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Beginnings of a Master

Articunomew

I'm not normal
Heya. I found this story was fairly popular on other sites, so I decided to try it out on here! Let me know what you think, and if I can improve.


The sun was starting to peek over the horizon when Sam Sapphire, snuck to the mailbox and stole a small page from the local newspaper.

His little brother, furious at not being old enough to be allowed to train pokemon, had torn up this sheet ever since Sam was eligible for the prize. Sam’s older sister, Ani, had won one of the places in the contest.

Sam snuck back into the house and tiptoed into his room. He shut the door quietly, and then locked it. He walked calmly over to his desk, satisfied that Josh had no way to get the paper he held in his hand. But, like almost all younger brothers, Josh had managed to find his way into Sam’s room in the few seconds that Sam had been gone.

“Excuse me, but I believe that belongs to me.”

Sam whirled around. His little brother was standing on his desk chair. Sam held the precious paper to his left. Josh lunged for it, then Sam yanked it away just in time for Josh to miss it. What he didn’t miss, however, was the wall. He flew, headfirst into the wall, creating a crash loud enough that Sam was afraid it might wake Kyogre and Grouden from their sleep in Hoenn.

“What’s goin’ on in there?” Yelled his mother, Fiona. She had been asleep but was now awake. At least something woke up from their deep sleep. Sam thought ruefully to himself, and then opened his mouth.

“Josh’s trying to steal my paper!” Sam yelled quickly. That was the only way to get the paper safe. His mother hated the two of them fighting over things. But she hated getting woken up worse.

“JOSHUA JACOB SAPPHIRE! GET YOUR REAR END INTO YOUR ROOM! IF I HEAR ANOTHER NOISE FROM EITHER OF YOU, I’LL FLOG YOU FROM HERE TO KANTO!” My mother screeched. Josh walked past Sam on his way to the door, but not without another attempt on the paper.

Sam snatched it out of Josh’s range in the blink on an eye. Sam knew Josh’s tricks, and had grown use to avoiding them over the years. “Move it or lose it.” Sam said, motioning to his door. Josh slunk out, looking like a depressed Growlithe.

Sam rolled his eyes. He then grabbed his laptop and its carrying case. Sam would do the sheet at his Secret Base.

23rd of Moltres, 2004 A.P.W

Sam sat down at the comfort desk that his Dad had brought for him and sighed. He wasn’t feeling up to writing an essay, but Josh had been ripping up every newspaper for the past week, a further action to stop Sam from entering the contest. Sighing again, he rested a hand on his head and looked around his Secret Base. His father had made the base for him, but his father was currently at the Elite Tower, seeing if he would remain the Gym Leader for Latios Town for the next five years. It was standard on Southern Island. Every five years, the Gym Leaders had to go to Elite Tower, and a week-long tournament would be held, to decide who would be a Gym Leader, or an Elite Four member, for the next five years.

The base itself was cluttered with Pokemon Dolls and other ornaments. Most of them had been sent by Ani, on a regular basis, as she traveled around the world. A Lapras Doll resided in the corner, looking down at the smaller Pokedolls in what looked like contempt, yet, patience.

Looking back down at the sheet in his hand, Sam studied the actual writing. The sheet was an entry form to a Pokemon Contest, run every year by the International Pokemon League. Every year, a region was randomly chosen, as were two professors who would bring three Pokemon from their home regions, plus another Pokemon supplied by the International League.

Sam stared down at the paper, thinking hard. This year Professor Birch, the best scientist in Hoenn, was on the board, which meant that Treecko, Torchic and Mudkip would be a choice.

Professor Elder, a man represent Forenzis, the great artic continent to the south, would put forth Senvar, a small, black, chubby bear which was a Dark/Normal type would be shown. Hekark, a large, green, fluffy Grass/ Ice type that was able to put itself into hibernation for years, would be a choice.

And Frezint, the small pre-evolution of Frezent, an Ice/Dragon type with small, wiry blue wings would be there.

And Professor Willow, a hurly burly, muscular woman was going to be there too.

She would present pokemon like Liktretch, the pre-evolution of Lickitung, a small purple blob, Yoryu, a yak-like pokemon with bright red wool and Qizret, the strange Quiz pokemon that didn’t say it’s name. More irritating still, it spoke in riddles.

Sam leaned back in his chair. To get any one of those would be a dream.

It might not be made true if he didn’t do the sheet.

Name: Sam Sapphire Gender: Male

Age: 10 11 12 13 14 15 16

Sam grinned. This was one of his most eligible years. People who were 10 or 11 were almost always discarded without a second thought.

15 and 16 year olds were starting to get sick of pokemon by then.

Sam circled ‘14’ with a large circle.

Pokemon License Number: 482-10840

Region: Hoenn/ Southern Island.

Town: Latios Town.

Address: 17 Articuno Street.

Sam placed his pen down, and then stared hard and long at the subject of the Thousand Word topic that they were supposed to do.

‘Pokemon Legends’ was the topic. Sam stifled a grin. Professor Elder was renowned because of his obsession with legends. Professor Elder had probably put this down while the other two were arguing.

Sam knew exactly which pokemon legend to do. People had a choice. Choose a human legend, or a Pokemon Legendary. Sam knew exactly what to choose. His favorite pokemon was a legendary. Articuno, the Titan of Ice. He had loved Articuno ever since he had seen the movie “Pokemon 2000.”

Sam sincerely hoped that Ash Ketchum’s pokemon journey was not like that. If it was, Sam thought that it would be the corniest journey ever. Every episode on TV was the same.

“Pikachu! Use your Thunderbolt! Huh? Why isn’t it working!”

“Tough luck kid. We’ve made these arm/ machine Pika-proof. Ha ha.”

Sam rolled his eyes again. He started off on the essay, his pencil eventually becoming half of a blur.. Mid-way through it, he was interrupted by a ring from his Poke-Nav. He jumped, and a long, black streak went up the page he was writing on. Grimacing, Sam grabbed a rubber and reach for his Poke-Nav at the same time.

“Hello, Sam Sapphire.” Sam had the annoying tendency to say instead ‘Hello, Sapphire residence, Sam here, may I ask who’s speaking please?’ at his home phone. When he wasn’t using the home-phone, he simply used whatever came to mind when he picked up his Poke-Nav.

“Hi. Are you coming home for breakfast?” It was his mother. If Sam wasn’t there when she woke up, she always called his Poke-Nav. And if she couldn’t get on to his Poke-Nav, she went into a state of panic. Her Pokemon, however, knew better. They automatically went up to Sam’s base, knowing exactly where it was, so it wasn’t hidden from them.

“Doubt it. You know this is the first year I’ve managed to get this contest paper. So it makes sense that I’ll spend tons of time on it.” Sam explained. He wanted to get back to his essay quickly. Which was unusual for Sam, because he HATED homework with a passion.

“Ok. The weather reporter said that it should get cold and start raining. I’ll send Hotspot and Cestrer up if that happens.” Hotspot and Cestrer were his mother’s Combusken and Castform. In winter, Hotspot usually slept. While she slept, she produced a lot of heat. Cestrer was an interesting pokemon, even by Castform standards. Unlike most Castform, he could change the weather, but only for a zone of five metres away from him.

Meaning that, for example, when it was raining, there was a bubble of dry air around Cestrer.

“Yep. Send ‘em up with some food too. If I stay the night, we don’t want to little darlings getting hungry.” Sam rolled his eyes. Hotspot liked him ok, but Cestrer hated him for some reason. If Sam was carrying him while it was raining, he would always suck in the bubble of protection back into himself, getting Sam drenched and him snickering.

“I will. I’ll send them with some food for you too.” Said Fiona. Sam could already hear her bustling around the kitchen. “Ok, I’ll see you later then.”

“Yep. Bye!” Sam withdrew his Poke-Nav from his ear.

Sam shook his head, and then went back to the essay. By the time he had finished, the time, according to his Poke-Nav, was Six Pm.

Sam stared at his Poke-Nav. How could the day have gone by so fast? Then Sam yelped. The application had to be posted by seven!
 
Well this is ringing bells. Ever read Tezza's The Feathers Will Fly? It had an essay competition to start as a trainer as well, as well as siblings. Eh, I'll be interested to see how your fic shapes up, especially with new and original pokemon.

I thought it was a tad cliched that the application had to be in at seven. Almost as bad as the trainer running late to receive the pokemon. But not quite. ^^

I liked the little touch about Sam's phone answering habits. Strikes a familiar chord, it does. ^^ It's things like that that bring a story just that bit closer to reality.

Anyway, you've got a lot of potential here, so I'll say good luck for now! PM me if you're after readers/reviewers.

Piney.
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Articunomew

I'm not normal
Yeah, I have. Topaz and my own fics are set in the same world. I emailed her, asking if I could be a part of her fanfdom Pokemon area. Expect to see some of her own regions and Pokemon in there!

C ya!
 
Articunomew! T'is you! I read chapter 13 back at TPT yesterday! This fic is pretty good, y'know? The only thing I can see that your fic has in common with another is that [SPOIL]Polienix, Magenix, and Anticarion[/SPOIL] are in Obsidian Blade's "Raven" fic.

EDIT: I noticed you had trouble with altering words with things like italics, but Serebii.net has its own formatting tools, seeing as how everything is the same copied and pasted into the Go Advanced Post Box, and any formatting you did on any word processing program isn't there. Just highlight and click on the tool. Like so:

Articunomew before: Articunomew

Articunomew formatted with italics: Articunomew
 
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Articunomew

I'm not normal
Hey!
YEp, you got it. Beginnings of a Master is a fic that's joined with Topaz's 'The Wings of Council', Obsidian Blade's 'Raven' and some other fics by authors people know.
Thanks for the review, and I'll try to keep that in mind. *Starts muttering as he looks over the Prologue again*
 

Articunomew

I'm not normal
Chapter One

I was lying in mud, dying. I groaned as blood pooled around me. Well, that wasn’t what really happened. It was a pretty good way to describe the wait during the time between me posting the letter and the answer getting back to me.

I waited two weeks after I posted the letter. After that, I couldn’t stand it anymore. You would always find me standing at the letterbox at 6:00 in the morning waiting for the postman. I actually considered pitching up a tent next to the letterbox. My mother talked me out of though.

Once I had collected the mail, I always spent the rest of the day studying. Thank Mew it was the holidays. I usually went to bed at 9:30, but now I went at 11:30, only when Mum cut the power off because I refused to get of the Poke’Net.

And finally, on the Sixth of the month Ho oh, I got it. Technically Josh got it. I was (unfortunately) shopping with my Grandmother. When I came home, I found Josh bawling his eyes out and waving a blue letter around. I stared at him, and then my attention was drawn to the letter. My eyes widened, and then I lunged.

Josh wasn’t upset enough to let me have the letter without a fight. After I had wrestled the letter from his grasp (Using a hold that my Dad’s Machamp had taught me), I ran to my room and flipped the lock again. Ignoring the pounding of Josh, I sat down on my big Wailmer doll and finally read my prize.

Dear Mr Sapphire,

Professors Rowan, Elder and I, Willow, read your essay and were deeply impressed. We were impressed by the descriptions and the facts. Why, I didn’t even know some of the facts that you knew about Articuno! This is why we have decided to give you third place of the lucky Ten! Congratulations! Enclosed with this letter is a plane ticket to Comed Town in the Dictioy Region and your Trainer Card. Your Trainer Card will only activate when the International League has recognised you as an Official Trainer. Again congratulations and we hope you will be able to attend the ceremony.

Professor .H. Willow


I stared at the piece of paper in my hand. Excitement was building up. A second later, it exploded. “YES! YES! YES!” I yelled.

I quickly unbolted the door and dashed towards the kitchen where my mother and Grandmother were probably having tea. In the process of dashing, my mother’s favourite lamp was suddenly in danger. As I turned the corner around the kitchen I yelled, “LOOK! LOOK!” I was too excited to explain.

“Sam, what’s wrong? Josh came to me crying. He was too upset to tell me what. And now you’re yelling. What happened?” My mother asked, her scowl appearing slowly on her face. Josh was huddled up, sulking in the chair next to her.

I quickly passed her the letter, and then proceeded to dance a victory dance around the room. When I had collapsed onto a chair and passed a glance at my mother, I noticed that she was pale. She then went several different colours. Some of which were probably undiscovered. When her face had finally settled on a deep crimson, my heart sank. She was either gonna start crying or forbid me to go.

Please start crying. Let me go! Let me go! PLEASE! I thought. I know it was heartless, but I really wanted to go. I let out a small.” Well?” And braced myself.

To my amazement, my mother drew a deep breathe and passed the letter to my grandmother. She stared at me for a moment. I spared a glance at Josh and he had a huge grin on his face. I made a face at him, and then turned back to my mother. Even more to my surprise, her eyes were glistening. She let out a croak. “Do you want to go?”

I nodded violently. Josh was losing his smirk. My mother sighed again, and then said. “I guess I can’t stop you then. You won this fair and square, just like your sister.” She looked up and gave me a wry grin. “I guess my children are TOO creative. Why don’t you go pack? That way I can sort through it before you leave and remember the stuff you forgot.”

I nodded again, and then caught sight of Josh. His lip was s-l-o-w-l-y coming out, and then. “MUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMM!!!!!!” He yelled. I dashed out of the kitchen. I had sensitive hearing. I don’t particularly want my hearing gone.

“Ready to go?” My mum asked. It had been to weeks since I had received the letter. During those three weeks, several things had happened. Seven people I didn’t even know came up to me and asked me to swap with them so they could go. My friends had asked to swap so that they could go. Josh asked to swap so he could go. My MOTHER asked to swap so she could go! (She had gotten sick of me and Josh bickering) And my Mum threw a huge party for me. The party was great. My whole family came, and I received very useful presents.

From my Aunts (Father’s side): Upgrade Card for my Poke-Nav so it could show pokemon from all over the world.

From my Aunt (Mother’s side): Upgrade Card for my Poke-Nav so that it had Pokenet access. (Trust me, those things aren’t cheap)

From my Mum and Dad: A series of Books which showed pokemon from the twelve regions of the world: Metone, Johto, Kanto, Oore, Forenzis, Janera, Hoenn, Werntio, Poligem, Quatra, Dictoy and Zelbimare.

From my Grandma (Father’s side): Several fantasy books for me to read.

From my Grandparents (Mother’s side): More books.

But the best came from my sister, Ani: An Ultraball, a pokemon journal and a POKEMON EGG!

“This is a pokemon egg,” She said, as she held it out to me. “In it is a Polienix, a rare pokemon from Janera.” “Wow.” I replied, as I gently took the egg. “How did you get it?”

“Simple. I bred it from my own Anticairon. And trust me, she loves you and everything, but she was extremely reluctant to give you one of her eggs. She seemed to think that you weren’t responsible enough. Imagine that.” Ani finished with a wide grin.

I gave her a playful glare, and then shook my head. “Thank you. And I can’t imagine why she would think I wasn’t responsible. But then, she never knew YOU when we were kids.” I gave her another grin, and then stepped to the ducked to avoid her swipe at my head.

“Quiet you. She might hear you.” Ani hissed, but her eyes were dancing with amusement. “Anyone, who do you think you are to criticize me? Mum?” She asked with fake indignation.

“No, I don’t. I think I’m your little brother that’s bigger than you, MUM!” I laughed as I took off. I ran straight to my bedroom, and then placed the egg careful next to my heater. “I’ll call you Hera or Zeus, depending on what gender you are. Either way, we’ve got work to do.” I whispered to it.

I thought about the egg after I had gotten onto the plane. It had to go through security first. They checked what species, what stage of hatching it was at, etc. The only useful thing they told me was that it would hatch in the next few days.

I sighed and sat down to read one of the pokemon books I was given. I started with the encyclopaedia of the pokemon in Kanto. I read it, pumping it of facts. I learnt that, of the 1056 pokemon that inhabited the earth, 151 of them were first discovered in Kanto. Kanto was also the place where the current International Champion, Ash Ketchum, had first started his Pokemon Journey. I read some of his major accomplishments, and then started on the Pokemon.

#0001: Bulbasaur
Type: Seed
Element: Grass
Attacks: Grass, Normal and Poison
Born with: Tackle, Growl Lv 7: Leach Seed Lv 14: Vine Whip-


The next thing I knew, was a voice calling over the loudspeaker (Trust me; they aren’t called LOUD speakers for nothing.)

“We have landed in Comed Town. Thank you for flying Dragon-Air!” Said the altogether, too cheerful Pilot.

“Yeah, yeah.” I moaned. I grabbed by bag from the overhead rack, and then grabbed the egg at my side. As I (Somehow) stumbled off the plane, I looked around for familiar signs of life. I spotted a man waving a sign that said ‘Sapphire’ and stumbled over to him.

“Sam Sapphire, so glad you could join me.” Said the man. I looked at him, and then grinned.

“Right. Thank you for agreeing to pick me up, Mr Anderson.” I said in a sarcastic tone. This was getting a bit too much like a movie for my taste.

The man stopped dead. “My name is Joe and I would advise you to keep any sarcastic remarks to yourself while I am ferrying you around.” He said. Then he leaned closer to me. “Do I make myself clear, Mr Sapphire?”

“Yes. Transparently. In fact, even more clearly than that.” I said quickly. Here was guy that I didn’t want to mess with. At least, not while I was half asleep. I can’t remember the trip to the hotel I was staying at, but I do remember the room.

“Wow.” I said as I stepped through the door. It was a suite. Actually it was a small dingy room, brown walls, brown bed and a brown light. I wrinkled my nose at the bath as I looked into the bathroom. “Brown bath too.” I muttered. I got out of there quickly. “And to think, Mum said no place could get worse than my room. On second thoughts, she was right.” I grimaced. I HATED being wrong!

I knew I wasn’t going to get to sleep with Mew knows what on my bed. So I grabbed the ‘Pokemon Encyclopaedia of Kanto’ again and started reading again. The only time I stopped was when I went down to grab five cans of coke from the Drink Machine in the lobby. When I returned, I went back to my book.

One book, five cans of coke and a painful backside later, the sun finally came over the horizon. I sighed with relief, put down my book (‘The Pokemon Encyclopaedia of Johto”) and started to gather my stuff.

I set off towards the Birch Pokemon Lab, complaining about disgusting beds in disgusting motels with disgusting bathtubs. By the time I had finished complaining, I had walked half-way towards the Lab. I have an extremely short boredom tolerance, so I took out the ‘Johto’ book again. I was just up to Blissey, when a shadow fell across my page. I looked up. I was at the lab, but a young girl stood in my way.

“Hey, looky here. I’ve got a book-worm, probably one of Willow’s assistants.” She sneered to herself.

I delivered one of my best death glares. It didn’t faze the girl at all. “As a matter of fact, I’m one of the ten children who won a pokemon.” I retorted coldly. “Don’t mess with me. I haven’t had any sleep and I’ve got powers you probably don’t.” When I was sleep and irritated, I generally throw my psychic powers around. So namely, that’s every morning.

The girl smirked again. “Ooooh. I’m so scared. Whatcha going to do? Throw your book at me? I’m so scared.” I heard a gaggle of scared laughter from behind the girl. I looked over her and saw three other kids huddled by a corner of the building.

I stared at her, and then felt the rush that showed I was using my psychic powers. The first sign I was using my psychic powers was happening. My eyes started glowing. The girl took a step back, and then laughed, not as hearty as it was before.

“Ooh. That’s a neat trick. Let me guess, your mother was a Mightyena that used Intimidate once too often.” She said and started laughing again.

Now she had me peeved. With a quick dart of my hand and a psychic push, I sent her across the street. I smiled sweetly at her. “Are you gonna leave me alone now?” I yelled at her.

She gave me a scared, venomous look. Without another word, she scuttled across the road, past me and into the building. I shook my head and glanced at the others hiding in the corner.

I smiled. The looked ridiculous, huddled out of sight. “Don’t worry,” I said. “I won’t bite.” Then, I said under, my breathe, “Much.”

“I heard that.” A voice came from behind me. I turned and looked up, and up, and up. A REALLY tall guy was there. He smiled. “Hi, I’m Nick. I was about to come out and tell her,” With his thumb, he indicated the girl who had been bullying people. “To quit it.

“Sure you did.” I said. I rolled my eyes. “Anyway, I’m Sam, Sam Sapphire. “ I tried to get past, but he stepped in front of me. I looked up at him through my coppery fringe. I tried to beat him in a staring contest, but his blue eyes just wouldn’t shut.

He suddenly laughed a sound that was like a foghorn. “What do you know? We’ve both got names related to rock then. My last name is Boulder. I’m the son of Bruno.” When he saw my blank face, he tried again. “You know Bruno? The Elite Fight Master? The Bruno of the Elite Four?”

“No. I don’t pay much attention to fighting pokemon. Or Fighting Pokemon Masters.” I said. I tried stepping past him again, but he blocked me again. I sighed. With a grunt of effort, I teleported to the other side of him and walked into the building. I looked back over my shoulder to see him staring at me, stunned.

I smiled, then staggered to the nearest seat. A sleepless night, then teleporting really takes the strength out of you. I sat for a while, catching my breath. For the third time that day, a shadow fell across me. I looked up, squinting. When they moved out of the light, I could finally see who it was.

“Sam. Glad to see you made it. How are you?” Asked Professor Rowan. He was grinning.

“I’m tired. I didn’t sleep last night and I just had to teleport to get past a road-block. With a nod of my head, I indicated Nick. “You know how much teleporting tires me.” Professor Rowan was the man who had helped me discover the extent of my powers, which weren’t much.

“I see. The ceremony is about to begin. Why don’t you sneak in with me? You can have two chances to see the pokemon then.” He asked, his eyes twinkling with mirth. He and I had had several, heated debates about what pokemon were best in the Legendary Circles. Not to mention, I had helped him set up pokemon cages for any wounded pokemon brought in. I was basically a walking pokedex.

I grinned. “That would be cool.” I admitted. I had thought about each of the ten pokemon available constantly. I had narrowed my choices down to Mudkip, Torchic or a Frezint. I got up and followed Professor Rowan into the room. It was dark, and then he flicked the lights on. I gasped. The room was huge! But what caught my attention was the four, glass enclosures at the side of the room.

I rushed over to the one nearest, and found a Qizret, a Senvar and a Treecko looking at me through bleary eyes. They had obviously been sleeping. The Treecko glared at me with wrath, I backed away slowly. It probably thought I was responsible for waking it up.

I went to the next inclosure. In it was a Mudkip, a Frezint and a Yoryu staring at me. I smiled at Yoryu’s bright red fur, and then turned to inspect Mudkip and Frezint. Frezint stood up on the tips of its feet to get a closer look at me. When it realised it couldn’t get high enough to see me clearly, it flapped its pathetic blue wings to hover a metre and a half from the ground. I stepped back, and then stood stock-still. Frezint flew over the glass to float in front of me. It started to inspect me slowly, flying in circles around me. When it was finally satisfied, it flew back into its enclosure and curled up.

I looked at Mudkip. It looked back. We stood, staring at each other. I wanted to look away, but I didn’t. My eyes started to tear up, but I still didn’t blink. Mudkip still stood and stared. After a few minutes, it opened its mouth. “Mud? Kip?” And with out another word, it sprayed me in the face with water. I got the water out of my eyes, and then I heard laughing from behind me.

I looked around and found the other nine kids laughing at me. I sneered, and then went to the third enclosure. I heard a startle, “Oh!” from behind me and looked back again. The Frezint had flown out of its enclosure again and was now inspecting the others. I chuckled, and then turned to the enclosure’s occupants. A Liktretch, a Hekark and a Pichu, were curled up. I wondered at the Pichu, and then I remembered, the current symbol of the International Pokemon League was the Pikachu family, mainly because of its current Champion, Ash Ketchum.

I snuck past these pokemon. If they were woken, I probably wouldn’t like the consequences. In the final enclosure was a Torchic. I look at it quizzically for a moment. Then, with a sudden hiccup, it belched a large fireball.

“Oh. That’s always a good reason. The Professor’s didn’t want Yoryu, well- done.” I murmured. I thought for a moment, and then walked back to the group. The Frezint had finished inspecting and had lodged itself firmly onto the head of a girl half my size. I imagined Frezint taking off into the air with the girl attached to it. I grinned, and then turned as I felt a tap on my shoulder.

“Are we ready to begin?” Asked Professor Elder. He was a thin man, but looked very red. He mustn’t have been used to the temperatures of 15 degrees Celsius. It must have been quite hot for him. He had a bald patch. When he turned away, I made spitting noises, then rubbing motions. A cacophony of laughter erupted. Nick’s laughter could be heard above all of them.

We found our way to the ten seats nearby. There was a short squabble between the others as to who would sit in the two seats nearest to the pokemon. Nick and the short girl won. I shook my head and studied the professors.

Willow was a blond, huge woman. She wore glasses, perched on a sharp beak- like nose. She was famous for Pokemon Stats, as she discovers what pokemon had the highest attack, the lowest defence, etc. She was also a famous Gymnast. She, like her name, was as flexible and as tough to break as willow branches. At least, that was how the Judges who saw her described her.

Rowan was young, for a Professor. Of the thirteen renowned Professors of the world, he was the youngest. With chestnut hair, brown eyes and a friendly nature, he was also the most popular. He was famous for his studies into the Pokemon Legendaries. He studied pokemon like Articuno and writes most of all known info about them.

Elder was old, the oldest of the thirteen Professors, he was also the most famous. With his recognition in the field of Pokemon Breeding. He discovers what moves Pokemon are able to learn through breeding and so forth. He was thin and wiry, with a very fair complexion. What hair he did have was blue. A nice, sky blue.

Suddenly Professor Rowan stepped forward. “Thank You for being here in Comed Town. We are very happy that you were able to come here. You are the Ten Trainers that won the Pokemon Contest, hosted by the International League. We will allow half an hour for you to examine the pokemon here, but no longer. A siren will sound when it is time to return to your seats. Please get into a line and we will let you see each pokemon. A small siren will blast every three minutes, so that you may spend equal time looking at each pokemon.”

With that he turned away. I got up slowly, wanting to be last. Everyone else was squabbling as to who would be first in the line. The only one not fighting was the small girl. She looked smug, because instead of her choosing the pokemon, it chose her. It was most likely the one she wanted too. I turned back to the fighting. I rolled my eyes, and marched forward to the first enclosure. The fighting stopped as everyone stared at me. Without another word, they got into a line. Three computers were on the glass enclosure. I posted myself at the nearest one and looked at the computer screen.

Qizret, the Quiz Pokemon. This pokemon is rare, in its ability to talk. Instead it talks in riddles. If you manage to decipher the riddle, Qizret will spout out another one. It is able to keep up its large head with the use of its Psychic powers.
Type: Psychic
Weight: 21 lbs.
Height: 1’3.
Personality: It will stick with a trainer that is able to answer its riddles. If its riddles are not answered, this pokemon becomes frustrated, sometimes leaving its trainer.
Attacks: Calm Mind, Growl and Teleport.
Next attack: Psywave at level 8.


I looked at its computer image closely. Qizret had several question marks all over its short, squat body. It was a dull grey colour. It had a large, squarish head and a thin, straw-like body that looked much too frail to hold up its head.

A siren sounded. I moved onto the next computer. On the screen was the Senvar. I grinned; there was a pokemon my mother would like.

Senvar, the Teddy pokemon. This pokemon is omnivorous. It is also a scavenger. But, if disturb while eating, it will move away. It is an affectionate pokemon, though if threatened, it will run.
Type: Dark/ Normal
Weight: 15.7 lbs.
Height: 0’7
Personality: Affectionate and lovable, this pokemon is a favourite of high- born women. If it is faced with danger, this pokemon will not hesitate in running.
Attacks: Scratch, Leer and Tackle.
Next Attack: Bite at level 7.


Senvar was a very teddy like pokemon. I could have taken it into my sister’s bedroom and placed it among her stuffed toys and no-one would know the difference! It was a dark, chocolatey brown, but it had a sun emblem on its head. But still, no-one would probably choose it because of its cowardly nature.

The siren went again, I moved onto Treecko’s screen. The Treecko in the enclosure sat in front of me, pulling faces and glaring. I pulled a face at it, gave it a death glare and started to read about it.

Treecko, the Wood Gecko Pokemon. This pokemon has a tough nature, if confronted by an enemy; it will stand its ground and glare at it. If it succeeds in intimidating the enemy, it will either attack or try to intimidate the enemy again.
Type: Grass
Weight: 11 lbs.
Height: 1’8
Personality: It has an intimidating nature. It will continue to fight even when there is no hope. It is also extremely fast and has a high attack power, resulting in almost one hit K.O’s!
Attacks: Pound and Leer.
Next Attack: Absorb at level 6.


Treecko was still glaring at me. Its red eyes, penetrating my own. Its green fingers twitched irritably. I noticed they had suction cups on the end of them. Treecko was almost fully green, with a dark green, large tail.

The siren went again and I glared at it irritably. I moved onto the next enclosure with the Mudkip and Yoryu in it. The Frezint must have decided to make its permanent home in the small girl’s hair.

Mudkip, the Mud Fish Pokemon. This pokemon is a rare type, found only in Hoenn and on Southern Island. This pokemon is much sought after, because of its ability to increase its attack power when its HP is low.
Type: Water
Weight: 16.8 lbs
Height: 1’4
Personality: This is a fun-loving pokemon. If it wants to show affection or trust for something, it squirts it with water. Many trainers have misinterpreted this and left the Mudkip feeling sad and confused.
Attacks: Tackle and Growl.
Next Attack: Mud Slap at level 6.


I blinked in confusion, and then looked up at the Mudkip again. What greeted me was another faceful of water. I grimaced and wiped the water out of my eyes again. The Mudkip grinned at me, opened its mouth and prepared to shoot water at me again, when the siren went off. I moved and the water went past me and hit the wall next to the siren.

I smirked at the Mudkip, and then proceeded to the next screen. Mudkip followed me around the enclosure until I stopped. It stopped too, right in front of the Yoryu.

Yoryu, the Yak Pokemon. This pokemon has been known to herd with Tauros and Miltank. It has been an object of interest for centuries, because of its bright, red fur. Though slow to anger, its retaliation will be swift and painful.
Type: Normal
Weight: 50 lbs.
Height: 2’6.
Personality: It has a slow, stupid nature. But when angered, its blood rushes and somehow makes this pokemon incredibly smart. It has powerful attacks, but has very slow speed.
Attacks: Fury Swipes, Growl and Take Down.
Next Attack: Fury Cutter at level 9.


I discovered how slow Yoryu was, when I looked up. My eyes widened and I put out my hands just in time to catch Mudkip who had learnt to fly. I looked over Mudkip to see Yoryu puffing. It has just finished using its Take Down. I shook my head and placed Mudkip back in the enclosure. Yoryu looked like a Miltank, Piloswine and Tauros crossed. It had long, red fur, horns and three tails. It ran around on all fours but it could stand if it needed to. It had the bands of silver that was trademark to Piloswine too.

The Siren went off and I moved to the next screen. Since Frezint had chosen its trainer already, there wasn’t much use reading its stats, but I love reading. And I love reading about pokemon. There also might be useful information too.

Frezint, the Frozen Dragon type. It has very few weaknesses due to it being a dual Ice and Dragon. It has a very curious nature. If it shows a liking for something, it will perch a top it to guard it.
Type: Ice/ Dragon.
Weight: 35 lbs.
Height: 2’1.
Personality: A curious, fun loving creature, it lives in the Arctic Region of Forenzis. Once angered, it will unleash and ice or dragon type move. It has the special ability to freeze anything near it for three metres, but won’t freeze it if it trusts it, or is curious about it.
Attacks: Powder Snow, Dragon Rage and Rest.
Next Attack: Gust at level 10.


The siren went just as I finished. I looked over at Mudkip. It was struggling to get out of the enclosure to get to me. I raised an eyebrow at it. It cocked its head and raised an eyebrow back at me.

I moved on to the third enclosure. The Pichu, Liktretch and Hekark were awake now. The boy in front of me had all of his hair sticking up. He had gotten too close to the Pichu. I sighed and looked at the computer screen in front of me.

Pichu, the tiny mouse pokemon. It is the pre-evolution of Pikachu and isn’t very skilled at holding electricity. As a result of that, it will send out an electrical current if upset or amused.
Type: Electric
Weight: 4 lbs.
Height: 1’0
Personality: It is a baby type, thus its inability to retain electricity for very long, Easily amused or upset; it is usually humorous to see the result of the person make the Pichu upset or happy.
Attacks: Thundershock and Charm.
Next Attack: Tail Whip at level 6.


I studied the Pichu. It was inching closer to me. I put my hand in to pat it on the head, and then scratched it beneath the chin. It squeaked happily, and then skipped off. The siren went and I moved on. Now I was looking at the info of Liktretch.

Liktretch, the Licking Pokemon. This pokemon is mainly tongue, as its evolved form is Likitung, this can be explained. What can’t be explained is where its brain, stomach and other, vital organs are.
Type: Normal
Weight: 15 lbs.
Height: 0’4
Personality: As this pokemon usually stays still, licking anything that passes, it is hard to tell. When it does move, it has a mischievous nature, tripping people up, then rolling off, laughing.
Attacks: Lick, Growl and Roll Out.
Next Attack: Sweet Kiss at level 6.


I watch Liktretch, wondering if it would move. I kinda hoped it would, it might be entertaining. As I watched, the Pichu skipped over to the Liktretch, and then gave it a slight shock. The Liktretch then rolled after the giggling Pichu, trying to score a hit with Roll Out. I smiled as the siren went.

The next pokemon was much more interesting. Hekark sat in a corner. As I watched, it made a pot plant near to the cage explode into growth. Now I was interested, so I looked at its info.

Hekark, the Shrub Pokemon. This Pokemon can often be found, hiding near to paths. When a Pokemon (Or an unsuspecting Trainer) comes along, it will leap out and ambush them.
Type: Grass/ Ice
Weight: 29 lbs
Height: 1’8
Personality: It has an unmerciful nature, because of its need for food. It will attack if provoked, but will run at the first chance.
Attacks: Magical Leaf, Powdered Snow and Mean Look.
Next Attack: Perish Song at level 9.


I shivered. I sincerely hoped I wouldn’t meet this pokemon out in the wild. It looked like a normal bush, apart from the fact that two, small, red eyes glared out at me. The siren went again. I moved onto the tenth and final pokemon.

Torchic, the Chick Pokemon, this pokemon hasn’t got very good balance. But it still has very good attacks. If provoked, it will spit out a massive fireball.
Weight: 6 lbs.
Height: 1’4
Personality: This pokemon is loyal. Even if a lake is between it and its Trainer, it will try to swim across the lake to get to its trainer. It is very powerful, mainly due to its fire type abilities.
Attacks: Scratch and Growl.
Next Attack: Focus Energy at level 7.


I stared at the Torchic. For something very small, it seemed very powerful. The siren sounded, more loudly then the last time. I glared at it irritably, then walked over to my seat and sat down.

The other ten sat down around me. I looked around again. The small girl still hadn’t moved, but Frezint definitely had. It had now curled up, ‘Meowth-like’ on her head. I heard a slight snoring noise from that way too.

Professor Rowan stepped up to the podium on the stage in front of us. “And now for the moment you’ve been waiting for. The moment where we announce the winners of the competion. In first place, we have Brandon Joyce, from Dictioy’s own Scine Town!”

Brandon came forward. He stood in front of all the enclosures, and then moved towards the third one. He stopped before it, and then lifted out the Liktretch.

“I choose this one.” He announced, as the Liktretch tried licking him. Brandon let it as he went to collect his bag. He only stopped it when it tried to lick up his nose. By the wall were ten bags, one for each of the trainers. Each trainer got a bag corresponding to the element of the pokemon they took. Brandon walked up to the stage and had received a white one.

“And now, in Second place, “Announced Professor Rowan. “We have Katrina Churchill!” He held up an Orange bag. I stared blankly, then realised that the international colour for Dragon types was orange.

Katrina A.K.A The Small Girl stepped up onto the stage. She took the orange bag and slung it around her back with a small grin. She jumped off the stage, and then went back to her seat. The Frezint on her head was looking pretty irritable by then.

“In third place is Sam Sapphire.” I smiled and stood up. Now was the hard part. What pokemon should I choose? Mudkip was still trying to get to me. Pichu was giggling as it sent a few jolts everywhere. Torchic stared at me, then hiccuped another, huge fireball. And Qizret just stood there, sprouting babble.
 

The True Champion

Behold his Power
I really am enjoying this story and i like how there is new pokemon, i was going to say i hope he gets torchic until i saw your banner, now i am looking forward to see when the egg hatchs and when he gets the eevee. Keep it up this looks like it will be a great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Whoo, long chapter. But I wouldn't have minded seeing a bit more description - especially of the new pokemon you've got there. Yoryu was alright - I'm getting a picture of that, but others like Likstretch and Freezint could certainly be fleshed out a bit. (Perhaps even pics? ^^)

Just a brief note on grammar - pick a tense and stay with it. Swapping tense, especially mid-paragraph, gets confusing and looks rather unprofessional.

What I want to comment on most of all is the content - I was really surprised when Sam got psychic powers all of a sudden. There was no real reason for it and it seemed like just another 00ber attribute tacked on as an afterthought. I mean, if Sam had had psychic powers, why wouldn't he have used them to get the paper in the prologue? Blasted his brother out of the way or levitated the paper? If you have to have him as a psychic, fine, but be VERY careful that you're not just doing it to make him 'speshul'. Personally, I almost preferred him before he had psychic abilities - he seemed more real and more human.

Plus, I'm amazed that he'd get a Polienix egg. Just.. whoah. His sister must be an 00ber trainer to have an Articairion (which I think you misspelt somewhere in here. It's Articairion, not Anticairion.) It's almost like starting with a legendary - which is generally considered a no-no.

As for the other character, I reckon I like Nick. A realistic blend of consideration and arrogance mixed into the one character. Nice work. But Sam seems almost too good to be true - trumping the bully with psychic powers and making his way past the Elite Four's kid with nary a problem cause of same psychic powers. It's 00ber-ness to a fault.

But apart from that, I was really impressed at the creativity it took to dream up so many new pokemon. You have an impressive range and there's obviously more to come, considering all the new regions. It's the setting for a fascinating and exciting journey to come and one that has the potential for greatness.

There's so much potential here - don't cover it with superficial Gary Stu-ness. I wanna see a great adventure, not an 00ber character defeat one enemy after another with "Teh SPESHULNESS Factor". Just be careful - this story can indeed be great, but I'd advise EXTREME caution in how you proceed. Remember, a well-developed and realistic personality is worth far more than the temporary wow-factor of burdening a character with special abilities/pokemon. Good luck for next chapter and keep writing!

Piney.
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Articunomew

I'm not normal
Ok, I did do a Prologue where it started off with Sam's powers. Speaking of his powers, they are pretty weak, he got tired from teleporting and slinging Hope across the street in one go, something I wouldn't mind doing to a couple of people myself...
As for Ani's Articairon, or Anticairon *Runs off to check spelling* it's getting pretty old by now. It was about six or so when Ani caught it, and it's about nine now. I'm actually gonna get rid of it soon, to make way for the Articairon in Obsidian Blade's 'Raven' fic. Sam's Egg's hatchling will never evolve to an Articairon.
Ani is also Sam's elder by three years. Coincidentally, she has also been a Trainer for three years, having left when she was 14. She started off in the Metone Region, before going to Janera, and after that, Johto. After giving Sam the egg, she leaves to journey around Tintia, one of Ash Jr's regions.

Ok, I'll try and keep that in mind. I sense a big going-over of my chapters during these Christmas Holidays!
C ya!
 
Pinecone Tortoise said:
There's so much potential here - don't cover it with superficial Gary Stu-ness. I wanna see a great adventure, not an 00ber character defeat one enemy after another with "Teh SPESHULNESS Factor".

Don't worry about it, Piney, Sam gets a few losses. But wow, over 1000 Pokémon? AWESOME. Sam must love books to get so many. I'm adding you to my buddies list, which is empty. -_-'

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Articunomew

I'm not normal
And those ar eonly Pokemon form the main 12 regions, A.K.A, the twelve most known regions. There are other regions, each with their own different Pokemon! ;P

C ya!
 

Articunomew

I'm not normal
Chapter Two
New Friends and Foe

I walked between each of the enclosures, thinking about each Pokemon’s strengths and weaknesses. In Dictioy, the best choice would probably be a Fighting type, but there weren’t any fighting types. Anyway, I don’t much like fighting types.
The second best would be a fire type. That would be Torchic, who still had the hiccups. I shuddered. I didn’t really want to be barbequed.
And the third best would be a water type. The ONLY water type was the Mudkip who seemed to like me so much.
I sighed, and then prayed to Mew that I was picking the right one.
I strode forward to Mudkip’s enclosure. It had stopped struggling to get out and was now watching me intently. I bent over the enclosure sides, and then picked Mudkip up. It squirmed happily in my arms.

“You had better behave.” I told it. Mudkip beamed at me, and then jumped out of my arms to walk ahead of me. I rolled my eyes as I walked behind it to the stage. It was strutting, acting like it was the world’s top celebrity.

As I climbed up on the stage, I wonder what gender my Mudkip was. And what its nature was like. I hope it wasn’t ANYWHERE as temperamental as Ash Ketchum’s Pikachu was.

Professor Rowan stood in front of me, grinning and holding out a bag. It was a nice, sapphire blue colour. At least I can get ONE good thing out of choosing Mudkip. I thought to myself. After I had a hold of my new bag, I accepted Mudkip’s Pokeball. It too, was a sapphire colour.

“Thanks.” I murmured to Professor Rowan. “I hope my Mudkip is as nice as yours.” Professor Rowan had also chosen a Mudkip when he had started out on his journey. After he had quit his journey to take up research, he had let his Mudkip, Trita, out permanently. She was a friendly Mudkip, always eager for a pat and a scratch beneath the chin.

Mudkip seemed eager to disprove this point by dousing my face with water again. I wiped the water out of my eyes as a round of laughter went around the room. I glared at Mudkip who wasn’t fazed at all.
“I’ll get you back for that at some point.” I told it. It stared up at me, and then sprayed me again.
I grimaced, and then wiped the water out of my eyes again. I glared at Mudkip, and began plotting revenge for later.

As I walked back to my seat, carrying Mudkip, my bag and Mudkip’s Pokeball, I thought about the life I was about to embark on.
Boiling hot and freezing cold temperatures, ages without having showers, not much civilization and no comfort were the cons. But the pros more than made up for them. Lots of new friends, new Pokemon, fun, perfect days and a large chance to touch up on cooking skills and lots of exercise.
And if I got too starved for contact from civilization, I could always e-mail home with my Poke-Nav.

Professor Rowan’s voice suddenly broke through my day-dreams.
“And in sixth place, from the Janera region, Hope Joye!” Professor Rowan said with a huge flourish.
I glanced up to see this ‘Hope Joye’ and froze. It was the girl who had tried to bully me.

She walked up to the third enclosure with a grin. I had a feeling the Pokemon she would be choosing would not be happy to begin with its new trainer.
Sure enough, Hekark eyed Hope evilly, and then sprayed tons of Leech Seeds into her hair.

“Why you little-!” Hope snarled angrily trailing off and into a high scream. The seeds burst and thin green vines erupted, coiling around her arms and sinking in pale yellow creeper claws. They glowed with hungry vibrancy as her life energy was bled away with each throb of light. Everyone stood rooted to the spot in horror. None of had ever dreamed of having our beginning Pokemon attack us! I wasn’t frozen; I was hiding a small, irrepressible smile beneath my hand.

Professor Willow ran up to the enclosure with a look of worry on her face.
“Hekark let her be!” She yelled at Hekark. She had to yell in order to be heard above Hope’s screams.
I looked at Professor Rowan and Professor Elder, they too, were smiling.

Hekark glared up at Professor Willow, and then released its leeching hold on Hope. She collapsed to her knees, drained.
As Professor Willow rushed over to see if she was alright, Hope climbed to her feet.
“Good luck getting rid of it.” She snarled at Willow. Willow looked shocked, and then anger set in.

“Well, obviously Hekark didn’t like you and your attitude on Pokemon. Otherwise it wouldn’t have done that!” Professor Willow retorted. “And if that happens again, you’ll be forfeiting your place to another person!”

Hope gave a glare that was almost a match of Hekark’s glare.
“Fine.” She said, and then stomped off to Yoryu’s enclosure. “I choose it!”
She tried to pick it up, but it was too heavy for her. With a sigh, I glanced at Professor Rowan. He nodded.

I shook my head. I fixed my powers on Yoryu, and then lifted him into the air. My strength rapidly leaving me, I levitated it over the side of the enclosure, setting it down next to Hope.

The Mudkip on my lap sat up with interest, bracing himself against my chest as he looked into my eyes. Gazing at them intently, he gave a few remarks in the form of “Mudkip, kiiiip!” before settling himself down in my lap again, and, with a yawn, he settled in for a nap.
I resumed my chair. I actually couldn’t remember when I had gotten up.

To cut a long story short, here’s how the rest went:
Nick came seventh, he chose Pichu.
A girl called Amy came Eighth. She chose Qizret.
A boy called Kai came Ninth. He chose Hekark.
And a boy that looked like Kai’s twin came last. He chose the belching Torchic.

Finally, Professor Elder stood up at the podium. “Please note that within the left-hand pocket of your backpack is a Poke-Nav. If you already have one, please hand it back to Professor Willow. There are also Poke-Nav chips in a packet beside it. These will give you a map of Dictioy, the Pokedex for this region and a Radio card. Also note that your Trainer Cards will activate in five minutes, so don’t start any battles until then, because they won’t be counted. I hope to hear that at least one of you has reached the Diamond League Headquarters with eight badges. Thank you for attending.”

He rattled that off in a monotone, which told me he probably had that memorized.
I reached in too my back-pack and withdrew the Poke-Nav. It was also a blue-colour. I drew my Poke-Nav out, and then decided between the two.
I shrugged, and then put them both in my bag. Having two couldn’t hurt. I’d have one for Pokemon Training, and one for leisure.

I stood up, and then nudged Mudkip. “Come on, time to wake up. We’re leaving.” I told him. All he did was turn over in his sleep.
I shook my head again, and then walked for the door.
As I was about to walk out onto the street, I hand on my shoulder stopped me. I turned around to find Professor Rowan.

“Good. I’m glad I got to you before you left. Sam, as a way of repaying you for your help with my research for the past three years, I’ve given you some money. It’ll be on your Trainer Card.” He said.

“What? You didn’t have to do that. I did that willingly, I don’t want to be paid!” I told him, my eyes widening.
Secretly, I was pleased. At least I would have more than $3000, which the International Pokemon League supplied. They gave you that, hoping you would spend it on Training stuff.

“I know, but I did it anyway. You earned it.” He said with a smile.

“What? For cleaning out cages, washing Pokemon, observing them and feeding them?” I cried.
“That isn’t very much really.” Except for that bloody Growlithe. I thought to myself.
The Growlithe refused to have a bath, then, when I had gone to get another Pokemon to wash, it had jumped in and splashed to its hearts’ content. Meaning I’d come back and find no water in the bathtub and the Growlithe rolling in a nearby mud-puddle. While water weakens fire Pokemon normally, with Pokemon that kept their Fire-sacs internally, like Growlithe and Vulpix, the water would only weaken them if they swallowed it.

“Yes. They’re a lot more work than you know. I had $500 transferred to your account. So you’ll have $3500 to spend!”
I gave him a strange look.

“How long has it been since you’ve slept?” I asked him. When he hadn’t slept for a while, Professor Rowan got strange ideas. The last time he hadn’t slept for four days and then he tried teaching a Persian and her litter of Meowths to swim.

“Last night. So there! Now go!” He pushed me out of the building, and then closed the door. I gave the building one last look, and then headed for the nearest Poke-Mart.


< Pokemart>

As I walked into the Poke-Mart, I listed the things I needed.
I had to get a proper tent and sleeping bag. The ones I had bought with me were a little old, and did belong to my family. I’d be able to send my family’s things back to them via the PC. Food I’d also need to get, along with some Pokefood and some treats. And I’d heard about the latest technology from Silph Co. Translators that translated Pokenese, the language that Pokemon spoke.

So, I headed to the technology section first. I was curious about the translators and I wanted to know what Mudkip was saying.
As I walked down the corridor, I looked to my left and to my right. Collars to which you could strap translators. The actual translators, and for some reason jewellery and glasses.

I stopped, and then took down a pair of contact lenses. Want to learn what Pokemon say with their body movements? With these, you can! Then lots of stuff of which I didn’t bother reading.

I looked at the contact lenses for a moment, and then added them to the basket which I had picked up on my way in.
“I way as well use the money Professor Rowan gave me for something useful.” I muttered. I looked along the say aisle. Rings, nose rings, earrings and bracelets leapt out at me.

I stopped. Maybe I should buy a stud for my right ear. I could get my ear pierced later. It was also supposed to be the latest fashion with guys right now.
I shrugged, and then added a blue stud to the basket. I didn’t often do something crazy. This would use up my craziness for the next two months. Anyway, my ears were usually hidden by my hair.
I also added a magnetic necklace to the basket. If I had any prize Pokemon apart from Mudkip, I’d store it on the necklace.

I walked to the nearest staircase, and then walked up to the food area. I picked out some instant food, then added fruit, some vegetables and other stuff to the basket.
Then for my Pokemon, I bought a Bottle of Rare Candies, some Pokemon Treats, Pokemon meals, stuff like that.
Once my basket was starting to feel slightly heavy, I trudged back down the stairs. As I left the stairway, a stand caught my eye. On it were badge cases. I walked over and inspected them.

Each one was a different colour. But each colour hade their own set of songs. When you opened the case, it played the song you chose. I picked up the blue one (Did anyone guess I would pick that one?) and looked at the back. It could play the Johto National Song, and some others.

I put it down and looked at the others. Some of them had my favourites, but the one with most of my favourites was blue. Why was it always blue? I’m not complaining, but, it is interesting.
I added it to the stack of items in my basket, and then headed down the next set of stairs.
Here was the Poke-Aids section. Pokeballs, Vitamins and Stat Ups were here.

I headed down the Pokeball area, and saw very strange items. Custard Balls. I pulled it off the shelf and read it.
Custard Balls! The latest treat from Devon Co! Throw one of these to a Wild Pokemon and get it to like you, before you capture it! They taste so good; it’s hard to stop the trainer eating them!

I gave the packet a sceptical look. I added it to the basket. Mudkip or Wild Pokemon would like them. Not me, I hated custard with a passion.
Finally, after adding 5 more Pokeballs to the basket, I walked downstairs to the clothes section. I picked out a hooded top, and then added another two like it to the basket. I then got some jeans and shorts. I had other clothes in my bag that would keep me warm.

I finally walked to the checkout on the bottom floor after adding more stuff (Like a sleeping bag and Tent to the basket. By now, I was levitating it in front of me.)
As I went down the stairs, I saw a special stand in front of me.
They just put those where everyone can see them, don’t they? I asked myself.

I went over, and saw it was a Telepathic Wave Translator. It could clip onto necklaces and earrings. It would enhance your psychic powers and actually give you some if you don’t have any!
Not telekinetic? Can’t control the Kadabra that you just caught? No problem! Just clip this on, and you’ll get psychic powers or your powers will be enhanced!
I shook my head yet again, and then added it.

I walked over to the nearest checkout, and then dropped all of the stuff onto the table.
The woman behind the desk gave me a strange look.
“I hope you can pay for all of these.” She told me in a warning tone.

“I should be able to. Don’t worry about that.” I told her. I leaned against the table as she scanned everything. I was slightly dizzy from levitating things, but that was soon over.

“Ok, that’ll be $3555!” She told me with a superior look on her face.
Wearily, I scanned my Trainer Card in the slot next to the Cash-Register, and then swiped my own bank card through the slot. I had some money in my Bank Account, but not that much. It was enough, however for me to buy what I needed, with about $15 to spare. The woman behind the counter smiled at me, as though not believing I had enough. When the receipt-printer gave a loud beep though, I gave her a grin. She glared at me, and then started packing things into bags.

“Do you have a Medical Condition to need contact lenses, or do you just want them to translate Pokemon Movements?”
She asked me, irritation visible on her face. I smiled at her again, and then pulled out the medical ticket from my pocket. I had had contact lenses since I was eleven.

“Here.” I showed the ticket to her. ” I’m short sighted in this eye, and long sighted in this one.” I pointed to each eye as I talked.
I seemed to inherit everything from my mother’s side of the family. Including my eyesight. I got that from my Grandmother.
I got my hair from my mother, looks from my Uncle, etc.

When I finally got out of the building, I was weighed down with bags. I sat down on a nearby bench, and then rummaged through the bags until I found the Telepathic Wave Translator. As Mudkip jumped up onto the bench next to me, I clipped it onto the necklace I had also picked out. I put the necklace around my neck, and then jumped as the Telepathic Wave Translator started to work. I suddenly felt my powers enhancing. When they finally stopped growing, I was grinning and feeling refreshed.

“Much better.” I told Mudkip. “How do I look?”
Mudkip looked at me, and then nodded. He was slightly irritated because he had to stay outside. Pokemon weren’t allowed in Poke-Marts for some reason. The sudden though of Mudkip dashing throughout the store, breaking things and eating every edible item flashed into my head. I shuddered, and didn’t pursue the question.

“Now, where’s an ear-piercing salon?” I muttered to myself. Mudkip jumped off the bench and started walking towards a shop that has some people going into it. ‘The Jinx Piercing Parlour’. I read.

Then I shrugged again. “Just wait Mudkip; I need to pack this stuff away.” I yelled after him.
Mudkip turned and walked back, as if to say that he was just stretching his legs.
I smiled. “Can you make sure no-one tries to take anything while I’m packing? I asked him.

Mudkip nodded, and then lay down, keeping one eye half open.
As I began to pack I heard a faint snoring noise coming from Mudkip. Is that real or not? I thought.

I continued packing. I was suddenly disturbed as Mudkip shot a jet of water at a nearby Pokemon. I looked and saw a very miserable, very wet Eevee. I frowned, and then stood up. The Eevee squeaked as it saw me. It had been standing near the Poke-Food bag, but now it tried to run. I stared at its tail as it whipped around a corner. I shook my head, and then took after it.
Mudkip! Take care of the bags! I told him telepathically. While my attention was on sending a message to Mudkip, I didn’t see the garbage can in my way.

BAM!!!! Suddenly I found myself staring at the ground. “Ow.” I muttered, not really wanting to attract attention by yelling.
I winced, and then leapt up. I winced again. I had hurt my ankle when I tripped.
I tried to run, but my ankle faltered and I fell to the ground again. I saw the Eevee running away, still in a straight line. I frowned, and continued to trudge my way up the street. When it limped around a corner, I frowned. There was something wrong with it, and I knew it wasn’t caused by me.
As I stumbled my way towards the Eevee, I sent another message to Mudkip.
Hey Mudkip, I don’t suppose you can get a round, circular ball out of one of the bags and water gun it up the street? I knew he couldn’t answer, so I cut off the link to him.

When I heard water splashing behind me, I turned; and got a faceful of custard for my troubles.
I didn’t mean THAT kind of ball. Can you get a hard, metal one?
From up the alley, I heard a loud “Kiip!” in agreement. I hope, anyway.
I continued to hobble up the alleyway, walking around the corner of the alley slowly. There the Eevee was, collapsed on the ground pretty much right in front of me. When I finally got to it, I crouched, wincing as my ankle protested.
I inspected it, noting some bruises, scabbed over injuries and…
“What the?” I asked myself. I looked closer. The Eevee had a broken paw, one with bone poking out of it. That wasn’t the worst news. There was a purple sludge around the paw. The sort of sludge you would get from a poison type’s ‘Toxic’ attack.

The sound of another jet of water made me turn again. Leaning out of the alley, I looked back up the street from where I had come, just in time to receive a faceful of water, a hard hit on the forehead and pressure enough on my ankle to make it give way. It also made the Eevee squeak from panic and set off again. I looked with wide eyes after it. How did it keep going with a leg like that?

I got up, stumbled, and then sighed. I lifted my sore foot slightly with my powers, and then ran again. I lifted my hand behind me and summoned the, ULTRABALL?!
I put down a mental note to teach Mudkip the difference between Pokeballs.

“Why did I become a trainer?” I asked myself. “Oh, now I remember. I was inspired by other people’s stories of friendship and courage. They don’t mention having a Hydromantic for a Pokemon, having Pokemon run away from you and splattering you with sludge. Oh they don’t mention getting injured OR having Pokemon that don’t know what a Pokeball is, even though it’s been in one most of its life!” I continued rambling like that.

As I ran, I scared several street Pokemon out of their hiding spots. Some Nymbis, cloud-like Pokemon dodged out of the way, and then followed me, lightning bolts flickering from them.
Rattata jumped from garbage cans they had been looking though. They hissed at me, and then ran off into the shadows.
I even saw a Shahman. I seriously considered stopping to catch it, but Eevee was my main concern.

I was starting to catch up to Eevee when it suddenly wheeled. It jumped up on its tail, and then started sweeping dust at me.
For a moment I was blinded by the Sand Attack, but the dust soon cleared.
When I could see again, Eevee was on its side, panting and looking at me. I walked over to it, and then crouched. I stared at Eevee’s sore paw. It still amazed me how it could have run so far with such a bad break to its bone.

“It’s ok.” I said in what I hope was a soothing voice. It was hard to sound soothing when you were having a bad day and you were out of breath. “I won’t hurt you. I want to help you.”
I picked her up, and then started walking back towards Mudkip. While I was walking, I suddenly remembered the Ultraball Mudkip had given me.

I held it up, and then grimaced when Eevee winced. “Sorry, but it will be easier to carry you when your in one.” When Eevee turned its head, I tapped it lightly with the Ultraball. I stood, waiting for Eevee to be sucked in. Nothing happened.
I frowned and tapped Eevee again. Nothing. I let the Ultraball drop slightly so it rested on Eevee. Still nothing.

Eevee looked up at me. “You were abandoned?” I asked her, she nodded, and then looked away again.
I suddenly felt cold. Abandoning your Pokemon wasn’t just immoral, it was illegal! Pokemon were like children, they depended on you for food and safety.
If you were caught abandoning your Pokemon, there were severe consequences. All of your Pokemon were sent instantly to the nearest Pokemon Training Academy. Your Trainer Record was stricken from the International League’s Record and you weren’t allowed to trainer Pokemon ever again. That had only happen to 79 people this century, which is a lot in four years, when you think of it.

“Don’t be ashamed, your trainer should be doing that.” I said to her. “I’ll get you to the Pokemon Centre, they’ll fix you up.” A sudden rustle attracted my attention. I looked up to see the one of the Nymbis I had angered earlier.
“Uh oh.” The Nymbis felt the opposite, due to the large grin that sprouted on what appeared to be a face.

I looked around helplessly. I looked down, hoping to see something on the ground. I saw nothing, and then my eyes were drawn closer to my body. What I saw was the Ultraball I had put on my belt when I found out I couldn’t catch Eevee. I pulled it off my belt quickly; it enlarged until it was its usual size.

Then I did the Pokeball pose I had practiced for three years:
I threw the Ultraball into the air, caught it, spun once, threw it up again then I hit the Ultraball right at the Nymbis. The Nymbis’s eyes widened. It tried to dodge, but it was too slow. With a small ping, it got sucked into the Ultraball.

The Ultraball hit the ground, and then rolled slightly. It shook once, twice, three times. I held my breath. PING! The red light on the release button faded, letting the button return to its original grey.
I started shaking. I exhaled and then walked up to the yellow, black and grey sphere on the ground. As excitement built up inside me, I picked it up.

“YESSSS!” I yelled, finally unable to control my excitement. I stared at the ball in my hand. I had caught my first Pokemon!
I executed my throwing pose again, except this time, I got the Ultraball the second time I caught it and held it out. “I caught a Nymbis!”

That earned a strange look from Eevee. She was still nestled in my arms. “What?” I asked her.
She shook her head. “Eev.”
I attached Nymbis’s Pokeball to my belt, shrinking it down to its storage size. With a satisfied grin, I set off to where Mudkip was.

When I finally reached Mudkip, there were puddles of water surrounding the bags in an almost complete circle.
I raised my eyebrow. “Lots of people trying to take our stuff?” It was a stupid question, but I asked it anyway.
Mudkip nodded, looking proud of himself. As if to demonstrate his squirting power, he sent a stream of water at an innocent Pidgey which was twenty feet away.

I shook my head. I placed Eevee next to Mudkip, and then started packing again. By the time I was finished, it was twelve.
“Ok, let’s get you to a Pokemon centre.” I knew I couldn’t move Eevee that much; otherwise the bone would come out further.
That was why I hadn’t gone to the Pokemon Centre right away.

I levitated Eevee slowly, stood up, and then gently put my arms around her. Once she was safely in my arms, I started walking to the Pokemon Centre. I looked around as I walked. Comed Town was really nice, not too big, and not too small. Pokemon everywhere, lots of trees and the occasional pond.

When I finally got to the Pokemon Centre, I sighed with relief. I walked in. Nurse Joy was sitting just behind the desk. She looked up as I walked up.
“Yes? How can I help you?” She said, clicking on another window of the computer she was working on.

“Hi. It’s this Eevee. She’s got a broken paw. Look!” I held Eevee up, to show Nurse Joy where the bone was coming out. It was beyond me how she had missed it anyway.
Far, FAR beyond me. Intergalactic beyond.

She looked at Eevee’s paw. “Oh my goodness!” She yelled. “Quickly, give it here. Healtia, get me a stretcher for a canine Pokemon, normal type!” She turned to me. “Why did you let it battle until it was in this condition? Be sure that I’ll report you to the International league! Now, swipe your Trainer Card through the slot there. That way only you can pick Eevee up. You’re lucky that we have a Healtia here.” She said as the Healtia came up with a small stretcher. Healtia was the evolved form of Blissey. Blissey evolve when they have enough love in their hearts to love every living thing. That’s what Professor Elm said anyway.

Healtia was bigger than Blissey, but it still had the trademark egg. It still had curls at the side of its head, but they were longer. It also had smaller feet than Blissey and Chansey. A cap with a cross perched atop its head. The cross was an Aqua colour.

When I hesitated, Nurse Joy frowned. “This Eevee DOES belong to you, doesn’t it? Because if you’ve stolen it, I’ll certainly be telling Officer Jenny” She said, putting on the lecture voice my mother sometimes put on when she was telling off someone.

“Oh, no. I didn’t steal her, she was abandoned. I had to chase her through several alleyways before I could catch her. She got me good with a Sand Attack though. “I grinned. I think I was setting a record for smiling today. It was definitely the most I had ever smiled before.

“Did she?” Nurse Joy said absently. She was now typing on the computer. She scanned Eevee, then took her and placed her on the stretcher. “Her old trainer’s data is on the computer. You can look at it if you want to.”

“Oh, I will, I definitely will.” I muttered. I turned the computer around. On it was a picture of her trainer and his information.

Name: Eric Tacyr
Age: 19
Hometown: New Bark Town
Poke-Nav: 06-7492-6642


I dialled in his number to my Poke-Nav, and then wandered off to a private place. I didn’t want anyone looking at me oddly while I was yelling. It was bad enough that some people had been staring at me when I caught Nymbis.


< Two Hours Later >

I was sitting down in the Phone Room of the Pokemon Centre; I was trying to teach Mudkip Paper, Scissors and Rock. It wasn’t going very well.
When I finally gave up, I looked towards the door and saw Nurse Joy walk through. As she walked up to me, I saw a very familiar, very tall person walk in the room.

“Eevee will be fine. She’ll need to stay the night, that way we can get out all the Poison. In the morning, she can have a drink made from one of Healtia’s eggs. Having one of them can almost cure the dead. She can’t have one now because she’s sleeping. Do you want me to book you a room?” She said, talking as though I was the one hurt, not Eevee.

“Yes. Thanks. Do you think you could check my Nymbis? I just caught it off the street, so I don’t know how healthy it is.” I said slowly. I unclipped Nymbis’s Pokeball and handed it to Joy.
“I don’t know about Mudkip. Do you want a check-up?” I asked him. He shook his head. “Ok then.”

“Ok. I’ll book you room 23. The curfew for the Centre is 11:00pm, ok?” Joy said. She walked out of the room, muttering to herself. As Joy’s pink hair disappeared around the corner, another familiar person entered the room. Katrina entered the room and headed for a Video-Phone, her Frezint still perched on her head.

I wondered vaguely if that Frezint was ever going to leave the top of her head. I wandered out of the room. Mudkip followed me as I left the Pokemon Centre. I stopped, suddenly realizing that I had left my backpack in the Centre. I shook my head, then went back to get it.

As I left the Centre for the second time, I thought back to that Shahman I had seen. I really wanted one. They were hard to find, but they were worth it if you did get one.
Unconsciously, I followed the path back to the shopping plaza I had found Eevee in. Cars, trees and a pond past unnoticed.

The Plaza was still the same. People rushing around aimlessly, a couple of Pidgey’s flying from people’s feet. I kept walking. I eventually walked into the Jinx Piercing Parlour. When I walked out, I walked out with an aching ear and a small, foolish grin. The woman in there had told me I could wear the Translator right away, due to the fact that it was small enough to be called a stud.

When Mudkip saw me, he raised his eyebrows. “A human male wearing an ear decoration? That’s new.” He said. His voice sounded just like it did when he said his name. Slightly high pitched and loud.

I gave him a strange look. “You obviously haven’t been around guys that much then. If you had, then you, you-. What?” Mudkip was staring at me like I had grown two more heads. With the way my day was going, I wouldn’t have been surprised if that had happened.

You can understand me? FINALLY! Now we can discuss nick-names. Calling me Mudkip is like me calling you human, human.” Mudkip said, looking superior. I had never really thought about nicknames that way before.

“Ok. Sorry. My name’s Sam. And as for you, how about, um, Tidal? Tsunami? Rift? Poseidon? Apollo? Artemis?” I was running out of names. With each name, Mudkip had shaken his head. But at the last one, he gazed at me thoughtfully. I could almost see the gears of his brain working.

Artemis? Artemis. Hmm, sounds good. Ok then, Artemis! Just wondering, who was Artemis? You would have to know who that was; otherwise you wouldn’t have said that name.” Mudkip said, looking puzzled. He twitched his orange whiskers as he thought. Looking puzzled was a feat for him. Mudkip don’t have many facial features.

I struggled to hide another grin. “Artemis was one of the ancient gods of the Metone Area. Artemis was in charge of the wilderness and was the best hunter in the world. Artemis was generally worshipped by most of the ancient Metonians.” I explained.
I’m just not going to tell him that Artemis was female. If I do, it’ll take longer for him to agree to a nickname.

Really? Cool! Artemis it is! Hi Sam, I’m Artemis! I am Artemis, God of the Wilderness! Every Pokemon should fear and obey me!“ Exclaimed Artemis, as he jumped onto a nearby bench and struck a fighting pose. To accent the pose, he shot a stream of water straight into the air. Of course it came down again, right on top of him.

“Artemis, God of the Wilderness? More like Artemis, God of the Stupid!” Catcalled a nearby Skitty. She was sitting next to her owner, a large, rich looking woman. She looked rich because of her Ninetails fur coat. I frowned at the Skitty. She frowned back. Then I frowned at the fur coat of the woman. Why kill a Pokemon for the use of fashion?

“Come on, let’s go.” I told Artemis. I set off for the Pokemon Centre again. Now I was thinking about a nickname for Nymbis and maybe Eevee. I had already gotten a nickname for the baby in Anticairon’s egg. The baby would either be a Polienix or a Magnetix, depending on the gender. If it was a girl, it would be a Polienix, a male and it would be Magnetix.

When I had gotten the egg, I had decided to either name the baby Hera or Zeus. Zeus didn’t seem like such a good idea now. It was more like a good nickname for Nymbis. So I’d name him Zeus.
And Eevee, what would I name her? Diana? Ceres? Demeter? Out of those three, I’ll choose, Diana. Diana the Eevee.

So, my part was: Artemis the Mudkip, Zeus the Nymbis, Hera or Hephaestus the Polienix/ Magnetix and Diana the Eevee.
Four Pokemon already and I hadn’t even started on my journey yet!
I started wondering if any of the others had gotten any more Pokemon yet.

I was so pre-occupied, that I didn’t see the small form in my way until I ran into it. I was fine, I simply stopped, but Katrina was knocked to the ground. I stared at her, and then offered a hand down to her. “Sorry, I didn’t see you.”
She grabbed my hand, and then suddenly I was on the ground, looking at the sky. I blinked, and then slowly got up.

“Ow.” I said. By the time I had gotten to my feet, Katrina was on hers and staring daggers at me.
“What?” I asked her. “I mean it, I didn’t see you.” Suddenly I turned red. “Not that I mean anything on your size or-“
WHAM! I saw stars and then I saw the sky again. Oh great. I’ve found the new Karate Master for this generation. I thought to myself as my vision cleared.
I knew some self-defence which I had learnt off my Dad’s Machamp, but my knowledge was limited.

Once I had staggered to my feet again, I looked at Katrina again. She had her hands balled into fists and was about to throw another punch at my face. I quickly stopped her by freezing her fist.
“Can I simply get to my feet without getting hurt?” I asked her.
Her reply was to punch me with the other fist. Yet again I saw stars. And yet again, I saw the sky. Then darkness.

I was awoken by the torrent of water from my ever faithful Mudkip. The same Mudkip that had let his trainer get hit to the ground three times in a row. Bloody thing is trained with both fists, not just one. I thought.
By now, my weekly amount of patience had worn thin. I froze her in place. With my eyes half crossed, I staggered to my feet.
“Can’t I simply talk without being hit?” I asked her, rubbing my jaw.

“No. I don’t like being teased for my size.” Katrina said, obviously struggling to move her petrified body. This was the first time I could get a good look at her.
She was wearing black clothes. Total black, with a black beanie. Chains completed the costume. A total rebel, if you only judged her by her clothes. It was her hair that made her unusual. It was a brownie-blond, but had a purple streak on either side of her head. It was the purple of an Espeon’s fur. It wasn’t the unnatural purple of dye. This purple looked completely natural. Her eyes were a deep, ocean blue.

“Let me go! My Uncle is Lance of the Elite Four! If I call him, he’ll get all the Elite onto you!” She threatened, saying that like she really meant it. I rolled my eyes. Of course, having the world’s Dragon Master as your Uncle would definitely influence your starter Pokemon choice. That was probably the reason why she had chosen Frezint

“Oh no, I am so scared.” I replied. “What else will you do? Get Sabrina onto me as well?”
The most powerful psychic trainer in the world was Sabrina, no question. With her mind alone, she could lift up the Pokemon Coliseum in the Oore region. The second most powerful trainer in the world could only lift up the Pokemon Stadium in White City.

“Don’t think I can’t do that!” Katrina threatened. I sighed, and then released her. She pitched onto her face, unprepared to be on her feet. I rolled my eyes, then levitated her again and set her gently on her feet. “Thank you.” She said in a gruff voice.
“Don’t think I’ve forgotten those insults about my size.”

“I wouldn’t dream of it.” I said a smile play over my lips. I was prepared when she suddenly rushed at me. I jumped in the air, aided by my powers and jumped up on a broad branch of a nearby tree. That was a mistake. I landed on a Caterpie’s tail. The Caterpie, in turn, squealed, spun around and then sprayed me with a String Shot.
I covered my eyes, and then froze as I felt my arms being bound to my chest. When I was completely covered in white, sticky string, except for my head, the Caterpie, satisfied, sprayed string upwards, then lowered itself down into a bush, and then wriggled off.

I looked at Katrina. “A little help? Please?” I knew I sounded pathetic after what I had said before. She goggled at me, and then started laughing her head off. Frezint and Artemis joined her. I glared at Artemis. “Traitor.” I muttered.
He continued to laugh at me. I didn’t use my powers to get revenge on him. If I used anymore, I would probably faint soon.

After wiping tears out of her eyes, Katrina turned to Frezint. “Dirden, can you fly up there and see if you can lift him?”
Dirden nodded. With a flap of his wings, he lifted into the air. When he was just on the level of my head, he flew forward and attached his claws to my hair.
I winced as he started pulling on my hair. After a while, he gave up. He flew back down to Katrina and landed on her head.
You need to lose some weight human. “ He told me, smirking because he thought I couldn’t understand me.

“I need to lose some weight? You’ll pay for that. Artemis, squirt him.” I ordered Artemis. He shook his head. He and Drogan must have made friends while Katrina and I were fighting.
I sighed again. “As a matter of fact, I’m light for my age.” I told Drogan. He gave me a strange look when I said that.

“So, the kid’s gotten stuck in a tree.” A voice drawled behind me. I shut me eyes slowly. Please, not him. I thought to myself.
Nick walked into sight. His hair stuck up in several tufts, testimony to his Pichu.
“How’re we going to get you down then? Your Frezint any use here, Kat?” He asked Katrina.

Katrina shook her head. Of course, they’d know each other wouldn’t they? He’s the son of Bruno and she’s the niece of Lance.
They must have met each other at a party for the Elite Four or something. I silently told myself.
“You know, if your Pichu shocked the string, it might fall apart. “ I suggested. Some sticky things lost they’re clinging ability if they were shocked.

A look of unease crossed Nick’s face, and then it disappeared as he grinned. “It might work. Of course, Sparx might not be able to shock you. He lets out electricity every so often. Scare him and he might shock you. I hope you don’t mind being barbequed.”
Nick said, his grin growing wider and wider as he spoke.

“Whatever. The sooner I’m out of here, the sooner I can get back to Diana.” I said, and then winced. They wouldn’t know that Diana was an Eevee, not a human. They obviously thought that Diana was the latter, because they both started laughing and making kissing noises. I glared at them, and then lifted Sparx into the air with my mind. He froze, then-. “CHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!”

I was the one grinning now. They were both on the ground, small bolts flickering over them. I gently brought Sparx up to rest on the branch next to me. Now that he saw what he had done to his trainer and Katrina, he started giggling, clapping and wriggling his feet. I stared at him, and then yelled “BOO!”
He jumped, not noticing I was there. He let loose some lightning. I shook, not preparing for the pain.

The cord fell from around me, I fell forward. A stream of water kept me upright. When I had somehow managed to sit down, the water let off. Artemis had kept me up. “Thanks.” I muttered hoarsely. Artemis grinned, and walked until he was under my branch.

Come on Sam, time to get down.” Artemis said, throwing me an encouraging smile. I tried smiling back. I slid from the tree and landed on the ground. I looked up in time to see Mudkip land in my lap. A sudden voice from behind me made me turn.

“Oh, a nerd, a dwarf and a giant. What an odd group.” Nick, Katrina and I turned. What I saw was an unwelcome sight. Hope sauntered up, her Yoryu in it’s Pokeball. She had a Poke-Translator in her ear too. Apart from that, nothing else had changed in her appearance.

“Don’t you have someone else to annoy? Someone else to irritate. I know someone you could irritate. How about a Caterpie? It should be in that bush there.” I said, pointing to the bush Caterpie had crawled into. Hopefully she would take the bait.

“No, thanks anyway. I’ve been looking for you. Let’s battle. You’ve had me annoyed ever since you hurt me and then helped me.” She said, staring daggers at me. I quickly checked her belt. Two Pokeballs rested there. She had caught a Pokemon. Hopefully not a strong one. If it was, I would be dead.

I quickly whipped out my Pokedex and pressed a small white button on it. Instantly, Zeus’s Pokeball was transported to it.
I snatched it up, then stood up. “You’re on.” I said, hopefully sounding confident.

“Fine. GO YORYU!” She yelled, throwing the red and white sphere toward me. Yoryu came out, blinking it’s eyes sleepily. When it saw Mudkip, it got into a charging position. It charged, it’s head down, making it so that it couldn’t see anything at all. It had a natural ability for direction, because it aimed right at Artemis.

“Artemis, use Water Gun on the ground beneath you!” I called out to him. Artemis looked down and released a Water Gun.
As he sped up straight in the air, Yoryu came underneath him and instantly got pressured to the ground. Now it was pinned, I got Artemis to use his next move.
“Use your Tackle from the air Artemis!” I yelled. Artemis sped down and landed right in the centre of Yoryu’s back.
I winced, that must have been painful. Artemis landed in front of Yoryu and staggered a bit.
“Use Mud Slap!” I shouted. Artemis stamped his front legs and a wave of mud came out of nowhere. It travelled along the ground towards Yoryu. It finally hit, hurting Yoryu and putting mud in his eyes.

Yoryu roared in pain, and then ran towards Artemis. Artemis, unprepared for a quick retaliation froze. Yoryu hit him with a devastating Skull Bash. Artemis flew towards the tree I had gotten stuck in and hit the trunk. When he slid down, he collapsed to the ground.
Yoryu ran towards the sound of Artemis and hit Artemis with a Headbutt. Artemis flew back into the trunk and fell to the ground, knocked out.

I bit my lip. “Artemis, return!” I called. I held out Artemis’s Pokeball. He got sucked in with a red beam of light. I looked at it.
“Great job Artemis.” I told it.
I put Artemis’s ball on my belt, and then drew out Zeus’s Pokeball. “Go Zeus!” I threw the Pokeball. When it bounced on the ground, it let Zeus out. It then flew back to my outstretched hand.

Zeus appeared with a flash of golden light. He looked around, and then spotted Yoryu. When he turned to see his trainer, an evil grin crossed his face. I resisted the urge to step back. I stood up slightly taller and pointed my hand at Yoryu.
“Use your Thundershock Zeus!” I said, hoping he would do it.

He used it alright; on the wrong thing. I experience my second electrical shock in one day. As I steamed, Zeus laughed at me. He didn’t see Yoryu coming up behind him, using its Skull Bash along with Agility.
I ducked in time to miss having a collision with Zeus. He regained himself, and then flew at Yoryu, sparks flying from his body.
I quickly flicked through all the attacks I knew. I finally settled on one. “Zeus, use Rain of Lightning!”

Zeus paused, the started to glow. A mass of rain clouds started to build up above him. After the clouds had grown to huge sizes, they started swirling around in the air above Zeus. They started swirling faster and faster. After reaching impossible speeds, they emitted a huge amount of wind. I was blown to the ground, as was Nick, Katrina and Hope. Finally, the clouds released Zeus’s attack. Huge streams of lightning hit the ground, then started spinning along with the clouds. The clouds had still been swirling around Zeus, but now they moved to hover above Yoryu. Zeus seemed to have been unaffected by the lightning as I passed through him. Now the lightning was narrowing in, getting closer to Yoryu. Finally, they struck. The combination of all the bolts of lightning caused a giant flash of light that blinded me. It took a while for me to see, but, when my vision cleared I saw Yoryu on the ground, knocked out.

I wiped at my eyes, they were still watering from the flash of light. I stared at Yoryu, so did Hope. She returned Yoryu quickly, saying. “I hate having Pokemon this weak. You cheated. You and Rowan. He showed you the strongest Pokemon in the group.”
With that, she grabbed the remaining Pokeball from her belt and threw it. I was dreading this moment. What if she had caught that Shaman? Or an even stronger Pokemon?

As the Pokeball bounced on the ground, I started hoping it wasn’t too strong. I got my wish. Out of the Pokeball came a Spearow. I heard a shout of laughter from behind me. That guy laughs WAY too much! I thought irritably.
I raised my hand. “Zeus, use Thundershock!”
Zeus did it quickly. Two minutes later, it was on the ground. Hope returned it to its Pokeball, and then ran off.

I quickly drew out my Trainer Card. Before my eyes, the amount of money I had changed from $5 to $405. She had gone shopping, that was obvious. I wondered if I had passed her in the shop, before I figured out how much she had spent/. She had spent $2200. Whenever a trainer lost, half of their money went to the opponent. In this case, that was me.

Zeus floated over to me, looking happy. I quickly pulled a packet of Poke-Treats from my pocket and offered him one. He grabbed it in his mouth and floated up to the nearby tree. He sat, or floated, there, chewing on the treat happily. I dusted off my hands, then turned as I felt a hand clamp onto my shoulder.
“Great job kid.” Nick drawled the grin on his face again. “I really liked that Rain of Lightning attack. Very flashy.”

“In more ways than one.” Katrina stepped up next to Nick. “I’ve never seen that attack before. And I’ve gone to every Pokemon League game since I was four!” She looked up at Zeus, who was still munching away on the treat. He flashed a few sparks at her, and then continued eating.

“That’s nice. But I gotta go! Mudkip needs to be treated, remember?” I told them. I started looking for Zeus’s Pokeball. I finally found it, at the back of my belt.
I held it out as the red beam shot out of the ball and hit Zeus. He transformed into the red energy, and then went into the ball. I placed him on my belt, and then took off. When I looked back, I saw Katrina and Nick looking quizzically after me.
 

Articunomew

I'm not normal
<The Pokemon Centre>

“Can you please heal Artemis and Zeus?’ I asked Nurse Joy. She took their Pokeballs off me with a frown.
I quietly wondered what was wrong. From the way that Nurse Joy glared at me, I must have done something very wrong.
Hopefully I didn’t do anything illegal.

“Why did you take your Nymbis while I was checking on him? By taking him, you interrupted a very delicate computer program upstairs. Bill is livid and he wants to see you. Immediately!” Nurse Joy scolded. She pointed to the staircase which led up to the computer room.

“Bill’s here? THE Bill? The Bill that made the computer storage system? The Eevee-fanatic Bill? Bill the Pokemaniac?” I gushed out. Bill was famous in his attempts at making a computer program that you could store Pokemon on. There were three computer programs like that in the world. Bill’s program, Lanette, a woman from Hoenn, and Kyle, a man from the Poligem region.

“Yes. He isn’t the only one angry. I’m angry too. Lanette and Bill have banded together to create a better computer storage program and they were testing it in this Pokecentre, but you ruined the attempt by getting your Nymbis.” Nurse Joy told me. “Now, are you going or not?”

I paled slightly. Bill and Lanette hated each other, so they rarely did anything together. When they did, it was usually something that brought technology to a new level. “I’m going. I’m going, but if I die, I’m blaming you.” I replied. I trudged slowly up the stairs. I was most likely going to die a very slow, very painful and very imaginative death.

When I got to the computer lab, I heard yelling.
“Who did that? Whoever they are, they’ll pay. I’m gonna rip their guts out, cut their head off and drag their entrails to the top of Sky Pillar.” Sky Pillar was a HUGE tower temple dedicated to Rayquaza, the legendary dragon Pokemon that lives in the atmosphere. Last time somebody counted, the tower was two miles high.

Someone else joined in the shout. “You realize that this is your fault, don’t you? If you hadn’t made the program so flimsy, it would be up and running. But no, you insisted it had to be delicate!” This voice was female, and I presume, Lanette’s. The other voice had been male, so it must have been Bill’s.

I stopped, wondering if I should go on. I hesitated again, and then stepped into the room. A man in about his twenties wheeled to see me. He stalked over, reminding me of an insulted Persian. A woman in her late teens also headed towards me. I blinked, and then tried to pretend I was invisible. I am invisible. If I back out slowly, they won’t see me. Fat chance. I took one step back and was instantly grabbed by Bill and Lanette.

“Were you the one that took a Pokemon while it was being healed with my new machine?” Demanded Lanette. “You wrecked a project that we’ve been doing for a year! Don’t you know you HAVE to go to a Pokemon Centre to pick up a Pokemon safely? It could have just as easily gone to another trainer!”

“Wait. Are you the one you DID take the Pokemon?” Asked Bill. When I nodded, he joined in on the lecture.
“Or worse! Your Pokemon could have gone to Team Rocket, Team Fauna or Team Flora!”
Team Rocket, Team Flora and Team Fauna were the three active teams for this region. While everywhere else, Team Rocket had collapsed when Ash Ketchum defeated their leader, Giovanni; it was still going strongly here.

I nodded, wide eyed. They continued to lecture me in that fashion, until I got sick of their hold on me. I teleported behind them.
When they saw me, they frowned.
“Are you finished?” I asked them. They lunged forward again. I stepped backwards and then they were on the floor, staring up at me.

“Lanette, Bill, stop this now!” Said a voice that sounded amused. I looked, and then jumped back again.
Professor Oak, the world’s leading authority on Pokemon stood there. So did Professor Elm, the leading researcher of Pokemon Evolution. When I looked around the room, my heart practically stopped. There stood the five leading Professor’s of the world. Professors Oak, Elm, Rowan, Birch and Elder!
 

Articunomew

I'm not normal
Chapter Three
On the road to Arw City


Sam swallowed, his eyes showing a faint glimmer of fear. “Uh oh.” He muttered. He started to back up, back into the stairway when he was grabbed by Professor Rowan.

“It’s ok. Don’t worry, we won’t bite. At least, I’m sure Professor Elder and I won’t. I can’t vouch for the others.” He said a reassuring look on his face.
“You gave us quite a scare when the computer started beeping and whirring.”

Sam relaxed a bit. “I’d better be all right. By Jirachi, they gave me a scare.” He jerked a thumb over his shoulder to indicate Lanette and Bill, who had gotten up and were dusting themselves off. They gave Sam a wrathful glare, and then started to talk to Professor Oak in quick whispers. He looked doubtful, and then started whispering back.

“Don’t worry. I’ll vouch for you. Don’t you know better than to take pokemon from a P.C with your Pokedex? You can do it, but they haven’t perfected the method yet.” Professor Rowan said, a frown creasing his forehead. He looked over at Lanette, Bill and Professor Oak. “That can’t be good.”

Sam looked as well. “Do you mind if I go into hiding? I don’t really want to be in the middle of a revenge plot by two computer geniuses.”
Without waiting for an answer, he bolted down the stairs.

Behind him, Rowan sighed. “Kids these days, it’s all rush, rush, rush. No stopping for anything. That’s probably illegal for them.” He muttered to himself. He sighed again and turned to Professor Elm. “He’s a good kid really, he just doesn’t think sometimes. Did I ever tell you about the time he tried to teach a Persian and her kittens to swim?” He asked Professor Elm, conveniently forgetting that he was the one that did that.


Sam rushed down the stairs and skidded to a stop in front of the Pokemon Centre counter. “Are they done yet?” He said, looking wildly around, as if he was being haunted by a pack of Gengar, Misdreavus, Duskull and Ectoparus chasing him.
Ectoparus were the ghost pokemon that originated in the Poligem region. They looked like innocent little puppies, until someone turned their back to it. After that, they followed that person until it was caught or the person died.

Nurse Joy looked at him blankly. “I thought they must have killed you, but that’s what anyone would think with all those screams rolling down the stairs.” She turned to her computer. “Your Nymbis is fine, but Mudkip will need to stay for about an hour. Until then, I’ll show you to your room.”

She pulled herself out of her chair and grabbed a key off of a hook near the computer.
“You will have room-mates though. All the rooms are filled up. That’s what usually happens when our region hosts the Pokemon Trainer Contest. Not to mention that lots of old trainers are flooding into the region, looking for easy pickings.”

Sam nodded. As long as my roommates aren’t- He thought, and then stopped abruptly. An orange backpack and a yellow backpack were at the foot of each bed. Why do those two seem to follow me ever-?

“Hi Kid.” Said Nick. He was lying on the bottom bunk of the left hand bed. Katrina was digging through her backpack.
“Are you stalking us or something?”
His Pichu was curled up on his stomach, snoring every so often A few stray sparks rolled off the baby pokemon and jumped up to Nick’s hair. While his hair was already straight up, any hairs that had managed to stay done were now going up, one by one.

“No. I think you two are stalking me.” Sam said, he slung his backpack up onto the bed above Nick. With care, he slowly took out the Pokemon Egg from his bag. Then he grabbed the egg container he had picked from the Poke-Mart. He placed the egg on the cushioning, and then put the glass lid on it.

Katrina looked up with interest. “Cool. Where’d you get that? What’s in it? Is it a dragon type?” She asked, excitement radiating from her.
“I’ve got an egg too. I got it from my Uncle. It’s a Dratini. I love Dragonites. They’re really cool and really powerful. It could also carry me when it evolves.”

Sam stared at her, unsure as to which question to answer first. “Um, I got it from my big sister. It will either be a Polienix or a Magnetix. And it will be a dragon type if it evolves into a Dracoria.” He said. He turned back to the egg. He programmed what type of Pokemon it was into the base of the container. The container then generated the perfect heat for the egg.

Sam stepped back from the incubator. He jumped up on his bed and looked through his pack for ‘The Encyclopedia of Johto’.
Once he found it (Right at the bottom) he opened it up, back on his page.

Name: Miltank
Number: #241
Type: Milk Cow
Element: Normal

Height: 3’11”
Weight: 166lbs
Evolution: Final Evolution
Evolved From: Milkalf

Attacks: Stomp
Recover
Bide
Rollout
Body Slam
Heal Bell
Milk Drink

Pokedex Information: A Pokemon favored by Whitney leader of Goldenrod gym, it’s a tough opponent. During battle, it will make it impossible for the opponent to hurt it by curling into a ball and using Rollout.
During the Milkalf season, their milk becomes more nutritious. When drunken, their milk can restore Health Points and get rid of exhaustion.


When Sam was about to turn to the next page, a shadow appeared on the book again. Sam looked up. Instead of it being Hope, it was Nick.
“Whatcha doing?”

“What does it look like?” Sam asked irritably. Without waiting for a reply, he turned the page.
After reading half a page, he looked up again. Nick was still staring at him. “WHY ARE YOU STARING AT ME?!”
Nick jumped back, and then grinned.

“Maybe it’s just me, but I thought you’d like to watch an egg hatching.” He pointed to Katrina, who still held her egg in her hands. The egg was pulsing, throwing off a white wave of light every couple of seconds. A couple of cracks were on the top of the egg.
Suddenly, a flick of shell came off. Through it, they all saw an eye. It flashed out of sight to be replaced by a tail. It squirmed through the hole, slowly making it wider.

Sam jumped off the bed and grabbed Nick. He pulled Nick into the adjoining bathroom, and then shut the door except for a tiny crack. Sam crouched and Nick stood. Through the crack, they saw the egg throwing off more egg shell. Finally, the shell cracked in half to reveal a Dratini. The unusual thing was that this Dratini was orange!

Sam stared while Nick’s mouth fell open. Katrina gaped, and then jumped as the Dratini let out a large yawn. It turned to her, and then twined around her waist.
Sam slowly opened the door, and then stepped into the room. “A shiny Pokemon? How lucky can you get?”

Shiny Pokemon were rarer than normal Pokemon. A LOT rarer. Shiny Pokemon were sought after by Pokemon Collectors. The problem was that not many Pokemon were shiny. This is why people in possession of a shiny Pokemon were in more danger of any criminal teams.

Katrina continued to smile. “I know. My Uncle doesn’t even have a shiny Pokemon. His mother does. She has a shiny Healtia.” She must have been referring to Nick, because none of Sam’s Mother’s Pokemon was shiny. Not to his knowledge anyway.
The Dratini continued to circle around Katrina’s neck. Dirden, her Frezint looked down from the top of her bed, glaring at the Dratini.

“Oh great, competition Keep away from her kid. I’m the one guarding her, not you.” Dirden said, fluttering his wiry blue wings.
He blew a small, blue ice flame at Dratini and then curled up to sleep.
The Dratini looked up at where Dirden had been before. “Daddy?”

Sam smiled. When a baby Pokemon hatched, the first thing it saw, it instantly thought was it’s mother. The second it thought was it’s father. It thought that Katrina was its mother, now it either thought that Dirden was its father, if Dirden appeared again.
If he didn’t, the next thing Dratini saw definitely WOULD be its father. In his mind of course.

Naturally, with Sam’s luck that day, Dratini would look around, and looked right at Sam. Sam backed up, ramming right into Nick who was standing behind Sam. “Daddy? Daddy!” Dratini squeaked happily. He started wriggling towards Sam, but didn’t know that it couldn’t fly. Sam reacted instantly. Just as Dratini was about to hit the ground, it found itself levitating. Sam placed it gently on the bed, and then released it.

“No, I’m not your father.” Sam said firmly, before walking out of the room in a half run, half jog.
The Dratini tried wriggling after him, but was instantly grabbed by Katrina.
Dratini struggled to wriggle in the direction that Sam had gone, but Katrina kept a firm hold on it.

“I don’t think so. You’re staying here young, um.” Katrina trailed off.
She looked puzzled, and then pulled out her orange Pokedex. She flicked it open, activated the stats area and pointed it at the Dratini.

Dratini
Lv Five
Met: Pokemon Centre, Comed Town
Male
Mischievous nature


Katrina snapped the Pokedex shut with a smile.
“A boy huh? That might not fit in with my team. Except for you and Dirden. Hey, Dirden?”
Dirden squeaked in agreement.


<Downstairs, Pokecentre, Comed town>

Sam sat down. The chairs were comfy, probably bought for that exact reason. He sighed, and then jumped. His Pokenav had just started ringing. He pressed the button on his Pokenav, and then jumped again as his mother’s head was suddenly shown. It was beamed up into view like a hologram.

“Sam! Hi sweetie. How are you?” She paused, looking me over from head to waist. That was all she could see of me. “One day out of my household and you seem nearly dead! How did you manage that? IS THAT A PIERCING I SEE?!” Sam winced, he had forgotten about his ear. But now that he was reminded of it, he noticed that the ache had come back.

“Um, no. It’s a sticker. One of the girls at the ceremony decided to put them on everyone. I’d forgotten about it.” Sam lied quickly. A little white lie wasn’t too bad. Was it? He silently scolded himself. He should have known that his translator would be one of the first things his mother would notice.

His mother leaned in closer. “It looks like a Poketrans to me.” Poketrans or Pokemon Translator, they’re the same thing however you look at it. “It looks just like the one that Ani’s gotten for her pokemon. Hers are purple though, not blue. Are you sure it isn’t real?”

“Very sure. My ear would be aching right now if it was. A dull, throbbing ache.” Sam said before mentally kicking himself.
He psychically twiddled with the buttons that controlled the reception. “Uh oh Mum, you’re breaking up. I’d better go. That phone call must be costing a ton.”

“It might be, but I don’t care. And stop playing with the buttons. You DID get your ear pierced. Your eyes are also glowing. It doesn’t matter anyway. What Pokemon did you choose?” Fiona asked. Sam knew that she was probably plotting how to punish him for getting his ear pierced.

“Er, I chose Mudkip. I also found an Eevee and caught a Nymbis.” Sam said, frowning. He hadn’t realized that he already had so many Pokemon! And it was his first day! Not to mention he had the Polienix or Magnetix egg in his backpack.

“A Mudkip? Your sister chose a Chikorita. I guess you prefer the water types. How did you manage to find an Eevee? Or a Nymbis? It took your father two years to find one and it’s taken you one day! Wait till I tell him!” Fiona said, a grin appearing on her face as she thought of Brett’s reaction.

“The Eevee I found when it tried to steal some food from me. It ran away, then when I caught it, I found out she had a broken paw and was poisoned. I think I irritated some Nymbis while chasing Eevee, so, they followed me. Only one found me. I managed to catch it.” Sam said, thinking back to the events that day. It had seemed like a month ago, but it was really three hours ago.

“Ok. I’ve gotta go now before Josh gets back. He’s been impossible to live with for the past two days.” Fiona said, rubbing her head. Her head suddenly disappeared as she terminated the connection.

Sam rubbed his head as well. “I know what she means.” He looked up as Nurse Joy walked into the room. “Hi.”

“You look as cheerful as a Cheeron.” Joy informed him. “Your Pokemon are healed. Except for Eevee. She wants to see you, actually. Do you want to see her?”

“Uh, ok. Can you take me to her? I haven’t got a clue as to where she is.” Sam said. He was thinking ahead now. Once he had gotten Eevee back and caught her, a long stay at Professor Rowan’s laboratory would be good for her. She needed to relax. After being on the street for a while now, she definitely needed a rest.

“That was I intended to do. I don’t want you interrupting another crucial experiment. Or worse. We’re operating on a Drakeon in theatre three. The trainer would be heartbroken if her Drakeon were stuck with a cellphone inside of it.” Nurse Joy said with a grin.

Sam made a face at her and followed her, accepting Artemis’s and Zeus’s Pokeballs from her.
The walls of the hospital stayed the same. No matter where they were, they remained a bleached white. You’d think that they would make the place seem more cheerful. Sam thought to himself.

They finally reached Diana’s room after five minutes of walking. Diana lay on a cot, looking grumpy about her roommate, an unusually large and unusually smelly Gloom.
Sam wrinkled his nose as he walked in. The smell was almost overpowering. Sam turned to Nurse Joy.
“Why is she in the same room as a Gloom?” Sam asked, unintentionally rhyming.

Joy winced as a new wave of smell came towards them. “We didn’t have anywhere else, unless she wanted to share a room with a male Arcanine. She said no, so we put her here.”
Joy explained, the expression on her face indicated she would have preferred the room with the Arcanine.

Sam winced as well. He put up a hand and created an invisible wall between Diana and the Gloom. He was starting to get a headache from using his powers. Sam reached over and flicked on the air conditioning. Within minutes, the air was breathable.
THANK YOU! That Gloom was about to find a vase in its head.” Said Diana. She flicked her brown tail, her broken paw in a splint. Her brown and white coat looked better now. It had been brushed by someone, before it had been tangled and rubbish had littered it.

Sam smiled. “Aren’t you glad I found you then?” He asked her. Diana’s response was to twitch her ear, which accompanied a ‘What drugs are you on?’ look. That was obviously due to the remnants of Gloom’s smell.

Sam sat down beside her, in the chair that was beside the bed. He reached out slowly, and then stroked Diana’s back. Then he scratched beneath her chin.
Diana purred in response. While classified as a canine type, Eevee could also purr.

“So, how do you feel? Better? Less hungry?” As if in response, a Blissey walked into the room with a plate of food. The Blissey placed it in Sam’s lap, and then walked out. Sam rolled his eyes.
So much for the hospital treatment. He thought to himself.

With a sigh, he picked up an apple. He placed it in front of Diana, just in reach of her.
She reached forward and bit it with her mouth. She dragged it closer to her, and then took a bite.
“So, I was thinking of taking you on my journey. If you wanted to, that is.” Said Sam. “But you’d need to rest up in Professor Rowan’s lab. After that, we’d be going to defeat the Diamond league.”

Diana listened quietly, and then said, “You won’t leave me, will you? Or forget about me.” She looked down, a mournful expression on her face.

Sam leaned forward. “No, I’d never do that. I’ve seen how abandoned Pokemon look. You’re lucky that I found you now. Others don’t get found for years, during which they start hating humans more and more. I can see why.”

Diana smiled slightly. “Ok, but if you forget about me, I’ll evolve into a Heleon and find you.”
Heleon were the Light evolution of Eevee. Thought of as the servants of Mew, they were thought to bring great luck. The problem was, to evolve an Eevee into a Heleon; you’d need to find a piece of Dawn Stone, a stone so rare it was practically a myth.
If you also fell into the bad books of a Heleon, you’d need to be lucky and have an Umbreon, or you’d pretty much be dead from the bad luck you were given. Umbreon released spores that counter the power of Heleons.

Sam smiled. “I won’t do it. I promise. I’m already shaking in my shoes.” He wasn’t really, it just sounded good. And it might get Eevee in a good mood again.


< 9:00 pm, Pokecentre>

Sam lay back on his bed, his arms folded beneath his head as he rested on them. Artemis was lying next to him while Zeus was floating above his bed. The newly named Drake the Dratini was curled up next to Sam’s head. Drake had managed to climb up to the bed using his newly discover Bite attack. The wooden bed now had bite marks all the way up it. Every time Drake inhaled, his orange scales glittered in the light. A small wheezing noise came from across the room, where Dirden had claimed the other bunk bed.
From beneath him, a small “Piiiiii.” Showed that Sparx the Pichu was sleeping. An occasional lightning bolt played across the floor.

Gentle, so that he wouldn’t disturb the Pokemon, he got up and then got down from the bed. Once he was safe from the revenge of newly awoken Pokemon, he started being naturally noisy.
He walked into the Games room of the Pokemon centre. With a quick look, he headed towards the left corner of the room where two other people were sitting, playing a Gameboy. He swiped his trainer card into the E-reader of one of the spare Gameboys, and then turned it on, a link cable trailing from the game to a socket in the wall. The progress he made on any game would be saved on his Trainer Card, so that he could play them later from where he left off.
With a sigh, he brought out his Pokemon Sapphire cartridge that he owned. He removed the E-reader and placed it in the Gameboy. A few selections and his progress was saved on his Card. He continued to do the same thing to his Red, Blue, Yellow, Gold, Silver, Crystal, Ruby, LeafGreen, FireRed and Emerald Pokemon games.
After that, he started playing.
Half an hour later, he walked away from the Game Corner, happy because he now had a Jirachi on his Sapphire version. And he only had to trade his Milotic for it!

In the opposite corner of the Game Room, was a Nintendo 64 and a Gamecube, both of which had Pokemon games in them. Other games were also there, but Pokemon were the ones mainly played.
At the opposite end of the Game Room were card tables, where people could play the Trading Card game. A pen had also been set up so that people could play with Pokemon marbles.
In the final corner were seats, plenty of them, and CD players.
Sam strayed out of the room, heading for the next room along. In this one was a trading machine. While people could trade pokemon by simply swapping Pokeballs, Pokemon stats would show that it didn’t belong to you, so if you were getting checked on by a Nurse Jenny, you were in trouble. Swapping using the machine made the Pokemon legally yours.

Sam sighed; he didn’t want to trade any Pokemon right now. He continued on to the next room. This room was the phone room; Sam had already been here, so he didn’t need to go in. He passed right on. The final room was the Conference Room, people gather here to talk, trade tips and things like that.
Except for right now, there seemed to be a shouting match going on between two people, one being Nick. Sam walked through the door and stopped. Nick was red in the face, yelling at the person that Sam remembered as Kai.

“YOU’RE AS STUPID AS A PSYDUCK AFTER ITS HAD ITS HEAD CUT OFF!” Yelled Nick, his face a deep red colour.

“YOU’RE SO FAT THAT A SNORLAX TOLD YOU TO GO ON A DIET!” Kai yelled back, his face as red as Nicks.

“AND YOU ARE AS UGLY AS A SNORLAX IS AFTER ITS BEEN HIT BY THE MAGNET TRAIN!” Nick was going purple now.

“AND YOU’RE SO FAT THAT IT LOOKS LIKE YOU’RE SMUGGLING A BLISSEY!” Kai was still red, but was starting to go slightly purple.

“YOU’RE SO BIG-HEADED THAT THEY HAD TO BAPTIZE YOU AT THE CERULEAN GYM!” That stirred up a bit of laughter from the crowd.

“YOU’RE SO FAT THAT YOU’VE RECENTLY BEEN CLASSIFIED AS A HABITAT FOR PIDGEOT!” That one set everyone laughing. Not Sam though, he had seen enough fights at school to know what they could do.
That one set Nick off. With a roar of fury, he picked Kai right off of his feet and threw him at the door, and right at Sam. Sam blinked, in a choice of a split second, he cushioned Kai’s fall by trapping him within a Psychic Bubble. This also caused a roaring to start in Sam’s ears. He had used up all his Psychic Powers for that day. With a sigh, he slipped into darkness.


< 10:30 am, 17th of Echotrance, 2004 A.P.W>

Sam blinked his eyes, and then shut them again immediately. The searing lights above him blinded him.
Suddenly he gasped and sat up, his head connecting with Nick’s.
“OOWWWWWW!” Sam complained. The lights hurt his eyes, now Nick had hurt his head.

Nick grinned. “Took you long enough. You had me worried Kid, I thought Kai had knocked you out or something. Which reminds me, I hope you’ve got enough strength today, Kai’s still locked in that bubble of yours. They’ve tried everything to pop it.”

Sam felt a surge of pride at that. “My name is Sam, and who are they?”
Before Nick could answer however, Artemis jumped into Sam’s lap. Zeus floated into the room, Drake perched on top of him.

Daddy!” Yelled Drake happily, he bounced on top of Zeus, causing rain to fall out of Zeus with each bounce. “Daddy, daddy, daddy, where’s Mummy?”
Sam blinked, and then groaned. He sank back on to his bed. He had forgotten about Drake.

“I’m not your father, and I haven’t got a clue where Katrina is. Now stop irritating me.” Sam said, sounding tired. He had a migraine, an award for knocking heads with Nick.
As if she had heard her name, Katrina wandered into the room.

“He wanted you, anytime you’re not in his sight he starts sulking. After that he starts crying. Do you know how loud he is when he’s crying?” Katrina said, shooting a glare at Drake. “I haven’t had a bit of sleep all night.”

Suddenly Diana bounded into the room, her paw clacking on the floor as she walked on a brace.
Pokemon can heal faster than humans, but they can’t heal THAT quickly.
Sam stared at Diana curiously. “How come you’re up and about?”

Diana leapt up on the bed. “I had a milkshake thing. It had the egg of Joyce mixed in it. Joyce is the Center’s Healtia.” She said, explaining it to Sam. “Nurse Joy said she’d bring in a milkshake for you when you wake up.”

Sam smiled and sank back into his pillows. He would definitely need that particular sort of milkshake. Healtia eggs could almost raise the dead.

Nurse Joy appeared in the room, carrying the milkshake. Nick was behind her, bouncing Sam’s bubble into the room. Tai followed Nick, distressed at his brother’s predicament.
The bubble was a deep, pure hue of sapphire blue. Sam grinned, now he knew why he loved blue so much. If you ever got strong enough to create a psychic bubble, it would show you what colour your power was. And most of the time, a person’s favorite colour was the same as their power.
Psychic colors also seemed to indicate the area which a person was most skilled at. Red meant that you were really good at psychic attacks, green meant you were good at reading peoples minds, blue meant you were good at transport, levitating and teleporting, purple meant that it was mind attacks you were best at, orange meant you found moving thing around easiest and rainbow meant you were skilled at all of them.

Nurse Joy smiled. “A levitator are you? I know of a few people that wouldn't mind levitating. But then again, most of them are under the age of nine.” She placed a large, metal cup beside his bed. Then she placed three small bottles beside that. “Vanilla, Strawberry or chocolate?”

“Vanilla please.” Sam said. He stroked Diana’s back, and then scratched Artemis beneath the chin. Zeus floated down, his load bouncing higher and higher, making Zeus going lower and lower. Sam reached up and grabbed Drake, and then patted Zeus.
Drake wriggled in delight, he wrapped around Sam’s hands, and then slid on to his chest. With a sigh, he curled up.

Sam smiled wryly, and then accepted the milkshake from Nurse Joy. He took a sip from the straw, and then his eyes lit up. Within a minute, the drink was gone.
Sam now had a stupid grin on his face. “So, when am I allowed out?”

“Now if you want. But you’ll need to release Kai here first. Otherwise he won’t be able to go on his journey.” Nurse Joy said. Sam looked past her, Kai didn’t look too worried. In fact, if Sam couldn’t do it, it seemed he would be happy to stay there for the rest of his life.

Sam flicked his fingers, concentrating on the bubble, willing it to open. A small slit appeared in the side, and then the bubble disappeared entirely.
Sam sat back, tired. Suddenly a wave of energy flooded him as the Healtia egg milkshake started working.

“Ok, let’s go!”


<11:45 am, Outskirts of Comed Town, Dictioy>

Sam marched along, in a bad mood. Because of Drake, Katrina had to go along with Sam. That also meant that Nick was coming too.
Artemis was lazing on top of Sam’s backpack, watching the scenery go by, occasionally shooting down any Jorei, a small, flying parrot type Pokemon that were stupid enough to have stayed nearby.
Jorei looked like Pidgey, except they had longer wing and longer beaks. And instead of brown, they were a brilliant collage of colors. And instead of three toes on each foot, they had five.

Dirden was perched on top of Katrina’s head. He fluttered his wings at any person or pokemon that got too close.
Nick walked along, his usual grin on his face. Sparx was sitting on his shoulder.

Katrina jogged up to Nick; she had to take three steps to his one. “So, where are we headed?”
She asked, panting at the effort of jogging. When she traveled, she either went by vehicle or flew on one of her uncle’s dragon types.

“We’re heading for Arw City. The Gym there is fire, so Sam’ll have an easy time because of Artemis and Zeus. How come he gets a Nymbis? I’ve wanted one for ages and he gets one on his first day. What do I get? A small Caterpie.” Nick complained. After Sam had rushed to the Pokecenter, Nick had started looking for the Caterpie that had sprayed Sam.

“Leave it alone, it’s not its fault that it’s small. Anyway, it will evolve soon. And then it’ll evolve soon after that.” Katrina said in between gasps. She was REALLY out of shape. That’s what I get for sitting at home all day, watching Poke-T.V. She thought to herself.

Are you two going to hurry up or am I gonna have to come back there and make you hurry? A voice broke into their minds, making them gasp.
I’m coming, don’t rush me. Katrina thought back furiously.

Well hurry up. I’ll rush you if I want to. Sam retorted. With a snap, he broke off the connection.
Katrina scowled at Nick. “Isn’t there a law against intruding into other people’s minds?”

“I don’t know. If there isn’t, there should be. Imagine what Sabrina could have done a few years ago.” He was referring to a few years ago, when Sabrina had almost gotten total control of Saffron City. She was stopped by Silph Co and the Elite Four. That was when Silph Co had invented the Telepathic Wave Translators, or TWT. It was finally Will, the newest member of the Elite Four at the time that had stopped her. He was a Psychic Trainer too, though nowhere near as powerful as Sabrina. He had needed five TWT’s in the end to defeat her.

Katrina shuddered; she had been in the Elite Palace, visiting her uncle when a messenger Pidgeot had smashed through the window to deliver a message. Messages where ranked according to their urgency. Pidgey, a simple message. Pidgeotto, a summons or a slightly urgent message. Pidgeot were reserved for true emergencies.

Do you want me to trap YOU in a bubble? If you don’t, HURRY UP! Roared Sam’s voice in their minds. With a squeak, Katrina ran towards him, Nick followed close behind her.
When they had caught up to Sam, he gave them a scowl. “This is why I like being by myself.”

Katrina pulled a face. “Ok, fall off a cliff and see how much you like being alone then.”
Sam rolled his eyes and continued walking.
They walked in silence for a few hours; the only noises were Pokemon and the wind.
A sudden ringing broke the silence, making them all jump. Sam looked around, and then realized that the Poke-Nav around his neck was vibrating. He pulled it off of its cord and activated the Phone option. With a flash of light, Ani’s head appeared.

“Hi Sam! How’re you doing? Did you get your ear pierced?!?” This wasn’t an angry question. That was a humorous question that Ani asked with a smirk on her face. She had been waiting for years for the day that Sam would do something exciting, like dye his hair or get a piercing.

Sam sighed, she had been wanting him to get is ear pierced for years. There would be no living with her now. “Yeah, I guess you talked to Mum about it?” He asked wearily.
Ani was as stubborn as he was, but they looked nothing alike. The only way that they were alike was by the fact that there was a mole in the exact place on their necks. Apart from that, Ani had mouse brown hair, blue eyes and a cocky grin was always on her face. Her eyes leaned towards aqua, because she had green flecks in them. Sam’s eyes were an icy blue.
She was also shorter than Sam, which was no surprise since most of the females in their family were smaller than he was. To stir them up, he’d usually refer to them as the ‘Seven Dwarfs”.

Ani nodded. Suddenly she moved aside to reveal her Anticairon, who was looking worried.
“How’s my baby?” She asked, sounding more worried than she looked. Sam moved under the shade of a nearby tree and placed his pack down. He reached in and pulled out the Egg Capsule and then put it in the line of sight of Anticairon. She looked a bit more relaxed.
“Good, you do know how to take care of eggs. If you were carry it, I’d be flying over right now and taking it off you!”

Sam smiled. “Well, it’s a good thing I’m more responsible at 13 than Ani is. Did I ever tell you about the time she was in Kyeema, in the Metone region? She-!” Sam was suddenly interrupted by Ani, who suddenly appeared again.

“Yes, well, anyway. That was three years ago. And I didn’t burn that much of the bushland.” She trailed off, muttering the last sentence. “Anyway, we’ve got to go. See you soon Sam!”
With a small, electronic beep, she flicked off her Poke-Nav.

Sam frowned. “What did she mean, ‘see you soon’?” He asked himself. Then he shrugged. “Doesn’t matter, let’s go!” He looked around, and saw Nick and Katrina far up the road.
“GET BACK HERE!!!”



Pokedex

Jorei
Parrot Pokemon
Flying / Normal
Evolves at lv 16 to Joranitai

This tiny parrot pokemon is very popular as a household pet, due to its ability to learn to copy phrases constantly repeated to it. It is very intelligent and has been known to wake up a household’s occupants in the case of a burglary or a fire.

Heleon
Light Dog Pokemon
Light / Holy
Evolved from Eevee

This legendary dog of light isn’t as rare as the Legendary Dogs of Johto, but just as elusive. It has the ability to bestow Good Luck on those who deserve it and Bad Luck on those who don’t. It can only be captured by a trainer who was not done anything bad.

Drakeon
Dragon Dog Pokemon
Dragon
Evolved from Eevee

A tale of old states that Drakeon’s posses great attack power, sometimes destroying whole cities. That legend makes it a favorite of Pokemon Trainers who prefer brawn over brains. A rare pokemon, it is a worthy addition to any pokemon collection.
Milkalf
Calf Pokemon
Normal
Evolves to Miltank /w/ love

A small pokemon prized by farmers, it is the pre-evolved form of Miltank. The small horns on a Milkalf’s head are made of the purest silver, which means they are very soft. At about six weeks, the old horns drop out and are replaced by ivory ones.

Ectoparus
Baby Kraken Pokemon
Ghost / Water
(None)

A pokemon dreaded by sailors, it has long been feared because it can pass through ship’s hulls. While they don’t have the size of a Kraken, many band together in the colder parts of the year and make an entirely new pokemon altogether. The ending result is a pokemon that is truly the Kraken pokemon.

Healtia
Miracle Pokemon
Normal / Holy
Evolved from Blissey

Know by many because it evolves from the popular Chansey, it is respected by Humans and Pokemon alike. Its eggs carry a miraculous healing power that can bring anything back from the brink of death. A drink made by its egg is one of two known antidotes to the pokemon, Finetite.
 

Articunomew

I'm not normal
Chapter Four
Strange Happenings on the Fields of Sorrow​


<Nick’s Point of View>

I walked along; Sam was ahead, sulking because Katrina and I had gotten ahead of him before. We had done it just to spite him, because of what he had told us in our minds.
I looked at Katrina and rolled my eyes. Sam seemed like the sort of guy that took everything personally.
Artemis was trailing behind Sam. After Katrina had chased him up a tree after he squirted a Jorei that had landed on her head (Squirting her at the same time), he had stopped dousing everything. The way Artemis was going, Dictioy wouldn’t be having any fires for a few decades.

“We’ll stop soon. It’s starting to get dark.” Sam said shortly. I looked around. There weren’t many trees, so if it rained, we’d get wet.
Katrina suddenly stopped, she looked worried.

“We’re not camping here are we?” She asked, sounding worried. She had her Poke-Nav out and was looking around as if the closest rocks were about to take a bite out of her.
Curious, I took out my Poke-Nav. I activated the map option, and then burst out laughing.

“The Field of Sorrow? Who thought up that name?” I asked, laughing every few words.
The Fields of Sorrow were named because a man was attacked here by a Dark type pokemon. The pokemon distracted the man while he was out riding his Blizzardash; they ran off a cliff that’s nearby. The dark pokemon was a Murkrow, which is why people think they’re unlucky. The worst part was that the man was emperor of Dictioy. He was so loved by the people of Dictioy that everyone in Dictioy journeyed here to mourn for him. He’s got a tombstone further up the road. Sam said in my mind.
I frowned. “Can you quit doing that?” I yelled ahead

But it would mean that I would have to come back there. Why waste more calories than I need to? Sam thought back at me. I scowled back at him. He was getting further and further ahead, because I had needed to pick Katrina up because she absolutely refused to go any further. Even now she was squirming.

I pulled a face at his retreating back. I do know what you’re doing you know.
I winced and made a mental note not to think anything personal while he was around.
I heard that too.

I rolled my eyes and ran to catch up. By the time we had gotten to him, he was getting out a sleeping bag from his backpack. After that, he dug deeper into his bag. After his bag devoured his arm, then his shoulder, then his head, I walked over to him. I pulled at his arm, which pulled the bag off the ground. I stared over my shoulder at Katrina who shrugged. Somehow he got his other shoulder and arm into the bag as well. I shook my head and went off to gather firewood.

When I got back, I saw that Sam had gotten out of the bag. He had also let Zeus out. When I saw the cans off Poke-Chow by Sam, I understood why he had been in his bag.
I arranged the wood in a circle, and then reached for some nearby stones. I arranged them in a circle and set some of the logs in it.
“Sparx!!!” I called over my shoulder. Sparx skipped over, giggling as usual.

“Sparx, can you use Spark?” I asked him. He giggled, and then nodded. A few slight sparks flew out of his cheeks, and then a small stream of electricity came out of him and bounced over the fire. “Uh, can you try that again?”

A small rustle nearby made me look. All of a sudden, a Chicken jumped out of the bush.
A million years ago, Pokemon were originally things called animals, since then, the animals evolved. The only one that didn’t change much was the chicken. In appearance, nothing happened. The only thing that did change with the chicken was that it learnt to blow fire.

I turned to Sparx. “Headbutt it.” I told him.
Sparx gave me a death glare that obviously said, “You’re kidding, right?” With a sigh, he ran towards the Chicken and knocked it over. The Chicken gave a squawk. It had been knocked off balanced. It fell on its side and lay there, kicking its legs and squawked louder. It didn’t do anything to get up. I sighed and rolled a Pokeball along the ground towards it. It rolled and bounced softly off of it. With a slurping noise, it got transformed into red energy and sucked into the Pokeball. It didn’t even wobble once. With a small ‘ping’, it was caught.

I looked over at Katrina, she raised an eyebrow. “Do you feel proud? You just caught the hardest Pokemon to ever be caught. It was so smart; I’m surprised Sparx even managed to hit it.” She said, her voice dripping in sarcasm.

A small spark flew past me to shock Katrina. Her blonde hair struggled to rise out from under beanie. I looked at Sparx. “Did you do that?”
He nodded, looking proud of himself. I crawled over to Chicken’s pokeball. I stared at it.
“As soon as we get to another Pokemon Centre, you’re going straight to Professor Oak’s lab.” I told it.

A few hours later, Katrina was sulking. Zeus was floating over her, about to release his current load of rain. Nymbis had the habit of following ill-tempered people home and raining on them. That’s from experience. Not my experience, my sister’s. When I had gotten the letter back, my sister raged around for ages. One time she came back to the Elite Tower soaking wet because she had met a group of Nymbis and a few of its evolved form, Combulos.
I laughed myself silly, she started crying.

All of a sudden, Zeus released his load. Katrina leapt up, her head going through Zeus. She tried punching him, but her fists went right through him. Zeus was grinning to himself. Suddenly Katrina was on the ground, twitching as electrical shocks ran through her.
Sam got up from where he had been staring drowsily into the fire. He bent over Katrina.
“You know, if you didn’t wear all those chains and other metal stuff, you wouldn’t get hurt so badly by electricity.”

Katrina growled and swatted at him. Since she only reached up to half the distance between them, Sam wasn’t hurt. With a grin, Sam returned to where he was before. Except he wriggled into his sleeping bag. “Goodnight.”

“Night.” I said. Katrina just growled in return.
Zeus flew up into the sky, getting some more electricity from thunderclouds and some water.
With a sigh, I dragged out my red sleeping bag. Just as I got into it, I heard a snoring noise. I looked over in the direction off it and saw Artemis spraying a few drops of water onto the ground. Every time he snored, some more water came out. I looked at Sam and smiled. He was also snoring slightly, but was levitating. I picked up a small pebble and threw it under him. It rolled to a stop, right under him. I shook my head. I turned over and looked at Katrina. She was lying down, looking at the sky. She (somehow) knew all the constellations. In the Northern Hemisphere, you could see the Onix, the Lugia and the Sagitar, a centaur-like pokemon.
In the Southern Hemisphere, you could see the Squirtle, the Metapod and the Togepi. Since we were in the Northern, the Onix was visible.

I stared up at the night sky, picking out vaguely memorized constellations. Dugtrio, Pinsir, Kingler, each jumped out at me as I stared up at them.


<18th of Echotrance, 2004 A.P.W>

Suddenly, it was dawn. With a yawn, I jumped up. My father, Bruno of the Elite Four of Kanto, used to make me get up at the crack of dawn so that I could train. Eventually, it became a habit to wake up at dawn.
I yawned again and reached for Chicken’s pokeball. I fumbled with it and dropped it to the ground. With a flash, Chicken came out. It looked at me blearily, wondering why I had woken it up.
“Chicken, use Ember.” I said with another yawn. With a puff of fire, he lite the remaining coals in the fireplace. I tossed a few logs of wood onto the fire, and then poked it with a stick to get it up. It flared up as a log caught. I quickly got changed behind the bush that Chicken had jumped out of.
All of a sudden, there was a huge, “CUCKOOO!!!!!!”

“AAUGH!!” Yelled Katrina from behind me. Silently, I swore. She was an Ursaring in the morning. A particularly cranky and rabid Ursaring. “ISN’T THERE SUCH A THING AS A GOOD NIGHT’S SLEEP?” I smiled. She hadn’t slept a wink the previous night because of Drake. Come to think of it, nor had I.
I quickly returned Chicken and grinned as Sam put his head up, blink in the sleep out of his eyes. “Wagtastat?” He asked sleepily. He put his head down again. At the same time, his hold on levitating slipped. With a crash, he landed on the ground.

I laughed. Something told me that I’d enjoy this journey if Sam and Katrina kept me amused.
Katrina looked up at me, her eyes bloodshot. “I’m never going to stay up all night looking for a new constellation ever again.” She said.

Sam gave her a queer look. “Why would you want to?” He asked.
Oh, I really need to sleep better. His voice suddenly came through our minds. We both jumped and glared at him.

“Can you quit doing that?” I said irritably. “I should report you. There is a law that says everyone deserves some privacy.” By the blank look on Sam’s face, he didn’t understand. I sighed.
“You spoke in our minds again.”

Sam still had the blank look. “I did?” He asked, sounding surprised. He shook his head.
“I must have, for you to mention it.” He yawned. Then blinked.
“Why is there an egg on the ground?”

Katrina and I both looked at the same time. There it was, sitting next to the fire, an ordinary, household, refrigerator chicken’s egg.
I looked at Katrina’s blank face and laughed. “Come on, get ready,” I said. ”Who wants an omelette?”


<9:00 am, The Fields of Sorrow>
<Katrina’s Point of View>

I looked around nervously. I still didn’t like the name of the fields around us. Plus I had read some ghost stories that were set here.
Nick caught my eye. He grinned. I sometimes thought that he had to be part pokemon, to smile that much without it hurting.

My attention was drawn to my magnetic belt, where Drake’s Pokeball was shaking. With a sigh, I knew I’d regret this later, I pressed the release button.
A flash of red light, and Drake appeared on the ground. “Drat! Dratini! Tini, tini, drat!”

I blinked. “Sam!” I called. He peered over his shoulder and around Artemis.
When he saw Drake in front of me, he stopped. He walked back.

“What is it?” He asked, looking cross. I quickly explained to him, that Drake had been trying to tell me something. Sam frowned, and then opened his mouth. “Drati, drat-drat, tini, drat, tin-drat?”
I stared. It seems the translators did more than just translate Pokemon talk.
Drake replied, saying what he had said before. Sam nodded, and then looked at me. “He said ‘Mummy, look what I can do!’ Ok, are we done?” Without waiting for an answer, he ran up to Nick.

I bent down. “What do you want to show me?”
Drake opened his mouth. A golden wave of light spilt out, surrounding me. Suddenly, I couldn’t move. I tipped over, unable to keep my balance.
Drake looked shocked. “DRAT! TINI-DRAT, DRATINI!!” He shouted.
Up further, Sam stopped and looked back again, when he saw me lying on the ground, he ran back. As soon as he got to me, he knelt down.

He frowned, and then turned to Drake. “Dratin, drati, dratini?” He asked Drake.
Drake started crying, tears came out of his large, blue eyes.

“Drati, dratin, dratinidrat!” He said, tears started dotting the ground. Sam started grinning.
You’ve been paralyzed. Just a sec, I’ve got Paralyze Heal in my bag. He pulled his bag pack off of his back. Artemis jumped off and started comforting Drake.
With a triumphant ‘Ah ha!’ Sam pulled out of his bag a yellow bottle. Gently, I felt my mouth open as Sam opened the lid. Sam poured the liquid in the bottle into my mouth. It ran down my throat. I felt my throat unstiffen so I could swallow. I did so, very quickly. A few minutes later, as my blood circulated the liquid around my body, I sat up.

“Thanks.” I said, rubbing my jaw. “How’d you get my mouth to open? Wait, don’t answer that, I already know.”
I turned to Drake. “Hey, it’s ok. I‘m not angry.”

Drake looked at me, worry in his eyes. A few more tears oozed down his face.
Oh great, I’ve got a cry baby for a Dratini. It would be sorta funny if it remained the same when it was a Dragonite. But kinda pathetic too.

Are you coming or what? I’m not going to wait for you. Now hurry up or I’ll teleport to Arw City. Sam said from ahead. I scowled in his general direction.
I got up and started in his general direction. Drake squirmed after, so I picked him up.

I looked ahead and sighed. It would take me fifteen minutes to reach them. If I ran. Ok, I’m short, get over it.
Suddenly, a blue bubble appeared around me. With a bounce, it went in the direction that Sam was. A few minutes later, I landed in front of Sam and Nick. Sam had a frown on his face while Nick was smirking.
“Why’d you do that? I could have gotten here myself you know.”

“I know you could have. In about a year or so.” Sam said, raising his eyebrow. Suddenly he relaxed. He narrowed his eyes. With a pop, the bubble disappeared.
I fell on the ground. I winced; I had landed on a rock.

Nick looked at Sam. “That was faster than before.”
Sam looked tired. He reached down his shirt and pulled out a chain necklace, at the end was a strange device. Sam flicked it open, inside were some buttons. Sam pressed one, and then shut the thing.

“What was that?” Asked Nick. Sam was about to shove it back down his shirt, but stopped. He opened it again and showed it to us. All that there was inside of it were three buttons and a knob. The knob was only halfway up.

“It’s a Telepathic Wave Translator. It can give you psychic powers, or enhance them if you’ve got them already. In my case, they enhance them.” Sam explained. He shut it again and yanked it off the chain. He handed it to Nick. Nick looked it over, and then attached it to the necklace he also had. Nick’s was only leather though.

“Wait, I can feel something coming. Yeah, there’s something. Here it goes!” Nick exclaimed.
BWAAAARP!
I staggered back, and then raced down the road. Trust me, Nick could get really bad.

Sam wrinkled his nose, he lunged forward and pulled the TWT off of Nick’s necklace and ran after me.
In twenty seconds he had caught up to me.
“That was the single, most foul, disgusting, evil thing I have ever smelt in my life.” Sam said, gasping.

“You’re telling me. Try having him sleep over. It really builds up. I’ve gotten gassed out on lots of occasions. Out of my room at the Elite Tower. And out of his room. And before you say anything, you’re disgusting for thinking that way.” I said, panting as well.

“I wasn’t thinking that way at all. Let’s go before he can get up.” Sam looked over his shoulder. Nick was rolling on the ground, laughing his head off. From the looks of it, Nick had found the whole thing hilarious.

“Good idea. Next time he wants to use your TWT, don’t let him. Come to think of it, why didn’t it work for him?” I asked. She started walking away from Nick, who was still on the ground.

“Well, you do need to train your mind in a certain way. You’ve also gotta think in a different way too. Not to mention some other things. Anyway, he’s been brought up to fight, not think.” Sam explained. He started walking as well.

“Actually, I wouldn’t say that. His mother was the one who invented that.” Katrina said, nodding at Sam’s translator. “And she’s one of the most successful doctors of this century. Not to mention she has TWO Healita’s!” I said, smirking at the look on Sam’s face. “He didn’t start with only $3000 you know; his mother transferred another $10000 to his account!”

Sam’s jaw dropped. “What!?!? You’re joking right? How come he hasn’t gotten any new stuff then?” The idea of a guy have 13 thousand was astounding. Suddenly he smiled.
“How would he feel if he lost a battle?”

I grinned. “Um, seeing as he’s the new Scrooge McGolduck, he’d take it very badly.”
Scrooge McGolduck was a character from an old cartoon. He loved his money so much, he lived a miserly life. And every villain in town tried stealing his money.

“Really? He doesn’t seem the type to hoard money. More like spend it at any chance.” Looking back again, Sam saw Nick was over his hysterics and jogging towards them. A sudden gust of wind bowled Nick over. I looked over too, just as I was blown off my feet. As my head hit rock, I saw darkness.


<Elsewhere, the Fields of Sorrow>
Sam’s point of view

I opened my eyes, and then shut them again. After I opened them again, I concluded that it was dark. When I tried sitting up, I suddenly jolted back. I was tied back. On further inspection, my hands were tied as well. So were my feet.
“Kat? Nick?” I asked, hoping they were nearby. A moan came from my right. Another one came from behind me.
Casting out my mind, I slowly began to shape out where we were. It was a room, with bars on the door and windows. Katrina and Nick were on chairs, so were nine other people. Tai and Kai were there, so was Brandon, the boy who had chosen Liktretch, Amy (Qizret), the guy who had came fourth (Treecko), the girl that came fifth (Senvar) and unfortunately, Hope. The last one was a boy with silvery-white hair.

“Where are we?” I asked. My translator was gone, but my TWT wasn’t. It seems they missed it.
Whoever ‘they’ were. Zeus was still in his Pokeball on my belt, so was Nick’s Chicken and Caterpie. Drogan was in his Pokeball as well. That meant that Sparx, Artemis and Drake were gone.
Whoever had gotten us hadn’t counted on us having any new Pokemon yet. So, I’d need to show them where they went wrong.

“We’re in the Monarch’s Tombstone, the memorial for the Emperor that died here.” Said the silver-hair boy. I quickly scanned the room again with my mind. The only other person with psychic powers was the girl with Senvar. She also had a TWT.
I shook my head. Whoever did this, did it badly.

Don’t jump. I opened a connection between our minds. I needed to be careful; she was stronger than I was. If I WASN’T careful, she’d flood my mind with her powers and wipe it blanker than a Psyduck’s face.
Her face appeared in my mind, framed in orange. She was best at moving things with her mind.

Hi, I didn’t know you were psychic. She said, sounding curious. What do you want?
I winced slightly. What was the most obvious thing that I’d want her for right now? Anyone, anyone at all! You! Psyduck in the corner!

Um, don’t suppose you can help me here, could you? If you untie me, I’ll be able to do something. Then, if I untie you, we’d all be able to get out of here. I said, explaining the whole thing to her.

Err, ok. But I don’t know what you could do; all you can do is teleport and levitate. That doesn’t seem to of much use here. She said, frowning in my minds eye. I bit my lip. There were plenty of things I could do!

Wait; do you know why they caught us? I asked her, thinking of all the reasons why they would. It would most likely be because we were weak, since we started yesterday. Not to mention we had all received rare pokemon.

Yeah, they wanted our pokemon to send to their leader. It was a strange team. They had beige colored shirts and white pants. And the shirts had a big ‘F’ on the front. She replied. That would mean it was Team Fauna.

Team Fauna were a strange team. Instead of capturing pokemon, they stole them from others, and then set them free. They only used plant pokemon, because of their classification. They wanted every other pokemon type in the world to be free. But, in order for them to live peacefully, they wanted the human race to die out.
Team Flora was the opposing team to Fauna. They released all plant pokemon and captured the other types. So, they usually stole from each other, which usually kept them out of everyone else’s business. But sometimes they stole other people’s pokemon.

I sighed. Can you please untie me before they get our other pokemon? I asked her gently. I was getting tired of our conversation.

Ok, here you go. She said. Suddenly, the ropes around my ankles and wrists fell off. I quickly rubbed the feeling back into my wrists and feet. I stood up and stumbled slightly.
I grabbed Zeus’s pokeball from my belt, and then grabbed Drogan’s from Kat’s belt.
“It’s me.” I whispered to her. She nodded, her blonde and purple hair flicking everywhere. I made a mental note to ask her how she got purple hair.
I dashed over to Nick and grabbed Chicken’s and Caterpie’s pokeball. He looked up. With a sudden wrist movement, he snapped his wrist ropes and grabbed my arms with one hand. He tore off his blindfold and was about to punch me in the gut when he saw who it was.

“Oh, sorry Sam. Didn’t know it was you. Thought it was someone getting my other pokemon. Not that I’d miss Chicken.” Nick said his goofy grin in place on his face.

I blinked. “No problem, “I squeaked. “Reckon you could let me go now? And why didn’t you do that before?” It would have saved a lot of trouble. I thought irritably. I had talked to that girl for nothing!

Nick shrugged. “I dunno. I didn’t feel like it. Well, I really wanted to hurt one of the guys that got us. Now, where are they?” He dropped my arms instantly and looked around, as if he hoped for a sign that said “Fauna Mess-Hall” or something like that.

I shook my head. I quickly teleported out of the cell and then levitated the latch of the door. It swung open noiselessly. That is, until it hit the wall.
I winced, that was a noise we didn’t need. I released Zeus and Drogan just a guard dashed down a set of stairs to my right.

“Why you little-!” He snarled before he dropped to the ground, unconscious. Unconscious because Nick’s fist had ‘accidentally-on-purpose-‘met with his nose.
I winced, that looked like it hurt.

“Are we going or not? Come on, we haven’t got all day.” Nick said carelessly, as though it wasn’t a full grown, 170 kilo man he had just knocked out.
I stared at his back, and then ran up the stairs, taking two at a time. When we got to the top, we froze. It was the base’s mess-hall!

“Umm,” I muttered. I thought fast. “Zeus, you can become invisible right?”
Because they were clouds, Nymbis could become invisible. Not to mention they could rain easily and shock you easily.
Zeus nodded; the cloud he was made of bent over to make it look like was frowning. Suddenly he disappeared.
“Good.” I said, nodding with approval. “Get to the centre of the hall and use Rain of Lightning. That way we can be gone before they get up again.”
When I felt him brush past me, I ran back down the stairs. Nick came with me.

“Ok, just start untying people.” Was all I said. I went to the closest person, who was the silver haired boy. I untied him and helped him to stand. When he could stay up on his own, I went to the next person, who was the Psychic Girl. We kept going until I got to the last person, Hope. I paused, wondering if I should just leave her. I made a face, and then started untying her ropes. I hated that movie Pinocchio, and I hated it when I remembered bits of it all of a sudden. Whoever came up with Jiminy Cricket should be shot in my opinion.

As soon as her ropes fell off her, she turned with a snarl. “I could have done that myself. Just leave me alone!’ She hissed poisonously. She pushed me away, and then fled up the stairs, pausing only to collect her backpack which was beside the wall with all the others.

Katrina and Nick came to stand beside me. “I think she really likes you. I know who’ll be your biggest fan at the Diamond League.” Nick said. He started laughing.
Katrina shook her head and a disapproving look came on her face.

“Nick, it’s not funny. She could get really dangerous, if she hates Sam so much. I mean, she probably wouldn’t have done what he just did. We’d better keep an eye on her. Nick, if you don’t shut up, I’ll tell everyone who kissed you under the mistletoe last Christmas.”

THAT shut him up. “That’s no fair, I was ambushed. How was I to know she was hiding behind that Christmas tree. I thought she was on the other side of the hall. I can’t defend myself against that.” He complained, crossing his arms across his chest.

“Come on you two. At this rate, they’ll all be awake. And we need to get Drake, Sparx and Artemis back.” I told them. They stopped arguing instantly and grabbed their packs. As we ran, I spread out my mind over the entire base. Artemis and the others were in their pokeballs, on a desk at the lowest level.

I stopped as we went up to the mess hall. Everyone was on the ground, nicely done. Nick looked at Zeus with a new degree of respect. “Remind me never to get on your bad side.” Nick said to Zeus.

“He’ll do it anyway.” Katrina muttered. I grinned, and looked around. A lift was on the other side of the room. Katrina saw it too and headed for it. Nick saw us and followed. Just before we got to it, I paused. Raising my hands, I made all of the Fauna member’s pokeballs float into the air. I clicked my fingers. Instantly, they teleported to the Comed Pokecentre.
By now, the lift had arrived. I stepped back into it, just as it was about to close.

“Hey Sam, how come you didn’t teleport Drake and the others here?” Katrina asked. She had probably thought of that when I got rid of all the pokeballs just then.

“I can’t. I don’t know why, but my powers won’t work on them. If they could, we’d be out of here by now. All of the others are out. But they’re staying nearby, I think that silver haired boy’s making them stay.” I explained as the door opened. “Ok, battle plan. You two do the physical stuff while I take care of any locked doors and stuff. Ok?”

“Right.” They said in union. They nodded at the same time. I stepped back, and they stepped forward. We walked down an empty corridor, all silver and white. Really bright. We got to the other side of the corridor without anything happening. But the lift required a code.

“Sam?” Nick said. He stepped away to give me access. I frowned at the door. After a minute, the lock lifted and the door slid open. A fist came out of the lift. I bent over backwards as far as I could go. Thankfully, that was enough. Unfortunately, it hurt. A LOT!

“OOOWWW!” I yelled, my hands resting on the floor. I did the only thing that was on my mind: Stop the pain. I swung me feet up after me, that’s harder than it looks, and in the process, kicked the man hiding in the elevator right on the chin.
He went over backwards, and didn’t get up while we were there.

Nick bent over him. Katrina did too.
” Nice job!” Nick said, he looked amazed at the fact that I had knocked the guard out. I was amazed at that too.

“Thanks.” I squeaked. I held my back. “Remind me never to do that again. Otherwise I might break my back. Oow.” I said, eyes watering. That REALLY hurt. I looked at the man, and then did a double take. The guard was bigger than the one Nick had gotten before!
And then I shrugged. “Aren’t I lucky he’s got a glass chin?”

I stepped inside the elevator, levitated the man slightly and moved him out of the elevator. Nick and Kat stepped in and we went to the bottom floor.

“So, did you mean he had an actual chin made out of glass?” Katrina asked, looking skeptical.
She was asking Nick, who rolled his eyes. I shook my head. Sometimes Katrina acted like a real Psyduck.

“No, it doesn’t mean he’s got a glass chin. It means he’s got a real weak chin, so it would be easy to knock him out. So, either Sam doesn’t believe in how hard his kicks are or that man could have been knocked cold by a Ditto.” Nick explained, hoping this would get through to Kat.

She nodded, it made sense.
I shook my head and grasped my back again. I bent forward. A few bones popped, snapping my back into place. I straightened. That felt better!

Suddenly the doors opened. We stepped out into a hallway coated with a soft, pink carpet. The walls were the same, except they were purple. We followed the path until we came to a wooden door. I reached forward with my powers. Just as I was about to touch the lock, my powers zoomed back into my head. I winced, and then tried again. I turned to the others and shook my head. Nick waved me and Kat to the side, and then went as far back as he could.

And then he ran forward. Just before he got to the door, he jumped and put his leg up straight. He slammed into the door. The door stayed up, but Nick’s leg went right through it.
Katrina and me stared, and then started laughing. Nick glared at us. I levitated him back, being carefully so he wouldn’t get spiked by the wood splinters. When he was out, I walked up to the door and looked through the hole. Sitting at a desk was a brown haired woman. She had brown eyes, pale white skin and a small, delicate nose. She was a natural beauty, but there was something cold about the way she glared at me.

“Altogether this time.” I heard Nick say behind me. I walked backwards to where he and Katrina were.
“Three, two, one.” Nick counted down.

“GO!” Yelled Katrina. We all ran at the door. We jumped at nearly the same time. I levitated, so I wouldn’t go through the hole like Nick did. This time the door came off. Katrina and Nick landed on their feet, they were used to this. But I wasn’t. I landed in an undignified pile at their feet.
They looked down at me, smirking.

I got up quickly and stepped into the room. It was empty! But the pokeballs were on the table. I picked the sapphire one up and threw it. Artemis came out, looking extremely angry.
“Ok, where are they? The ones who got me?” He asked, spraying everything in the office with water.

“They’re gone, Artemis.” I said, grabbing him and putting him on top of my pack, his favorite place to nap. “Come on, let’s go. I’m getting sick of this place.”


<Outside Monarch’s Tombstone, the Fields of Sorrow, 9:50 pm>

I walked up to where the other people were hiding. “You can come out now. We’ve got your Pokemon.” I announced, holding up the box full of pokeballs, minus Sparx, Artemis and Drake.
The others came out of a large bush, looking relieved. They were followed by Silver-Hair.

We handed the pokeballs out, but stopped when we found three full ones.
“Whose are these?” I asked, holding them out.

“Mine.” Said Silver-Hair. He grabbed them, and then placed them on his belt. He looked relieved now that he had his pokemon back. I frowned, I still didn’t know who he was. I may as well ask him, I was getting too tired to use telepathy.

“Who’re you?” I asked, sounding tired. The other boy grinned. He grabbed the three pokeballs he had just put on his belt and threw them.
A Treecko, a Torchic and a Mudkip burst out. He then grabbed the other pokeballs on his belt and threw them too. Out came a Taillow, a Wurmple and a Slakoth.

“I’m Brendan Birch.”


<Fauna Base, Dictioy>

“I am most displeased. You were thwarted by three teenagers? More to the point, three teenage BEGINNING trainers?” Yelled Syca, leader of Team Fauna. She had just been told of what had happened at their base at Monarch’s Tombstone.

“But please, they were different. One was psychic, and the other two were related to the Kanto Elite Four!” Said Opal, the Executive of the Monarch Base. While she was beautiful, she was a coward, more afraid of getting a scratch than being poisoned. She was extremely vain.

“And Birch’s son, did you get his pokemon? If you didn’t, I’ll be so displeased you might need to go to work in the thorn bushes of the Safarii Zone.” Syca didn’t give out one kind of punishment for everyone; she punished them with their worst fears.

Opal started shaking. “No, you can’t do that! My skin! Please don’t! I’ll do anything!”

“Take her away.” Syca said to the guards by her door. When they had dragged Opal from the room, Syca turned to her window.
“We will need to watch those three. Guards!”

“Yes Ma’am?”

“Get me the information on one of the Mudkips we caught. Do the same for the Pichu and Dratini. I want their ID numbers. Enter them onto the database, and then bring the information to me. I am curious as to who could have brought down one of our most hidden schemes.”


Pokedex

Chicken
Chicken Pokemon
Fire Type
(None)

An animal from ancient times, this pokemon can breed quickly. A popular meal, the chicken has been eaten for centuries. Wild Chicken’s can be found in Safarii Zones. During the breed season, they can get angry at other males and use a fire-based attack on the opponent. It has not become unusual to find a roasted Chicken in the wild.
 
Whoah! Sorry for skipping a chapter! >< Mebbe you could PM me when new chapters go up? Probably more a bit more reliable than just hoping I happen to see it.

Anyway, moving on to the actual criticism - I'm shocked. I had no idea Sam was that powerful. I mean, you said he got tired flinging someone across the road and teleporting himself a few feet... and now all of a sudden, he's teleporting a huge crowd of people all the way to a pokemon centre from an unknown location? How would he even have known which direction to send them in?! I'm not saying this isn't possible - perhaps because he's a psychic, his body, when under the influence of adrenalin from fear, naturally reacts by increasing the bloodflow to his mind to make using his psychic abilities easier? Even so, I was VERY surprised, to say the least, that he was able to perform such stunts without causing himself a brain haemorrage. If he was dizzy/tired after his actions in chapter one, I can't see him being conscious after Teleporting those Team Fauna folks.

Not to mention levitating while he slept. I mean, to hold something as heavy as your own body up is hard enough physically - how hard must it be for a weak psychic? According to scientific journals and the like, the mind DOES keep working whilst a person is sleeping, but if you're trying to have Sam's psychic powers triggering in his sleep, I'd advise keeping it to shorter bursts.

Alternatively, you might wanna reconsider the genre. A lot of these OOC instances would be permissable under the humour genre. If you want to have your character doing something as bizarre/funny as levitating in his sleep, I wouldn't try to hard to keep the rest of the fic serious. You get a lot more freedom under the humour fic rules than under 'serious trainer' fic rules. Or perhaps this is MEANT to be a humour fic and I've just been really thick not to pick up on it? o_O If so, I'm VERY sorry!

O.O I feel so sorry for that Chicken. I'm of the opinion that chickens are cute and loveable and REALLY don't like to think of any poor li'l critter being disliked/abandoned. I can only hope that Nick'll keep it with him and not delegate it to the depths of his PC to collect dust and wonder why it's unloved. *tear*

Now to the topic of characterisation. Sam - seems like a truly unpleasant person. You've pulled this off really well, but I would still advise having a character that people can relate to and like. I find it hard to relate to Sam cause quite frankly, I don't have awesome powers like that. Plus, his attitude is rather alien to mine.

I'd say I can connect more to Katrina and Nick than Sam, but I really can't understand how someone could catch a pokemon with intent to let it sit aimlessly on PC ...or how ANYONE could not want to get away as soon as possible from a guy who kept reading their minds/thoughts. Especially for a girl, that would be an ENORMOUS invasion of privacy. I know if I was in that situation, I'd have done a runner in the night and tried to never meet again. Anyone who takes liberties like that with their psychic abilites is a person I do NOT want to be around.

On the topic of Team Fauna... I didn't like the first sentence of that section:

I am most displeased. You were thwarted by three teenagers? More to the point, three teenage BEGINNING trainers?” Yelled Syca, leader of Team Fauna.

The dialogue is fine - but I'd lose the 'yelled'. For some reason, I don't imagine Team Leaders as being the 'yelling' sort. IMO they have more composure than that - I can't see anyone rising to the lead of a mafia-like organisation without self control and poise. Plus, if you're going to have them yelling, I'd advise you to put in italics, or at least an exclamation mark.

Which brings me to another point - formatting. I'd lose the capitalised sentences. While I can tolerate capitalised words to show emphasis, in an actual story, I prefer italics. Just looks more professional. And perhaps lose the bolding on mental communication? Italics are fine by themselves - as it is, those sentences draw the eye to them like a red ball in a basket of white ones.

Overall - your story is one of the most action packed fics I've seen in a long time. Don't don't drag it down with poor characterisation. ^^ Good luck and have fun!

Piney.
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Articunomew

I'm not normal
Thanks.
In the chapter where Sam went shopping, he picked up a TWT. IF you don't remember what a TWT is from WoC, it amplifies natural psychic powers, or give powers to those that have them.
I'll remember that about the bolding and italics, and I'll definitely keep that in mind about Syca. Did you like the reasons for why the teams are in place?
Mental note: In rewrite, take out the levitating during sleep.......

Yes, Sam is rather unpleasant. To begin with. He'll warm up to the others eventually, hopefully by Arw City for you. He is a fairly private guy, but once he knows people, he'll start joking around more.

For the mind-reading thing, Sam learns quickly not to do the Mind-Speech thing, unless he sees true cause, or wants to keep an eye on the younger 'Children'. I'll need to do a completely different chapter for one of the next one, because I'm not sure if it is suitable for this Forum. To see what I mean, check this story out on Fanfiction.net. Or do you want me to send it in to one of the Mods, or to you specifically Pinecone?

I'll be keeping those changes in mind, at this rate I might need to do a complete rewrite. Anyone approve?

Thanks for that, and C ya!
 
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mindripper

Guest
Well, on the topic of a rewrite, I would say that you only do one if you feel that a rewrite would substantially improve what you currently have on your hands, all the while dealing with crucial issues, such as plot, which will have a huge bearing on what is yet unshown.

Hey I apologise, but I only read through the first couple chapters, as I have some writing of my own to do, and I was relly intimidated by the wall of text. I dont know, but perhaps you should not have posted so many chappies within such a small constraint?

I agree with Piney on the issue of Sam receiving psychic powers on a whim. I would have liked to have seen it built up appropriately. If I had psychic powers, I would be using them like extensions of my physical limbs, and thus as second nature, and not have to think about them before actually starting the usage. Get what I mean? hmmm, I have no problems with legendaries in fics, but I do feel that ordinary characters are so much easier to relate with, and that the former are extremely easy to screw up. I will withold judgment on them until I read the rest of the chapters and understand more of your plot. Right now, it seems like a normal trainer and said trainer's journet, and I will need more to make a decision on that. I do think that trainer fics can be written well, and I hope you do as such, as you seem to have some skill in writing, as seen from your first two chapters. i reckon I will be in for an interesting read after all!
 
Nice new chapter, Articunomew, as always. What was with the Pokédex entry at the end? Just an FYI, I think The Jolt Master at TPT put a fic in the wrong category and bio, just look at your profile on the main site's library and you'll find this Digimon thing under Beginnings of a Master
 

Articunomew

I'm not normal
Hey!
Thanks Mindripper, and Dark Knight Jorro.
Dark Night: Thanks, but The Jolt Master didn't make a mistake. It's the first chapter in my crossover fiction, Worlds Apart.
Mindripper, the first few chapters I might need to do a rewrite of, seeing as they are the ones that do take away from the story...... Unfortunately, the chapters don't split themselves up into pages until a set amount of posts, I think. Which is a pain, as it scares off people.

Thanks for that, and I'll see about those rewrites!
C ya!
 
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