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Battle b-daman:the true story

Z

zink

Guest
Intro: battle b-daman is a show about a bunch of kids who travel around saving the world from the neo-shadow alliance, and try to destroy it completely. Everyone uses gun like shooters to duel. They are called b-daman, and shoot balls call b-daballs.

This is a b-daman RP with none of the previous characters, except for Mardabie, and Diarcay. Also, it is similar to the show... But we use our own characters (It takes place in the b-daworld)

Plot: It was a dark and stormy night, the legendary b-daman maker Flatchorro, was climbing the sacred b-da-alter, so he could deliver to the world his newest b-daman parts, they were the best parts in all existence. He placed them on the alter and sacrificed, them. He prayed that they reach the chosen b-daplayers, because an evil lord who goes by the name of mardabie. The giant b-daball began to shine, and the parts took flight, Flatchorro looked up, and prayed his request be fulfilled.

MEANWHILE

Zero, a young boy who lives in the quiet town of B-Davillage, was running around, he was playing with his new armourless b-daman, when suddenly, a pile of parts fell in front of him, he was thrilled, so he attached them to his b-daman, the amour was pretty, it was very shiny, and a platinum silver color. He eagerly darted home to show his dad Sevve, his new b-daman. Sevve was impressed as he was a b-daman blacksmith.

“Hey son, we are new here and I need to start business, could you go hang up a poster on the message board out there, and while you’re out there, you should go and make some friends.”

“Ok dad!”

Yelled Zink as rushed out the door, he kept heading north till he reached the board. He took a vacant space and firmly pinned the poster on the board. He looked for some kids, but the town was full of adults. He kept looking, hey, you never know, someone might find him.

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Full name: Zero Blaze
Appearance: He has long light brown hair that sticks in every direction, he wears, a plain light blue singlet shirt, and over it he wears a denim blue jacket, his long jeans, are the same color as his jacket, he also has a yellow backpack.
Personality: enthusiastic, has a strong sense of justice, and likes to play a lot. He has a very strong passion for b-daman and is very innocent.
Age: 11(must be from 9-12)
Gender: male
B-daman: Silver hero
Special move: silver death: shoots a powerful silver b-daball, which creates extreme silver fire and burns all in its path.
B-daman type : ( can be power, control, accuracy, rapid fire or balance.)Power.
B-daball color: blue

(In your 1st post, you must meet my character and whoever
Is with me, I will introduce the shadow alliance once we have 4-6 people.)

http://www.hasbro.com/battlebdaman/default.cfm?page=tvClick on that link and look to get all the informaion you need
 
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Shadowfaith

Shinigami...
You need to explain the anime a little more. Ones who wish to join this may not know of the anime, you allways have to take that into account when creating an RPG based off of an existing anime/game.

Who are the neo shadow aliance, and how do these group of people manage to save the world? What was the threat in the beginning?

Who is Flachorro and why is he so well know? And further more what is this alter and how does he know about this evil that is on its way to the world?

You may also want describe what this evil is capable of and perhaps also decribe the world the RPG takes place on a little more.

I also find it a little weird that Zero would place these parts onto his B-daman when they just magically dropped to the floor in front of him XP

You have your basic plot, but you need to go into a little more detail, m'kay.
 
Z

zink

Guest
Oh, well I know it is a slight enigma, but I can answer your questions

1-3 These answers will be revealed shortly, as I have planned the twists for the story line.Also, we shall find out as the story progresses, y'know, not to ruin the surprise and suspence, y'know what I mean?

4 As I said in my personality section, he is an innocent and enthusiastic child.It's in his nature.

So is this cleared up now?
 

Shadowfaith

Shinigami...
No XP

Firs off (I'm suprised I didn't notice earlier) this is in the wrong forum. You must start a sign up in the sign up forum before you can post in the proper section (says so in the rules) and then after you have the sign ups you need, you can post a thread in the mains.

You may have a plot twist, but members need to know who these characters are and what the world looks like. And I would also go more into detail about the battle system if I were you too. Also, do not answer the questions I have asked you, edit them into the first post.
 
Z

zink

Guest
Huh, sign up forum?
Oh! Sorry...
May I put a link to the b-daman website to explain more about it?
 

Lily

you were the one.
If it's solely for information and not advertising, then I see no problem with that. Make sure to edit your first post, though. ^^;
 
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