BioSpark & The 4 Metawarriors. [Voted KNS, for Kirby non-stop.]

[Rikori]

Story: 5 Planets were created, 5 different ages were spread, and 5 elements, was stored inside the 5 Planets.. The element of evil, were stored into the planet of Cresunat.. The element of power and defense, were stored into the planet of Meta.. The three others is unknown.. 5 Brave warriors, from the planet of Meta, began to search for the elements.. They found a mysterious door in the small planet they had found.. They had walked into the door, and disappeared, into a new dimension.. the Dimension of Kirby.. They thought they were alone in the dimension but they discovered that one of them were missing, and they began to think that he were kidnapped.. Was it life in this dimension? Of course it was. A squad of some sort of orange Kirbies, appeared, and just wanted to kill the warriors, for some odd reasons.. *Will be continued..*

Chapter 1:
Episode 1: The Squad.
Episode 2: Blizzel Zee.

Fan Stuff: None!

Bio's:

K-Night - Image: [Image comes soon] - Info: Umm. Spear Guy. [Name edited, Reason: Umm.. How can somebody be named Lunar Knight? I made it K-Night Instead.]

Masher - Image: [Image comes soon] - Info: ... Overprotective Guard(has to test your tea, every day.. o_o, You know what I mean.. -_-'') Spike Ball Guy.

BioSpark - Image: [Image comes soon] - Info: -_-'' Ninja, Dagger Guy.

Butch - Image: [Image comes soon] - Info: '' Viking, Axe Guy.

Stave - Image: [Image comes soon] - Info: >_> Robot, Spear/Missile Guy.

Please, dont SPAM!

And If you're a 0-1-Star rater, dont rate.

Credits:

Davis PKMN Master, for the inspiration.
and The Spriters Resource for the sprite sheets, of every Metawarriors and BS.

If you have any Kirby Advanced backgrounds, please PM me.

 

[blueaquadog]

Nice start! I'll make sure to watch this comic.

 

[Rikori]

Nice start! I'll make sure to watch this comic.

Thanks!

To all others that reads it, and is confused, read the story, first! THAT's the intro.

Updates tommorow, or maybe, the day after tomorrow.

Please post your C&C! And BioSpark, wont cut of your legs, slowly with a spoon! And one more thing.. This comic will have some wierd jokes, and things that maybe is offending to people's and other things, like it. And therefor this will be PG-13.

 

[Davis the Gamer]

I read the title of this comic.
It said Biospark (as you already know, he's my fave partner ever), so I started to read.
Then it's like "A Chibi Ninja" and i'm like, dude you ripped off a charater I ripped off some other site.
Then it said that I inspired you, so I'm happy.

the speech bubbles aren't that great. The tails are bad.
Grammar.
The battle scene wasn't long enough. Wow, one attack and the waddle dees are dead.

But my comic sucked at the first comic, so we'll see how much you improve first.

And for Kirby Backrounds:
www.bghq.com
and Kirby Sprites:
www.drshnapsproductions.com

 

[Rikori]

I read the title of this comic.
It said Biospark (as you already know, he's my fave partner ever), so I started to read.
Then it's like "A Chibi Ninja" and i'm like, dude you ripped off a charater I ripped off some other site.
Then it said that I inspired you, so I'm happy.

the speech bubbles aren't that great. The tails are bad.
Grammar.
The battle scene wasn't long enough. Wow, one attack and the waddle dees are dead.

But my comic sucked at the first comic, so we'll see how much you improve first.

And for Kirby Backrounds:
www.bghq.com
and Kirby Sprites:
www.drshnapsproductions.com

Thanks! Still, I cant do Speechbubbles, I know.. Kill me. x_X And yeah the battle scene.. It will be a 5-7 comics with just battle.. (BioSpark vs. Unknown, soon to be found out.. Well yeah it will be the Waddle Dee's brother, vs. him..

Oh yeah, thanks to you, I maybe will be able to do Episode 2 today, afterall! ^_^

 

[Rikori]

Double Post!

Im going to update today after all.. -_-''

Episode 2: Blizzel Zee.

 

[Dark Venusaur]

I liked how you put the words into the bubbles and how you made the scene from Kirby. Good creativity

;003;DV;003;

 

[Rikori]

I liked how you put the words into the bubbles and how you made the scene from Kirby. Good creativity

;003;DV;003;

Thanks! This comic will be kinda DBZ in a episode, and the whole comic will have some Naruto things, also. *Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, and some other kins of Jutsu's..* new episode today! Comes in about an hour.

EDIT: No episode today.. +_+ I have to sleep kinda early.. x_X Sorry. I'll update tommorrow..

 

[Mastercougar]

It's not bad so far, but da thing is, I have to completely rely on your post to know what the backstory is. A good comic should stand alone. Show the backstory by eventually letting your characters reveal it, like Blueray did in one of his comics, or at least make an intro comic.

 

[Rikori]

It's not bad so far, but da thing is, I have to completely rely on your post to know what the backstory is. A good comic should stand alone. Show the backstory by eventually letting your characters reveal it, like Blueray did in one of his comics, or at least make an intro comic.

Yeah, I was up to make one, but that one got deleted.. -_-'' I'll make a new one, then. Wont be a update tomorrow, since im going to dad.. -_-''

 

[Rikori]

Updates, when atleast 5 different people, replys..