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Are my sprites any good?

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pocket-monster

Active Member
Hi, i spent a lot of time on these sprites and want to know if they're good.

The many faces of voltorb http://i12.*******.com/47lajjb.jpg

Multiple revamps http://i3.*******.com/2yws5y0.png

The Onix/magikarp mix http://i16.*******.com/4g972w2.png

Teddysly/Ursawood http://i10.*******.com/3y862pu.jpg

Pibuff/Pikapuff/Raibuff http://i3.*******.com/2w1wktg.jpg
 
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~*Sailor Satun*~

*~*Water Prince*~*
The mixes are nice, but don't save as jpg, and, if needed, scratch parts. The Voltorb/Ghastley needs more Ghastley, abd the revamps....There's a lot of things, edit the shading and lines, those are just recolors. Do the shading customly, read a tutorial, and use dithering/half-tone shading if needed. The mixes......The Onix/Magikarp looks copy and pasteyish, so scratch the parts and do the outlining, it looks horrible without it, and for the Gyraix, scratch more parts, but those, other than that, are just fine. They're good for a begginer, looking forward to seeing you improve on the revamps and mix. Good luck. EDIT: Above poster reported for spamming and not obeying the rules. Just sparing you from people like that.

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Heartless_Enigma

Alpha
halosiel said:
they're awesome, especially the ninetails#1
how do i get rid of the, beginning trainer thing, i want one with lucario
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Post more often to change it, without spamming. Not sure if there is one featuring Lucario or anything.

Staying on topic, beautiful work, I love your Poliwag'd Voltorb.
 
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Starter530

Yes I use MS paint
Remember revamps are more than just coloring an old pokemon with new pokemon's colors
you have to completely reshade it, and fix up the outline also.
 
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blazikenBAM

alittlestitious
hmm

i'm impressed. your mixes could use more scratch parts, but you have a good solid base to begin doing so. on your fusions you ahve a little work to do (on the spheal/voltorb there is some outline missing!), but overall, they aren't amazing but not terrible either.

you revamps, though are another thing. when revamping, you want to TOTALLY redo the shading. dont just fill in the existing shading with new colors. they need to be totally redone. what i do is erase all the colors from the sprites, leaving the outline and any important lines (mouths, eye placements, ect.) and then take the medium shade and fill the entire thing. then i begin to add the different colors to shade.

though you do seem to have a good grasp on shading all ready (the bulbasaur is well done, a tad more shading on the bulb though) and your electabuzz is well done, too.

keep it up!
 
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~*Sailor Satun*~

*~*Water Prince*~*
koxstar23, I have reported you.

Anyway, going on, the first mix looks stolen. I've seen it on Photobucket in Emerald Milotic's album, and I'm talking about the Pichu/Igglybuff one. And all you did for the revamps was recolor, do the outlines and shading.
 
Zephyr Flare

Zephyr Flare

/pose
Would you be able to prove the ones considered are indeed yours? If you cannot, it would be wiser to take them down to be on the safer side, proof means a lot these ays from WIP screens to layers/overlays.

Sandra
 
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