Ash!Travel On! (NewRegionShipping PG-13)

[Skye-kun]

This is about Ash travelling to a new region known as Glaerin. Misty has joined him and they are travelling to the town called Toome Town.FYI THIS IS A PROLOUGE EPISODE


Ash and Misty had finally got of the S.S. Aerian. "So Ash what do you want to do? Go to the Pokemon Center or see Professor David" asked Misty. "Hmmm..Well how about we see the Professor first? Then we can go to the Pokemon Center and start on our journey!." said Ash excitedly.

After a short walk, they reached the Prof.'s Lab. "Hello! You must be Ash and Misty! I'm glad you came! In this Region you get to choose a starter Pokemon from any Region!" said the Prof. " I'll take a Mudkip because they are soo cute!" said Misty "And I'll take a Torchic!" said Ash.


After stopping at the Pokemon Center, they headded to the next town known as Maragha Town. When they reached there they met a young boy (around 13) named Colin. "Hi. I'm Colin. I'm this town's Gym Leader's son" said Colin " Hi! I'm Ash and this is Misty. S o you said there is a Gym Leader here?" asked Ash. "Yeah. My Mom, Alodia, is the Gym Leader. But only once you have 3 Badges can you challenge her." " Hey Colin why don't you come along with us around Glaerin? I mean we'd really enjoy your company!" asked Misty " I'd love to!"



OK that's the First Episode! I'll be making a new Ep someday before the end of the Week!

 

[Sweet May]

nice for a start, but it seems a bit short though........ try making it longer like more than 2 pages i think........... 0o

 

[Skye-kun]

THE REAL EPISODE 1!

Episode 1: The Manyula Problem
*Beeping Intro* *Computerised Voice* Destination: Beltro City

Narrator: As Ash, Misty and Colin are travelling to Beltro City they stop a small restaurant in a small town known as Antrino Town.

" Wow this is great! I need seconds!" said Ash "Uhh.. Misty does Ash always eat like this?" asked Colin as Ash scarffed down his second helping of Noodles. " Well it's been a long time since we've seen each other, so yeah I guess" laughed Misty.

After a fourth helping for Ash, they left the Restaurant and headed to the local Pokemon Center. When they got there Ash decided to give an old friend a call. "Hey May! How's the Glenn region? (*For more info on the Glenn region see Sweet May's thread*) asked Ash. " It's great! Drew and I are having a Blast!" said May. "That's great! Well hope to see ya soon!" said Ash and he hung up. " So how's May?" asked Misty "She's fine" said Ash "Wait are you guys talking about May, Norman's daughter?" asked Colin "Hm? Oh yeah!" "Cool!"

As they were passing the Town Hal they heard yelling. "You got to do something about these Manyula's! You are the best Manyula Trainer ever!" "Look I've tried! I've even caught 3 but the two that are left are too hard!" said a female trainer. The crowd groaned and left. "Oh! What am I going to do?" complained the Trainer. " How about if we help?" asked Ash "Huh? Who are you?" "I'm Ash,this is Misty and this is Colin." said Ash "Sure you can help! By the way I'm Marselle. I own three Manyula's but there are two being real jerks" said Marselle "And I need to capture them or they'll destroy the town by breaking stuff and being Pranksters." " Well let's get going!" said Colin "I've always wanted a Manyula!"

After finding the Manyula's home, an old factory downtown, they all crept into one of the Manyula's bedrooms which was strange as Pokemon don't have bedroom's. "OK, Colin, you have a chance to catch a Manyula. Get ready" said Marselle. "Alright. Come on out Mightyena!" said Colin.

After waiting,one of the Manyula pair came home "Mightyena, Bite!" yelled Colin "Mnyula?" "Grrr aa!"
After a short battle.."Pokeball GO!" yelled Colin. "Manyula?!" The pokeball hit Manyula on the head and was caught! " Yeah! I did it! I caught a Manyula!" said Colin triumphantly. " Thanks for your help" said Marselle "Wait isn't there another Manyula?"asked Ash "Yeah but this one is mine!" said Marselle.

After saying Good-Bye to Marselle they headed to Ash's first Glaerin Gym Battle in Beltro City with the Gym Leader known as Sten the Steel Master!



OK so thatis the REAL Episode 1 all comments are accepted!

 

[DKzM0mA]

Ok, here are my comments.

I think it was weird that Colin joined so suddenly in the prolouge. They just introduced each other and decided to journey together?

Another thing is that, evertime a new person talks, a new paragraph should start so it would look better.

One more thing is that is pretty short. It has to be atleast 1 long, but ppl would rather prefer atleast 2 pages so they actually wait for something good.

When it comes to spelling and grammar you're okay. I hoped that this helped you.

 

[Skye-kun]

Thanx for your comments DKzM0mA! I'll definately keep that inmind when episode 2 comes out!

Update on Episode 2!!! In the next Episode Ash and Co. are heading to Beltro City when a surprise attack from a new evil Team called Ring of Doom leaves them in a sticky situation being stuck in a Rock Tomb caused by an Earthquake by a Whiscash which causes them to reminise on how they met Colin. Next Episode near maybe tomorrow!

 

[DKzM0mA]

Thanx for your comments DKzM0mA! I'll definately keep that inmind when episode 2 comes out!

Update on Episode 2!!! In the next Episode Ash and Co. are heading to Beltro City when a surprise attack from a new evil Team called Ring of Doom leaves them in a sticky situation being stuck in a Rock Tomb caused by an Earthquake by a Whiscash which causes them to reminise on how they met Colin. Next Episode near next FRI, SAT or SUN!

Maybe you should've put spoiler tags on that. [spoil]like this[/spoil] like that<

 

[Sweet May]

eh.......still seems short............ try at least 3 or 4 pages i think....... or maybe 5...... or more than that but its still good. Nice epi ^^

 

[Skye-kun]

OK I've decided to do my Second Episode today as well! Get ready! Also I've been Pm'd about why it's PG-13. Well in this Episode before the gang gets stuck in the Rock Tomb....wait you know what, you'll see in a min! Also there is some minor swear words

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*Beeping Intro and Computerised Voice* Destination: Beltro City

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Narrator: As Ash and co. are heading to Beltro City Colin gets himself into a battle with a wild Poochyena.

" Stupid Poochyena! Umbreon Faint Attack!" said Colin

"Poochy?!Poooocccchhhhyyyy!" screamed the Poochyena as it fainted

"COLIN! HOW DO YOU GET YOURSELF INTO THESE THINGS?!" yelled Misty

"I don't know!" Colin yelled back. *Anger vein appears on both heads*

"Calm down you two!We're almost at Bletro City, so save your anger till later!" interveined Ash

"Fine" Colin and Misty said in unison
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As the gang are reaching the City they spot a Trainer Battle between a Trainer and a cloaked figure.

"Heh-Heh-Heh. Stupid trainer! Magneton! Thunder!" said the cloaked figure

"NO! Marshtomp!" yelled the trainer as his Marshtomp fainted " You Ring of Doom agents will never succeed!"

"Oh yes we will it's just a matter of time!" said the Ring of Doom agent "Now for a little escape! Whiscash! Earthquake!" and the agent disappeared

"Huh?! What's going on?" yelled Ash

"It's an Earthquake!" yelled Misty " Ash I wanted to tell you...I love you!

And at that instant, they were surrounded by a Tomb of Rocks............

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*Ash is knocked out on the ground*

" You know I blame this on you Colin! If you didn't get into that Battle we could have avoided this Earthquake!" said Misty

"You know Misty I only came along because YOU offered me to come with you guys!" said Colin angrily

"No I didn't! You offered yourself to come along!" yelled Misty

"Oh really? I remember it as if it was Yesterday!" said Colin " Let me remind you!"
*Flashback waves*

"So Misty, where do you want to go?" asked Ash

"How about the Gym?" said Misty

"Cool" said Ash

*Then you guys entered the Gym*

"Hi! Are you the Gym Leader here?" asked Ash

"No. But I am the Gym Leader's son. I'm Colin." said Colin "And only if you have 3 of Glaerin's Gym Badges can you fight my Mom, Alodia."

"Oh well. I guess I'll have to wait to fight her" complained Ash

"Well, you can fight me! I'm not an official Gym Trainer but I am strong!" said Colin

"OK!" said Ash eagerly
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"Go! Pikachu!" said Ash

"Go Blaziken!" said Colin "Sky Uppercut!"

"Pikachu dodge and then use Iron Tail!" said Ash

Pikachu attacked Blaziken and nearly knocked him out but he got up.

"Blaziken! Fire Punch!" yelled Colin

"Pikachu! Dodge again and use Thunder to finish him!"

*And then my Blaziken fainted*

"Wow Colin! You are really good!" said Misty " Why don't you come along with us?"

"Well sure! It's really boring here!" said Colin

"Cool! Let's go!" said Ash.

*Flashback waves*

"Wow Colin...I guess you were right. I'm sorry I was so harsh." apologised Misty

"Apology accepted" said Colin

"So I see you two made up!" said Ash, surprising them both.

"ASH! You're up!" said Misty

"Misty...Did you really mean it when you said you loved me?" asked Ash

"Well...Yeah." said Misty blushing "I've always liked you."

*Ash and Misty are about to kiss*

"Guys! Look! A small crack of light! I can get us out! Nintay Dig!" said Colin and his Ninetales started to dig them out.

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"Well just a few more hours until we reach Beltro City!" said Ash "Let's go!"

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OK so Episode three will air around next Friday or so! Stay tuned

 

[Sweet May]

nice chapter....... but still short....... try at least 4 pages?
can't wait for the next chapter though

 

[Skye-kun]

Thanx for ur comment!

Episode 3 Spoiler: Now in Beltro City, Ash and co. head straight to the Gym. But, the Gym is locked because of the City's Annual Ball being held there. Ash, Misty and Colin all decide to go to it. But, can Ash find the strength to ask Misty to be his date to the Ball? And, can Colin ask a girl he met in the Pokemon Union Hall? All on Episode 3 around Wednesday!

 

[Skye-kun]

Today's Episode! Episode 3: Love?! I hardly knew Ash!
Well, Episode 3 is finally here! Get ready! 3..2...1..Action!
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*Beeping Intro + Computerised Voice* Arrived: Beltro City
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"What?! CLOSED?" yelled Ash, "Oh man!"

"What's this? 'Beltro City Annual Ball: Come for a dance and great food!' Maybe we should go! It sounds like fun! What do ya say!" said Misty

"O-oK.I guess we can go! There is a girl I met in the Pokemon Center, I think I'll ask her!" said Colin and ran off.

"So Ash, do you want to go?" asked Misty

"Uhhh..Sure. Let's go get ready!" said Ash

"OK! I'll see you at the Pokemon Center!" and Misty ran off.

"Great! Now how can I ask Misty out? I'm too nervous!" Ash sighed.
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Colin saw her. The girl he was going to ask to the Beltro Ball. Her name: Sakura Baylona. A Pink haired, Blue eyed 13 year old that shone in any light, well at least to Colin! He stepped up to her.

"Excuse me?Sakura?"

"Yes? What is it? Oh! Your that cute Boy Colin, I met in Antrino Town!" said Sakura

"Erm..Well..Umm. Will you come to the Beltro City Ball with me?" asked Colin blushing

"Oh! Uhhh..Umm well..." stuttered Sakura

"I-I understand if you don't wanna go!" said Colin "I'll just be going before I embarrass myself more."

"No! Colin, I will be your date to the Beltro City Ball. Pick Me up at..7pm!"said Sakura

"Really! Great! See you at 7!" and Colin happily walked to his room to get ready.
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Ash checked himself. He was about to ask his love, Misty, on a date. He walked up to her Bedroom door. He knocked.Misty opened the door.

"Yes? Oh! Ash! What is it?" asked Misty

"Umm...I-er...uhhh.. Misty will you be my adte to the Beltro City Ball?" and he
blushed.

"Oh Ash! I thought you'd NEVER ask! Of course I will! I'll be ready for 7:30! See ya then!" and Misty closed her door.

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Ash made sure his shirt wasn’t dirty and put on his tux jacket. He gelled his hair and opened his door and locked it. He knocked on Misty’s door. She answered it.

“Hi Ash!” said Misty. She was wearing a White gown encrusted with Cascade Badges and she had straightened her hair which was longer than normal.

“Wow. Misty you look great! Shall we go?” and Ash took her hand

”Yes, we shall.” And they both left.

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Ash and Misty entered the Beltro Gym which was where the Ball was being held.
It a beautiful sight. The tables seemed to be covered in confetti but were really copies of the City’s Gym Badges! The Music was quite soothing to listen to.

“Ash, Misty. This is my date, Sakura.” said Colin

“Hi! Nice to meet you, Sakura!” said Ash

“Hello! I’m Misty.”

“How about we go for a dance?” asked Sakura

“Yes lets.” said Misty

And the group of four all went for a dance.

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“Wow Ash! I never knew you were so good at Dancing!” a breathless Misty panted.

“Well…. You know...” chuckled Ash

“ Oh look! The City’s Gym Leader is going to speak!” said Sakura

“Hello! I hope you all had a wonderful evening! If you do not know me I am Sten, this City’s Gym Leader. Now you may not have known but we have been watching from afar and we have evaluated on who should be your new King and Queen of the Ball…..Colin and Sakura!”

“Oh My Gosh! Colin we won!” said Sakura happily

“Cool!” and they both walked up to receive their crowns.

“We hope you all enjoyed this wonderful evening! The Gym will be open again tomorrow so if you want to challenge me come on ahead!’ said Sten

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“Ash this has been a wonderful night.” Said Misty

“Yeah it has. Especially because I was with you.” Ash said

“Well…. Goodnight” She was about to go into her room when Ash spoke up.

“Misty…Will you be my Girlfriend?” asked Ash blushing

“Hm? Oh Ash! I thought you’d never ask!”

But before he was about to leave they got closer, closer and finally…they kissed.

“Well, Goodnight Ash.” and Misty closed her Bedroom door.

“Wow” whispered Ash

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“Well Colin this night was wonderful. I have to thank you!” said Sakura and she kissed him as well!

“Wow..Umm..Thanks Sakura. I guess I’ll see you around then?” said Colin

“Yeah. I’ll see you soon.” said Sakura

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Ash thought it was a great evening and so did Colin, Sakura and Misty as they all slept great that night. But, little did they know that they were all being watched….A shadowy figure took a picture of all 4 of them. And who was this mysterious person? General Shasow of Ring of Doom…..
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Ok so that’s Episode 3!

Episode 4 Spoiler!!! Ash is getting ready for his Gym Battle. Sten and Ash are both ready but a Ring of Doom agent steals Sten’s Shiny Skarmory. Can they get it back?