Brendan and Gold in Kanto

[Modem X]

Here is a new comic without bad recoulors and a didn't copy anybody on this on. NeoFighter
Comics

Intro
Comic 1
Comic 2
Comic 3
Comic 4
Fan Stuff

Sprite Sheats/Trainer Cards


Credits

The Spriter's Resource
Beco for the nicely ripped Rocket Grunts
VG maps
Silver Fusion for the excellent sprites of the kanto Brendan
Avatar for the brilliant Hiro/Gold sprites
Coronis for some trainers which will appear later

 

[Silver Fusion]

Ahem... Did I say you could use my sprites?! Atleast you said they weren't bad.

So... Umm. Where are the comics?

 

[Modem X]

Sorry about that Silver Fusion but there up now

 

[zeppelin]

there really good but on the first comic howcome they go in a cave for i panel?

 

[Modem X]

Oh yeah about the "cave" Brendan pulls Gold underwater with him to avoid being hit by the SS. Anne which later stalks them through out the seiries

 

[Modem X]

this is your best comic yet
originality: 10/10 being stalked by the ss anne cool!
humor 10/10 screw the overused joke that is classic!
sprites 10/10 im not saying about any sprites that you made its just good taste

Thanks tanhony makes me feel wanted on serebiiforums.com o by the way Comic 4 will be up in about9-11 cause i got 2 sllep

 

[Silver Fusion]

I really don't like the fact that you're using my sprites. I will ask you to remove them. I hate comic makers who use my Brendan sprites without asking!

This comic seems weird. I personnally don't like it. Theres no plot. No humour. Just decent sprites in Kanto.

 

[Tai]

The only comic that made slight sense was comic number 3. By the way, it made no sense if he wanted to watch dodgeball. It's more then 20 minutes long. I didn't get any of the jokes. The no battle in comic number 2 shows pure laziness. And don't explain what happened in the boards, because some people will read it and not the replies. Put it in the comic. The sprites are excellent.

 

[kapslock]

Hehe, Finnaly a journey comic with no bad recolors! W00t okay time for some crit.1st comic-why are they on the S.S Anne? Are they on vacation? are theyTraveling to a new region? Was it really nessisary for Brendan to say crap? You spelled excacly wrong, so did i ;LOL It`s best if you ask permission to use sprites,and don`t use chat talk.Maybe in the last pannel in the 1st comic, you should add bubbles and seaweed to know the were undewater.
2nd comic- Wow the 7th pannel in the comic, you are lazy, atleast do the last battle where their asses aregetting whooped. It kinda seemed like you broke the 4th wall with the over used joke joke,LOL,.but still it was funny, alittle.
3d comic-Erm nothing much to say but,dodgeball is not 20min long.why did they go and then leave in like 20min?Ahh gosh it is a journey fic.
In General- Get your own sprites, or ask for permission next time.Sorry budy, but re do the parts, or do an intro explaining the first comic. Or re do the parts i was talking about.
peace out, pok*e

 

[Capt.Miko]

The plot is very rushed. In the last comic. Especailly in the 3rd one, there are no transitions from the Pokémon center to the gym (should have gone outside and go into the gym). And it just feels incomplete.

 

[Modem X]

Okay i remade the format for Brendan and Gold in Kanto.

 

[Silver Fusion]

That means remove my Brendan sprite for your sig too.

I said you couldn't use them! So you used them anyway!

Try and bring some humour into the comic. Make it make sense. Make it decent.

If you make a plot. I will let you use my Brendan sprites. I only sprite for comics that I like.

OK? Use them for the next chapter if you like. If its a good chapter you can use them. K?

 

[kapslock]

Erm... yah know what moves tyhpo knows cause all he does is fire blast.

 

[Modem X]

Erm... yah know what moves tyhpo knows cause all he does is fire blast.

Ya, but that's his strongest attack so Gold uses it a lot.

 

[Pokemon Groudon]

its pretty good, when are you doing your next comic?