Eternal Daydreamer
Surrender to the Sea
Well, I've dropped Not So Sensational for this story. I dropped it because I couldn't think of anything more for it. And I had this great idea after I watched The Brothers Grimm.
No, it's not a parody. Nor do I call it a crossover. However, I did take the village from the movie and most of the inhabitants to place in this story. I took the villagers themselves (Hans, Greta, Sasha, Elsie, the girl with the red cape, Sasha's pa, the one-legged man, the crone, and the other inhabitants not including Angelika and her family and the brothers and all those french people) and transported them into a village that I made. I took the characters and put them into the Pokemon world, yes, but I have it so they aren't really the characters. If that makes any sense, it'll become clearer I hope. You don't have to watch the movie to get this, that's the beauty of it I think.
I'll even do an "index" of characters for easy reference. Like the guy who wrote the Warriors series. Yes, I will describe the characters and all that but this is just for quick reference. As in, someone got confused as which character was which. I'll add on if I need to, but I don't think I will.
Controllers
Blizsan-A bulky hermit who was the grandson of Helekinsun, the elder. He only goes to the village to drink in the pub. His Familiar is Articuno.
Molly-The fair fourth Controller with sadistic tendencies. Her Familiar is Entei.
Villagers (Children)
Sasha-Young fair village girl.
Hans-The tall lanky brother of Greta.
Greta-Hans’s plump fearful sister.
Elsie-Young village girl who has a fondness for Rapidashs and Ponytas.
Rebecca-Young village girl who has a red riding cape.
Kevin-The younger brother of Rose.
Rose-Young village girl who is the older sister of Kevin.
Villagers (Adults)
Gregor-Sasha’s father and is on the council of elders.
Peter-An old one-legged man who is the leader of the village.
Sarai-The local crone who the village dislikes greatly.
Other Characters (Familiars and their human forms)
Articuno-The quirky Familiar of Blizsan.
Arnold-The human form of Articuno, who looks something like Hans.
Entei-The solid Familiar of Molly.
Hale-The human form of Entei and roughly looks like a blacksmith.
An Aged Fantasy
Table of Contents (So Far)
Prologue) Entering Town
1) Children and Strangers
2) Rose and the Briar
Prologue: Entering Town
The forest tore at their cloaks and the wind bit at their faces. Wind made the fiery manes of their mounts rise and fall steadily. Those were the only things the travelers noticed as they were in a hurry. Even their mounts seemed in a hurry, their muscles tense underneath their cream colored coats.
The breath of the travelers and their steeds froze in the cold air making a white mist that churned uneasily. The two travelers hunched to get a better grip on the reins since the path began to get rougher. Branches seemed to grow just to annoy them but the larger of the two travelers, possibly male, had an axe which he slashed at the branches in front of his mount.
The other which was smaller, most likely a woman, followed behind him since she disliked being hit by the branches. Her mount disliked the amount of baggage that she put on him, but he was also afraid of her so, of course, he obeyed the directions. The male traveler suddenly turned his mount around.
The steed reared since he was startled but the man was not thrown off. Instead, he took the motion with ease and turned to the woman. “This forest is cursed,” he grunted. “I can not get through. Something is interfering with your power, is it not?” The woman glanced around.
They’re eyes met briefly, however, one could not tell much from their facial expressions since they covered their faces were covered with hoods. Both of the hoods were of a rusty red color that turned the nearest trees red in the dying light. “Maybe and maybe not. I cannot be sure,” replied the woman. “Let’s continue. I have heard there is a village nearby.”
The man nodded and turned his mount around. Guiding with one hand and holding the axe with the other, he continued the journey with the woman behind him.
***
The one-legged old man leaned on the wall holding his crutches. His old tired eyes watching the children at play tiredly. As leader of the worn down village, it was his honor and his duty to watch over the younger ones. He held back a dry chuckle. After all, was it not a few years ago that the young ones that were at the meeting, children themselves?
Peter, for that was his name, knew each child by name. He knew their parents when they were the same age, also. The nature of each child, he also knew. Even the odd brother and sister pair of Hans and Greta. For Hans was adventurous but Greta was very careful. Those two were always arguing about what they should do and what they shouldn’t. Peter smiled crookedly at some thought of the siblings.
In only a few weeks, winter’s cold breath would be upon them and the children would have to stay indoors. At that time, Peter knew, the children would flock to the inn at night to ask for stories. Elsie would ask for stories of Pokemon. Hans would ask for stories of the second Controller’s exploits. Greta and Rebecca would ask for folk tales.
Those days would be long and cold but to Peter, they would be as warm as the sun. For the children would only bother him when the sun was out, since their parents told them that the old man was always busy. That was not always true and the children knew this, however their faith to their parents was strong and they didn’t disobey easily.
The picture of an old man watching children at play on a muddy street in a broken down village was soon destroyed when the travelers came. One male, one female both on galloping Rapidashes. Their rusty cloaks billowing in the wind but the hoods not moving an inch. The children stopped playing and some of the older villagers appeared to watch the new arrivals.
They were new to this place and it scared Peter slightly. After all, only the old hermit that lived on the mountain came down to the village. It was small and uninteresting so it raised the question in Peter’s mind of just why did they come? They couldn’t be raiders even if the male had an axe.
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Short I know, but the chapters will get longer. And this was longer than a page on WordPerferct 10, the proccessing program I use. Read and review, please.
No, it's not a parody. Nor do I call it a crossover. However, I did take the village from the movie and most of the inhabitants to place in this story. I took the villagers themselves (Hans, Greta, Sasha, Elsie, the girl with the red cape, Sasha's pa, the one-legged man, the crone, and the other inhabitants not including Angelika and her family and the brothers and all those french people) and transported them into a village that I made. I took the characters and put them into the Pokemon world, yes, but I have it so they aren't really the characters. If that makes any sense, it'll become clearer I hope. You don't have to watch the movie to get this, that's the beauty of it I think.
I'll even do an "index" of characters for easy reference. Like the guy who wrote the Warriors series. Yes, I will describe the characters and all that but this is just for quick reference. As in, someone got confused as which character was which. I'll add on if I need to, but I don't think I will.
Controllers
Blizsan-A bulky hermit who was the grandson of Helekinsun, the elder. He only goes to the village to drink in the pub. His Familiar is Articuno.
Molly-The fair fourth Controller with sadistic tendencies. Her Familiar is Entei.
Villagers (Children)
Sasha-Young fair village girl.
Hans-The tall lanky brother of Greta.
Greta-Hans’s plump fearful sister.
Elsie-Young village girl who has a fondness for Rapidashs and Ponytas.
Rebecca-Young village girl who has a red riding cape.
Kevin-The younger brother of Rose.
Rose-Young village girl who is the older sister of Kevin.
Villagers (Adults)
Gregor-Sasha’s father and is on the council of elders.
Peter-An old one-legged man who is the leader of the village.
Sarai-The local crone who the village dislikes greatly.
Other Characters (Familiars and their human forms)
Articuno-The quirky Familiar of Blizsan.
Arnold-The human form of Articuno, who looks something like Hans.
Entei-The solid Familiar of Molly.
Hale-The human form of Entei and roughly looks like a blacksmith.
An Aged Fantasy
Table of Contents (So Far)
Prologue) Entering Town
1) Children and Strangers
2) Rose and the Briar
Prologue: Entering Town
The forest tore at their cloaks and the wind bit at their faces. Wind made the fiery manes of their mounts rise and fall steadily. Those were the only things the travelers noticed as they were in a hurry. Even their mounts seemed in a hurry, their muscles tense underneath their cream colored coats.
The breath of the travelers and their steeds froze in the cold air making a white mist that churned uneasily. The two travelers hunched to get a better grip on the reins since the path began to get rougher. Branches seemed to grow just to annoy them but the larger of the two travelers, possibly male, had an axe which he slashed at the branches in front of his mount.
The other which was smaller, most likely a woman, followed behind him since she disliked being hit by the branches. Her mount disliked the amount of baggage that she put on him, but he was also afraid of her so, of course, he obeyed the directions. The male traveler suddenly turned his mount around.
The steed reared since he was startled but the man was not thrown off. Instead, he took the motion with ease and turned to the woman. “This forest is cursed,” he grunted. “I can not get through. Something is interfering with your power, is it not?” The woman glanced around.
They’re eyes met briefly, however, one could not tell much from their facial expressions since they covered their faces were covered with hoods. Both of the hoods were of a rusty red color that turned the nearest trees red in the dying light. “Maybe and maybe not. I cannot be sure,” replied the woman. “Let’s continue. I have heard there is a village nearby.”
The man nodded and turned his mount around. Guiding with one hand and holding the axe with the other, he continued the journey with the woman behind him.
***
The one-legged old man leaned on the wall holding his crutches. His old tired eyes watching the children at play tiredly. As leader of the worn down village, it was his honor and his duty to watch over the younger ones. He held back a dry chuckle. After all, was it not a few years ago that the young ones that were at the meeting, children themselves?
Peter, for that was his name, knew each child by name. He knew their parents when they were the same age, also. The nature of each child, he also knew. Even the odd brother and sister pair of Hans and Greta. For Hans was adventurous but Greta was very careful. Those two were always arguing about what they should do and what they shouldn’t. Peter smiled crookedly at some thought of the siblings.
In only a few weeks, winter’s cold breath would be upon them and the children would have to stay indoors. At that time, Peter knew, the children would flock to the inn at night to ask for stories. Elsie would ask for stories of Pokemon. Hans would ask for stories of the second Controller’s exploits. Greta and Rebecca would ask for folk tales.
Those days would be long and cold but to Peter, they would be as warm as the sun. For the children would only bother him when the sun was out, since their parents told them that the old man was always busy. That was not always true and the children knew this, however their faith to their parents was strong and they didn’t disobey easily.
The picture of an old man watching children at play on a muddy street in a broken down village was soon destroyed when the travelers came. One male, one female both on galloping Rapidashes. Their rusty cloaks billowing in the wind but the hoods not moving an inch. The children stopped playing and some of the older villagers appeared to watch the new arrivals.
They were new to this place and it scared Peter slightly. After all, only the old hermit that lived on the mountain came down to the village. It was small and uninteresting so it raised the question in Peter’s mind of just why did they come? They couldn’t be raiders even if the male had an axe.
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Short I know, but the chapters will get longer. And this was longer than a page on WordPerferct 10, the proccessing program I use. Read and review, please.
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