Art of Melody, Bianca/Latias, Macey and Giselle

[Carina]

Well, I wouldn't say all of them flirted with Ash..
Let's just say 3 of them did. 2 kissed him. And 1 made Ash go all 'Brock-like'.
Strange of me not to draw Misty - but to draw her 4 potential rivals (for Ash) instead. Aaah..refreshing.
So if you're a fan of Melody, Bianca/Latias, Giselle or Macey (anyone? lol) I hope I've done them justice! ^__^;;
Oekaki + non-oekaki colouring.

Please comment on them. I appreciate any. DeviantArt page: http://www.deviantart.com/view/31044042/

 

[Who Said Pikachu?]

Just trying to figure out who did what..
Anyways, Giselle was cool but a cow and will forever be warped because of that dark Ace pokemon fanfic.
Macey just irritated me and I personally thought she was waay too ugly..
For that matter, Melody annoyed me as well.
Latias was adorable though.. go Lati!

Anyways, to actually commenton the pictures..

First off, the lineart is sketchy, but i'm assuming that's because of the oekaki, and it's not really -that- bad.. the lines are solid and definite enough with no real flicky bits sticking out anywhere so eh.

Giselle needs some more shading on the closer arm on the bottom half, just to make it less flat and either it's the white of her eyes or you've shaded too light, but on her right side eye (same side as the arm) the white goes over the eyelash line and up to the eyelid fold but it's barely noticeable. Overall a very nice picture.. look how nitpicky I had to be, really.

Macey's hairline is a little off with the soft shadow shading not helping on the hair around her face. I think the hands may be a little small.. but it's not that bad. Again I'd have to be -really- nitpicky to complain more so.

Melody, her folded fingers, the one behind the one totally curled should be at least partially seen unless of course you've amputated the finger at the joint for your own perticular pleasure. Her mouth should be a little closer to the finger. Maybe another ruffle in her sleeve but that's a meh point, and then back to nitpicking if i continue.

I love Bianca.. but that could just be me and my bias for her.. she's a neat character, well ok, no, -she's- not, but Latias is and she did a good job being Bianaca and etc.. Um, and I can't remember her design perfectly so I'm gonna ask if you drew her head a bit wide.. or maybe her hair is just that bit too far away from her face on the closer side that it should show the edging of an ear. Then back to nit picky!

Anyways, I shall say you've done a lovely job and the colourings are gorgeous on all of them, I love the washed out sky backgrounds they're pweddy...

And that's it!

Keep drawing and enjoy as you do it!

Happy hunting!
~Pika!

ps. how rude, you changed the name while I was typing my reply and I had to do it again! tsk!

 

[Carina]

Hey Who Said Pikachu
Thanks so much for all those detailed comments! I'll take them all into consideration when doing another picture. And you're right about Bianca's face being too wide - I should've drawn her hair more closer in. But again, thankyou for typing all that for me! ^____^

 

[Phantom_Bugsy]

Oooh, this is pretty!

I've never liked Melody, Giselle and Bianca, but I do kinda like Macey (as a character). I think these are done fabulously, and the shading is very nice. :>

Rock on, Macey! :0

 

[Carina]

Thankyou for checking them out, Phantom Bugsy! wow...There aren't a lot of people who like Macey. lol I myself haven't even seen that episode - but have checked out pictures on Serebii.
I really appreciate your kind comments! ^__^

 

[Gily]

woah thats awesome

 

[Flame Haze SnS]

Whee! They all are so pretty, especially Bianca (who's my second fave girl). You did very well drawing all of the girls! Kudos to ya!

 

[Orion-Sama]

I just have to comment.

Awesome job. They're all so colorful and cute! My favorite was Melody. She looks sexy. But the other three were great as well. I could say I prefer those to the actual thing.

Heck. You even made me look at Macey in a new light. That's commendable, as it's hard to do.

And Bianca... just aw! Too cute. Almost makes me eager to bring her back into my Top 10. XD.

Nice job on those. Not much else to say. I hope you do some more. Keep it up!

 

[.Bambi.]

Super Kawaii!

I LOVE these drawings, they're so cute and innocent, they make me le melt D:
My favourite would have to be Giselle as she just looks...perfect. Another favourite is Bianca, though her pose seems like she's trying to ♪ Make Us Work, Make Us Work, Work, Make Us Work ♪

Excellent :D

 

[Kaiviti]

aaaaaaaai *Hearts in eyes* your work is SUPER CUTE Carina!!
The colours and the shading not to mention the poses...wow...I LOVE its sooo much!!!
BEAUTIFUL, CUTE WORK!!!

 

[Carina]

Thanks MUCHLY, Gily, Dark Absol, Orion, Combusken and Kaaaaaiviti!
Just thanks for taking the time to click on this thread in the first place. ^___^

Orion - Macey ain't that bad of a character. Her sudden crush on Ash, especially when she gets those big sparkly eyes...I reckon they're sweet! lol

Out of all 4, I reckon Giselle looks better here too, Combusken! ^^;

And THANKYOU again, Kaiviti, fellow arty pal.

 

[StellarWind]

Yay for obscure-ish characters! xD

I have no idea who the frell Macey is, though. o_o

 

[Neko Godot]

Giselle, Melody, and Bianca are cool, but Macey is not.