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Battle Frontier: Attack Of The Shadows

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Moonlight Locust

Wait, am I back? Wow
Well here's my third and main fic! I have proof-read it and edited lied to lay. I have used a spell checker and everything! The prologue's three pages long while the chapter should be at least eight. I know there's hardly any description but I'm not good at it. It's rated PG-PG13 for violance.

Oh and the Battle Frontier's now altogether but still in Kanto. There's a port that leads it to a brand new town called Fiorar Town. Here are two non-dub names for episodes:
1. Avery!!! Shadow Peon??!!??
2. Micheal, Battle Of The Brains!

Well let's get started!

Contents(updated every two updates):
Prologue

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DISCLAIMER: I do not own pokémon or any human characters. There may be cameos too.
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Battle Frontier: Attack Of The Shadows


Prologue


“I wish he was here. I wish he wasn't up there. I wish. I wish.”

Anabel lay there. She was a tall twenty year old with purple hair. It had a small spike coming out of the side. She wore purple clothes and had the top button of her purple shirt open. She missed Ash.

She lay down, ready to sleep. Just then she noticed a leak. It got bigger and bigger. It got so big she left her bed room.

“I hope this isn't happening at the Battle Tower,”Anabel said to herself.

She ran to Battle Tower...
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Meanwhile at the new Battle Maze a man stood near a chair. He wore red sun-glasses, a blue business suit, blue jeans and a dark grey tie. His hair was blue and was all spiked up. This man was Avery, the Battle Maze Champion. On the other side of the room was a boy wearing a blue cap, a yellow top, yellow jeans and grey shoes. This boy was the challenger, Jamie.

“Two on two,double battle agree?” Avery asked Jamie.

“Anything to win a challenge symbol,” Jamie said.

“Then let's go!” Avery shouted as he got out two pokéballs.
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PKMN Trainer Jamie would like to battle!
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“Go Flygon! Go Exploud!” Jamie shouted as he threw two pokéballs.

One of the creature that came out had a strange shape. It had lots of horn like items on it's head and they had holes on them. It was purple. It had big, buff arms and big, buff legs. It was an Exploud.

The other creature looked like a mix between a bird and a dragonfly. It had giant green wings and yellow eyes at the side of it's head. On the end of it's green tale it had a small book like object that was also green. It was a Flygon.

“Go Blastoise! Go Feraligatr!” Avery shouted as he tossed two blue balls with green triangles on them.

One of the creatures that came out was a giant alligator. It was blue with red spikes on it's back. It had a big mouth with giant teeth. It was a Feraligatr.

The other creature looked like a blue giant tortoise on two legs. It had cannons in it's shell. It was a Blastoise.

“Use Fly Flygon!” Jamie said.

Flygon flew up into the air.

“Blastoise Hydro Pump Exploud!” Avery said.

Blastoise shot a giant amount of water out of it's cannon but it missed Exploud.

“Grrr! Exploud use Hyper Voice!”

Exploud sent a loud sound at Feraligatr.

“Feraligatr! Iron Tail!”

Feraligatr's tail glew white and whacked Exploud.

“Exploud's fainted!” A man in a booth said.

“Flygon make that Feraligatr faint!” Jamie said.

Flygon flew down and made Feraligatr faint.

“Uh...uh. Blastoise use Shadow Rush!” Avery said.

Blastoise charged up as a purple aura went around it. It charged straight at Flygon and made it faint.

“What! An illegal attack!”
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Avery ran up to Jamie and knocked him out. Then he threw him out the window...
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Meanwhile at the non-wet part of the Battle Tower...

“What could of caused this?” Anabel asked a man in red shorts, red shirt and red sun-glasses.

He wore a blue jacket and had sticking up red hair. He was the local plumber.

“Yup,” the plumber said. “It's a Blastoise and Feraliatr's work.”

“Wait!”

“What?”

“Only one person could of done this,” Anabel said, sighing.

“Who?” the plumber asked.

“Avery...”
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Well that's it! Enjoy!
-Blue Meowth;manafi;
 
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Yami Ryu

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Ok you definately need to go http://serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=19 http://serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=96993 to those two threads and READ them.

Then you need to write this out in a word program, and not the reply box.

Next put some effort into it to make it not seem like a script and a story's horror love child.

Then maybe practice a few times to make sure you actually know what you're doing, before posting the first chapter.

Oh and also, since this is NOT the games, or the Anime and we can NOT SEE the pokemon attacking. You need to DESCRIBE the battle scenes.
 

Moonlight Locust

Wait, am I back? Wow
Whoops sorry. I did type thsi in my word processor so I'll request this to be closed for a while. I'll tehn request it to be re-opened when I'm done. Sorry.
-Blue Meowth;manafi;
 
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