Bayleef, man. LOVE it.

[Raunchy_fad]

Hey guys. I've gone and got myself some nice bored times, so I went onto my old friend Appleworks 6 and started doodling. So for all you ugly shmoes surfing the forums, here's a nice li'l Bayleef. Just the head, though. You can't really change the size of the image in Appleworks so I couldn't quite fit the whole body in.

Critisism's welcome (I guess...), and sorry for the Paint-esque picture, all my good pictures are on paper, and you see, my scanner's still not working, and it's driving me crazy... ... ... man.

Or click here if for some reason your computer's dumb and it doesn't show up. Jeez.

 

[Comis Patronus]

It's just rough-neck is too long, more shading, needs line coordination, the leaf is also too big, and kinda small head. Other than that, it's fine.

 

[Chaotic Houndoom]

Yeah, the neck is a little long, other then that, its great! =D

 

[Raunchy_fad]

WHOOOAA!! Posts within seconds of posting! I love you guys.

It's just rough-neck is too long, more shading, needs line coordination, the leaf is also too big, and kinda small head. Other than that, it's fine.

You'd better believe it's rough! Mice don't make things nice and neat unless you spend hours and hours and hours, and I don't have that time.
Enough with my excuses, though, like, ya really think the necks too long? I'll admit it's kinda ugly and kinda.. indent-y, but not really all too long. I mean, you look at an apatosaur and they've got long necks and li'l heads. Aw well, thanks for your imput anyway, man.

 

[Yami Ryu]

Yeah but the thing is, Bayleef don't have small heads, and it just doesn't fit with that excuse as even though large sauropods had long necks and little heads, they had thinner necks near the head, and your bayleef pic doesn't have that. So it's like seeing a child's hand where an adults hand should be. It just doesn't fit.

The rolled leaves don't look great either, they, like the head are too small.

And just because it takes time to draw with a mouse, you can save it for a later day. That's what I do when I can't finish a pic in a few hours or a day. Just take your time and don't rush, otherwise you won't get better.

 

[Raunchy_fad]

Yeah but the thing is, Bayleef don't have small heads, and it just doesn't fit with that excuse as even though large sauropods had long necks and little heads, they had thinner necks near the head, and your bayleef pic doesn't have that. So it's like seeing a child's hand where an adults hand should be. It just doesn't fit.

The rolled leaves don't look great either, they, like the head are too small.

And just because it takes time to draw with a mouse, you can save it for a later day. That's what I do when I can't finish a pic in a few hours or a day. Just take your time and don't rush, otherwise you won't get better.

Haha, that there's some goood critisism. Thanks a lot for your imput, man, I appreciate it.

As for improve, well, I'm working on it... well, not really. I only go to Appleworks for last resorts when I want some opinions from other people, and like the Charizard I did before this, the outcome was sub-par.

Promise soon as I get my scanner up we'll get something worth looking at for a change.