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Anyone wanna give some constructive critisism?

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mrpython1991

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Yeah... So far, all I'm really good at is recoloring and splicing.
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#'s 1 and 2 are my own idea of Aqua Grunts. Same goes for 4 and 5, except they're Magma Grunts. 3 and 6 are trainers I made up. 3 is a "beach girl" thingy. 6 is called Pyro. 7 is Brawly grown up and overweight. 8 is an evolution of Marrowak. It's called Frakture. 9 and 10 are a bug type and its evo. No names. 10 is a Quilfish pre-evo. It's called Quilfin.

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An odd trainer. I guess he's the boss of a psychic team. I forget.

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Another trainer. Pretty much Mysterio from Spider-Man.

Yeah, I'd really appreciate it if you all would give me some advice.
 
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Zerodius

Eternally hating D/P
I must say... your trainer mixes are extremely good... I think. I like the psychic Team Leader especially. He looks like a mix between Lance and Steven with some custom hands (or maybe Haunter) hands on the sides.

The Pokemon mixes, sadly, are bad. The Marowak evolution looks more like a recolor than anything else. The insects looks more like simplified versions of existing Pokemon. The last one is weird.

My favorite sprite is the Mystero trainer sprite. The only flaw is the lack of a Pokeball in his hand or held by his powers... apart from that, he seems really good. I don't know if he's entirely scratch or a mix... but if he's a mix... then congratulations because I can't identify from which trainer you took the parts to build him.

Well, that's that. I hope those comments will help you...
 
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mrpython1991

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The first one is blurry because it had gotten saved as a .jpg. I have a better Mysterio one, with a belt and pokeball. Yes, it is a mix. I even forget what it;s made of. But its from a Machamp, Voltorb, a Dragon Trainer, and an Aqua Grunt.

And the Psychic Leader is a Aqua Grunt/Steven/Dragon Trainer mix. The hands are from a Dusklops.
 
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Victory is ours!
mrpython1991 said:
The first one is blurry because it had gotten saved as a .jpg. I have a better Mysterio one, with a belt and pokeball. Yes, it is a mix. I even forget what it;s made of. But its from a Machamp, Voltorb, a Dragon Trainer, and an Aqua Grunt.

Actually, you saved it as .bmp and photobucket resized it. (at least, thats what the properties say, and it doesn't look all that jpeg-ified)

Anyways, yeah, your sprites are good~!
 

Bulk

Well-Known Member
Nice trainers. The Psychic Leaders very nice, Mysterio looks a bit wired. Some thing seems wrong. Could be the glass helmet, it looks a bit lop sided. Apart from that, good.
 
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mrpython1991

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Lol, wow guys. I'm really happy I'm getting such a positive response. Well I was rooting around and found some more sprites.

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This is when I went through my odd phase. The purple serpent is something I call Mr. Python ^_^. The demon thing is just weird.

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The story behind this is an odd one. I was originally making a Misdreavus evo. It turned out fairly well, except I kept adding more to it. Soon, it was a cluttered mess. So, I took the only thing I could save from this sprite-gone-bad (the hair), and put it to good use. So I put it on a Meowth.
 
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Mimori Kiryu

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I like your mixes, I think they're done very well. My favorite is the Aqua Grunt/Steven/Dragon Trainer mix into the Psychic Leader. That one is really well done :D

Keep up the great work! (I noticed your from KY...so am I :D)
 
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mrpython1991

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Look! I found more! Yeah, the Meowth is a recolor from the Yellow Version sprite. The guy with a hat was a rocker trainer I made. I based it on how Primus goes out on stage in weird costumes. The donkey thing I made fro my friends birthday. It's "special" in that sort of way. The guy with hooded cape is the arch enemy of the Psychic Leader, he's the Steel Leader. The kid with the beanie is a Grunt.
 
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Mimori Kiryu

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The arch enemy of the Psychic Leader is really cool! I like him the best! Your Meowth Revamp is awesome too! ^_~
 
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mrpython1991

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Another one of my good ideas gone sour. This is Ragbi. I came up with the idea for him in 3rd grade. He was a cute little purple guy with spiky hair, stumpy arms and legs, round eyes, and wide jaws. Now, it has come to look like Gengar on crack.
 
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mrpython1991

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I also found two more. Don't laugh.

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Even withouth the grainyness, it's still bad. This is the younger version of Psychic Leader.

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Ugh.
 

3o'clubs

*The Guy*
thanks for the comment about my tangela mix
your train mixes are awesome but your poke mixes need work try adding custom parts and use more complex mixes instead of basic ones
 

Mimori Kiryu

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That one's AWESOME! I really like that one, along with the younger version of the Psychic leader! ^_~
 
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mrpython1991

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I made this in honor of Lyn Z, the bassist from my favorite band. Mindless Self Indulgence. Here's a picture of Lyn Z for comparison.

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Mimori Kiryu

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I REALLY like that one! Man...if I give you a picture of some anime characters...do you think you could make me sprites of them?
 
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mrpython1991

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Ok guys, my creative juices have been running on low, so I guess I'll start taking requests.

Please request something!
 

Starter530

Yes I use MS paint
All you did to the most of the trainers in the big pic was change their head and (sometimes) recolor their clothes.
 
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mrpython1991

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I know. I even said that. I said all I'm really good at is recoloring and splicing.

But I'm getting better.
 
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