Ok, no offence, but this comic is horrible. Layouts terrible, plot, skipping place to place. Well, atleast u could make a comic. I can't even make one. The only good thing I see is the layout on Part 4. But anyway, this comic stinkz.
ok your comic isnt that bad but adventures(poke journeys)
are too common so maybe restart and make a life comic(like romance or life or just jokes)restart and try your best ok?
