Be a Hero (songfic)

[Morpher01]

So, I'm having a REALLY strong urge to write a theme song for "Saga of Heroes, Chapter 1". So.....

.....here it is. This is my first time writing a songfic, so help would be appreciated.

Be a Hero​

*rock guitar solo*


Heeeeero, heeeeero.
Beeeeee a heeeeeero!!!

*rock guitar continues*

A shark attack changes a man,
Into a he-ro-ic shark-man.
His name is Shark-i-mus,
turning e-vil doers to pus!

*rock guitar again*

Sonic, the hedgehog,
is a he-ro-ic hedgehog.
Allied with Knuckles the echidna,
They're gonna de-feat ya!

*rock guitar solo*

Spider-spider-spider-man,
Does what-ever a spider can,
To help citizens of Station Square,
be safe from dark hard-ware!

*rock guitar*

The villain's Doc-tor Egg-man,
An egg-shaped man-man!
He wants to rule-the-world,
as a ro-bot-ized world!

*rock guitar*

To-ge-ther, they will stop Egg-man!
That egg-shaped man-man!
Nei-ther will go down without a fight,
So hero fans, sit tiiiiiiiiiiight!

*rock guitar*

Anyone can be-a-he-ro,
They just have to act like-a-he-ro,
And then they can be-a-he-ro,
In others eyes as-a-he-ro!

*rock guitar goes long, then stops*

Beeeeee a heeeee-rooooooo...

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[Silver Ryu]

Whoops...accedently rated this a five....0_o I meant to rate it lower.

I'm sorry, but this thing kinda sucks. it's not that great. The song, I mean. You really need work. The fic isn't that great, either. I don't understand why you decided to set it in the Sonic world. It might be OK if it weren't for that.

I'm sorry, but you really do need work. Especially with songwriting.