Arashi's comic adventures

[Arashi]

Comic. BTW the Mew is me. And, just because a character died, doesent mean they are out of the comic.

http://img143.imageshack.us/my.php?image=larrygm8.png Chapter 1

 

[nashie1]

Brendan has lost all of his shading. Why? he was fine without being messed with. Secondly, the edge of the bed and Brendans hair are clipped off in some panels. My third point is that the floor is messed up and the pattern on the grey floor dissappears around the bed. why? finally i would like to know the point of the carpet. It seems a bit random that it appears out of nowhere and there would be no point in putting it there halfway through.

If this was supposed to be funny then i didn't get it. Not much plot at this point so i can't give a fair opinion opinion on that

2/10.

Edit: I just got the joke. It's not bad. raises it to a 3/10.