Bounter Hunter Goken concept art

[Clockworkz]

Yeah; I've been gone for a while. But as 2pac said in "Hit Em Up", "Now I'm back to set the record straight... with my AK, I'm still the thug that you love to hate".

Conceptual art for a soon to be produced graphic novel if I'm not too lazy.
Goken Ishikawa, everybody.

His right arm looks askew because he's supposed to be holding a gun in that hand, but I can't judge the size of the paper and the size of the character simultaneously. Ever.

"...I hit 'em up!"

 

[Tip The Waitress]

very nice work i suppose, do you think you could add some color or a background to enhance it though?

 

[Clockworkz]

I could. But it is a sketch. Hence the "concept art" subtitle.
But I like it; once i find my pens, I just might ink it.

 

[tinyturtle]

tahts pretty good but his arms look hunched over abit

 

[Clockworkz]

His right arm looks askew because he's supposed to be holding a gun in that hand...

*sighs, shakes head and walks away*

 

[Who Said Pikachu?]

Hmn, don't really know what to comment.
He's a neat design though I will say that.
Which hand is holding a gun? They both look the same to me, as in they both look they should be holding something. Anyways.

Crits would be.
He has a very pointy crotch.. this is the first thing I noticed which doesn bode well for me, but whateva. Anyways that's generally a no no for guys for obvious reasons.

He's got a very starchy shirt especially on his left side where it lifts out quite a lot at the bottom, he doesn't really look like the kinda guy who irons let alone starches his clothes. Either bring his shirt in or his hip out, though bringing his hip out that much would throw off his figure so that's not really the ideal. He could do with bringing that side's rear out a little though since he's a bulky guy but seems to have a rather small backside.

I like the muscle definition on his arms, they're very good.
Itcould just be me, but I'd say bring out his shoulders some more, broaden them.
Neck's good too, except on the left side where it joins the head, don't bring it in, just send that line straight up, necks don't really go in and especially not where they join the head.

He's got a pale and a dark eye... ee, throwing me off, tsk. Mostly as the darker one is slightly bigger, it's making that eye seem off from the other.

Ok, hope that helps. Nice concept art, he's a very nice design and looks very neat. Draw more and lets see that graphic novel!

Happy hunting!
~Pika!