]

NOT DEAD ANYMORE! Somebody freaking post besides me!

 

[Poseidon]

New one's up. Thanks for supporting me Dark Lucario.

Here it is.

Episode 10:Sun's Fiery