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Blitzman.EXE

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Blitzman

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This comic is related to Megaman battle networks.Exept that I use pokemon
backgrounds and inverted backgrounds for the net.The Reson that I did not
use megman battle network backgrounds and net backgrounds is that they
are very frustrating to make cause they are not flat out like pokemon backgrounds.
If you have ever tryed to then u would know why i did this.Any way enjoy my
comic =)

Part 1 Shademan's Plan
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Dad's Errand
Connection lost
Battle with Shademan
Wave Magnet
The locked shack

Special
Kince Town Mini Map

Plz post and give me your opinion
 
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Blues

Monkey Dragon
Another Rockman themed comic? These are starting to become contagious... Anyway, your backgrounds don't go at all with your sprites, even if they are magnified, you should change that. Second, your main character's sprite looks terrible, I'm afraid. First it was recoloring R/S/E's hero, and now it's a Rock character? I'm not entirely sure, but is that Koujiro (Dubbed Mick, if you don't know who that is)? Try to put more work into your sprites. Your speech bubbles need some work. For the most part, they're alright, but the trail needs an outline similar to the rest of the box. Ok, next, your character's movement is HORRIBLE. Select + Shift shouldn't be used for regular walking, it makes it look like he's going through some time warp. One sprite is enough to show he's walking (And if you have to explain what the character is doing, that should tell you it shouldn't be done.). Next, your grammar is lacking commas, but that's basically it. Last, the plug in sequence isn't very good, Serge looks like he's got a string coming out of his pocket. Oh, and if you're going to use mugshots, at least use decent looking ones (no offence, but there look very off).

So in closing, don't use Pokemon backgrounds, never use Shift + Select tool, and work on editing sprites.
 
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Blitzman

Guest
-_- Another bad review for Blitzman...Anyway I kinda had a few doubts about
the walking.I was trying something diffrent and about the sprites...yah it was
kinda bad but i just dont like the pokemon sprites cause they look kinda weird.
For the lazer.....do you think i should make it a little wider or a darker color?
Or Both? For the MugShots..Yes shademan and Serge have bad ones...later i
will make new ones and replace the old ones. But Blitzman has a great
mugshot just wait for the next one to find out.What is wrong with the pokemon
background? I dont want to just copy/paste the normalbackgrounds of the game
cause then it wont be that unique. So thx i will work on that.
 
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