Alpha Omega Ep1

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I have been writing this story since grade school and I need critiques on it

Alpha is a Huntsman, a special unit under the Bureau of Genetic Registration who arrests people who do not register themselves with their government organization. Of course with the recent spates of mutated humans rebelling against their laws, Alpha is rather vexed especially with one of them namely Karmax, is carrying an hundred year old microscopic predator, SARS.

Omega who inherits a criminal gene from his murderer ancestor, has difficult finding a job. Omega is not exhibiting any signs of being criminal. But then he gets rescued by a Mind Guardian, from a cyborg hunter who hunts down people with bad genes. The Mind Guardians were in fact cops of the CHS, a society comprised of people who were genetically discriminated ,. After this incident, Omega decides to join the CHS in the battle against genetic discrimination. And his first person or thing to save was.... Karmax

 

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Universe overview...

Set in the 2100, technology of mankind has advanced so far that genetic therapy or [GT] is now a trend. People are giving their children the best genes and remove the bad ones. However, not all people can afford it.

In the midst of a designer baby fad, genetic discrimination becomes the next most dangerous form of extremism. Designer humans mostly from the richer class had financial access to the best genes while those who could not afford the cost were discriminated to extend that many were not given insurance over fatal diseases and sometimes were denied jobs!

Alpha is a member of the military section of the BGR [Bureau of Genetic Registration] and is confused over the decision to register individuals with fatal diseases, mental disorders, and criminality genes because of the widened publicity of genetic databases and the social stigma over such people.

Omega finds that he is jobless due to a criminal gene he inherited from an ancestor he never knew. Then when he decides to take fate into his own hands, he joins the CHS in its fight against the designer humans.