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Ash's Inbox!

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FlamingRuby

The magic of Pokemon
Since the fans asked for it, here's Ash's spin on a mailbag!

(We see a sign in prompt on a computer: 'Welcome to KOL...please enter your username and password')

(Ash's hands appear and type "PokeMaster01" in the screenname prompt and some stars in the password prompt.)

Ash: Why should Brock have all the fun answering e-mails? (clicks the flashing envelope on the homepage, bringing up an e-mail)

Dear Ash:

Why do you always wear a hat?

Ash: Well, my headgear is special to me...there's the hat I had to send in a zillion postcards to get...

(we see Ash's classic hat)

Ash: And then there's my current favorite...

(we see Ash's AG hat)

Ash: Whichever one I chose it suits any occassion--(the letters start disappearing from Ash's reply) Huh? Pikachu!

(sure enough, Pikachu is deleting Ash's reply letter by letter...until he spots a certain button on the toolbar...)

Ash: DON'T CLICK THAT--! (Pikachu clicks "DELETE", making Ash's reply disappear) There goes that e-mail... (clicks the next one)

Dear Ash:
I heard a rumor that I'm told is true:
Does Misty really and truly love you?

Ash: Not the shipper that writes her e-mail in poetic style...I'm gonna give her a taste of her own medicine! (Pikachu laughs in the background as Ash composes his "poetic reply", as the poem goes on, his laughter intensifies)

Where'd you hear that one? It's pretty plain to see,
That I don't even know if Misty loves me!

She's held me tight, and mussed up my hair,
Argued with me in Kanto the whole time we were there!

She whined and pleaded for me to give her a new bike,
I was about on the verge of giving her a volleyball spike!

But we did patch things up, so I call her my friend
I'll always remember her even to the end. (clicks Send. Pikachu is laughing profusely)

Brock(voiceover): Guess I need to call the coffeehouse and sign you up for open mic night...

Ash: Ya like that, Pikachu? (Pikachu continues laughing as the homepage appears: "If you'd like to e-mail Ash, PM FlamingRuby and she'll send them on!")
 

Neko Godot

Hey! Listen!
That was good, though a little on the short side(okay, a lot). Keep it up and make it longer next time. Then you'll have a winner! :D
 

FlamingRuby

The magic of Pokemon
(We see a sign in prompt on a computer: 'Welcome to KOL...please enter your username and password')

(Ash's hands appear and type "PokeMaster01" in the screenname prompt and some stars in the password prompt.)

Ash: Access approved. Welcome to my inbox. (brings up an e-mail)

Dear Ash,

What was your friendship with Anabel like?


Ash: She was actually pretty friendly, and very clever in the arena...

I mean, she saved me once, so it's only natural I return the favor, right?

I really hope I see her again. (clicks next e-mail)

Dear Ash:
Don't you ever get bored while you are travelling around some random filler forest in the middle of nowhere?

Ash: Yeah, it does get boring every so often, but we have little timewasters to pass the time...we play games...

(Chibi Ash calls "Marco!" from behind a tree, to which Chibi Misty yells back "Polo!" Chibi Brock sighs)

Ash: We sing songs...

(We see Chibi Ash, Chibi Misty, and Chibi Brock skipping along and singing "valderi, valdera, valderi, valderah-ah-ah-ah!")

Pikachu: Pika pi, pika chu, pika pi, pika chu-u-u-u!

Ash: You like that too? (clicks the next e-mail)

Dear Ash

Do you like Misty? Or do you like May?


Ash: I like them both, actually...

Sure, Misty can be a pain sometimes...

(we see Chibi Misty screaming at Chibi Ash)

But inside, she really does care about you. May, meanwhile is just so happy and outgoing...but put her in the contest hall and she fights like a League Champion!

(we see memorable contest scenes)

Ash: Although, there was that time she cheaply won against Brock...

Brock(voiceover): Let's not go there, okay? (the homepage appears: "If you'd like to e-mail Ash, PM FlamingRuby and she'll send them on!")
 

Stephy

candies!!!11
Ash: Yeah, it does get boring every so often, but we have little timewasters to pass the time...we play games...

(Chibi Ash calls "Marco!" from behind a tree, to which Chibi Misty yells back "Polo!" Chibi Brock sighs)

Ash: We sing songs...

(We see Chibi Ash, Chibi Misty, and Chibi Brock skipping along and singing "valderi, valdera, valderi, valderah-ah-ah-ah!")

Pikachu: Pika pi, pika chu, pika pi, pika chu-u-u-u!

Ash: You like that too? (clicks the next e-mail)

XD That got me laughing! The image that popped in my mind out of nowhere, was incredibly funny! Now I'm going to ask Ash a question...-laughs again when read the part where they sang songs-
 
Hey, another good story FR. I'll be sending you PM's soon, but I can't right now. Maybe later tonight. This was my favorite part:

FlamingRuby said:
Ash: Yeah, it does get boring every so often, but we have little timewasters to pass the time...we play games...

(Chibi Ash calls "Marco!" from behind a tree, to which Chibi Misty yells back "Polo!" Chibi Brock sighs)

Ash: We sing songs...

(We see Chibi Ash, Chibi Misty, and Chibi Brock skipping along and singing "valderi, valdera, valderi, valderah-ah-ah-ah!")

Pikachu: Pika pi, pika chu, pika pi, pika chu-u-u-u!

That part wa just too funny :D
 

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
.. this doesn't seem like a fic or a script to me. This just seems like an interactive thing that could be in games. Because seriously, this is not funny, this does not have a fic feel to it. It feels like it's only in script because Flaming Ruby was too lazy to put effort into writing out any real paragraphs, sorry I know scripting can be hard but this just doesn't have .. any spark to it.

Flaming Ruby you have talent ... stop wasting it >.>'
 
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