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Bowser Back In Beanbean!

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Marril_Man

Guest
My second comic on the site. It is mario themed and is more or less a PG.
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Comic
Ep 1-Enter new Comic!
Ep 2-Attack Of the Fighter Flies
Ep 3-THe Angry Mother! Part 1
Fan Stuff
None
Credits
Many, Many, MANY! People from TSR.
 
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Lotad

ZOMG!I'm a person!
I can't believe that bean thought bowser was santa! XD
Anyways,good comic, except the speech bubbles are a bit too thick.
 
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Bagonclaw

Guest
Here we go.
Just remember- Doing this will make your comic better- so more people will visit it.

#1: Recolor Bowser Jr. with the dad's colors
#2: Only resize sprites by intervals of 100
#3: Speech bubbles. It makes it hard to read the words if they are too small.
Also, do not make them too large either
(I have some preset speech bubbles if you would like to use them.)
#4: I think you could have got more out of "Angry Mom"

_BC_

Edit: Don't use lines to show actions.
 
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Magical Trevor

Guest
Will you keep going with Ball and Co because I'll miss that comic if you just leave it.
 
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Marril_Man

Guest
I won't leave Ball + Co. I can handle 2 comics. I will try those things. Yet I will keep angry mother. It sounds cooler than Angry Mom. I got the Bowser Jr. Sprite from TSR I guess I could edit it abit more.
 
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Magical Trevor

Guest
Oh good for a whileI thoght you had left it. Though I have to comics that I can handle so I should have known you could. Silly me
 
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