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Blitz Park
- Thread starter +Erin+
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Mastercougar
The Infinite Fire
SHOUTING IS KINDA TIRESOME!!!
...Seriously, for the most part, a "!" is all you'll need, even if the character is shouting. And to have it go on for more than two episodes....
Your sprite quality is alright, but so far the jokes have just been about violence. Doesn't really appeal to me.
...Seriously, for the most part, a "!" is all you'll need, even if the character is shouting. And to have it go on for more than two episodes....
Your sprite quality is alright, but so far the jokes have just been about violence. Doesn't really appeal to me.
i know i fixed that,anyway new updateMastercougar said:SHOUTING IS KINDA TIRESOME!!!
...Seriously, for the most part, a "!" is all you'll need, even if the character is shouting. And to have it go on for more than two episodes....
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Bagonclaw
Guest
Is putting periods and using correct grammar too much yo ask?! >_<
Seriously.
Also, use only 1 or two exclaimation marks after a scentence.
You need a plot in this comic! So far, I have only seen Eggman gushing out blood.
One last thing... don't put TV clips in your comic.
_BC_
Seriously.
Also, use only 1 or two exclaimation marks after a scentence.
You need a plot in this comic! So far, I have only seen Eggman gushing out blood.
One last thing... don't put TV clips in your comic.
_BC_