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Brendan's Struggling (PG-13 for future content) PLEASE READ!

Black Murder Heavangelon

Ow! Ow! Harder! Ow!
Brendan's Struggle (PG-13 for future content) PLEASE READ!

Since my last two fics were completely ignored, I hope this will change that.

Prologue for Fafiction.net

~This is his battle, no one elses. His pokemon may have suffered, but he has suffered the most. Brendan struggles to stay alive against the one person he fears, himself.

Brendan’s Struggle

By Black Murder Heavangelon

Was there really any point? Why should he continue? He already has the world’s strongest pokemon, and he has defeated every trainer in Hoenn. At first, Wallace was a struggle to defeat, but he managed to beat him. Steven was more of a challenge, but in the end, he was no challenge at all. No matter how hard the gym leaders trained their pokemon, they could never defeat him. He was virtually undefeatable. People say that there could only be one person who could defeat him, and that was himself. But that’s not likely to happen, would it?

The trees were still, the sky was bright, and the moon was shining upon the night-shaded land. He watched as the few clouds present in the sky stroll along in the atmosphere above him. There was no reason for him to continue, he had done it. He had defeated the champion and former champion. He turned his head to see his beloved pokemon; the one pokemon that means the world to him, who was watching the moon as well.

He was a blue monster-like fish with orange cheek whiskers, two parallel fins on his head that lined his orange eyes, a bright blue underbelly, orange elbows, and a fin-like tail as big as a table in height. He was a Swampert, Brendan’s first pokemon, nicknamed Riverbank. However, unlike other Swampert, this one had a purple hue where the blue normally is and the fins and orange spots had a purple tint in them. This hue seemed to give off a light of its own, which is why they called these pokemon ‘shinies’. Being his first pokemon, he had experienced all of the pain his trainer had felt during his travels, and sooner or later, they would take an effect on him.

He turned his view to see his other pokemon, also looked at the moon, that was the first wild pokemon he caught.

He was as big as a house, which is common for most species, and had silver colored horns, a big grey tail, silver armor-like portions on his shoulders and ankles, and lines on his body depicting the hardness of the armored monster. It was his Aggron, nicknamed Titanium. Titanium’s silver armor gleamed in the moonlight providing a source of light for the group. Titanium never liked friends, he knew too well how risky putting trust in friendship is, besides, and he wouldn’t let it happen again.

Next to Titanium was a stiff green bird with observing eyes watching the moon as well, two red feathers on its head, colored white wings with black and red markings at the end of the wing, and thin feet consisting of only two toenails; one at the front and one at the back. It was his Xatu, known as Winged Neo to him. Winged Neo always looked at stuff like he was examining them, but he knew all Xatu does that. Winged Neo was weird among his species, and therefore was called a mental freak. He has a right to express his opinions, but no one is willing to listen.

Above Winged Neo in the trees was a white haired tree nymph with his hair covering the cranium and his whole back. He had yellow eyes, wood like skin and fan-like hands made of leaves. The one pokemon that looked the most like him, Shiftry, nicknamed Blackheart. Blackheart’s white hair always got to him about the hair color between him and Blackheart. He was created for egg move purposes and that hurts him. He was made for one purpose, to serve his trainer. But what really hurts is how obedient he is. Blackheart knew its better to exist one way then not existing at all.

On the tree Blackheart was standing on was a big beetle sucking sap out of a tree. She was blue with a great horn on her head rooted next to two antennae holding small receptors. Hyper was her name, his Heracross, and her nickname does not express what hyperactivity Hyper may have. Hyper could not understand the world around her. It was too brutal. She had seen her fair shares of fatality, and she could never survive in such a world. But no one knows her reasons for staying alive.

He looked forward to see where his other pokemon was. There he was, all alone, looking at the moon in deep regret. He was dead to the world, nothing could change his mind about that. He wasn’t needed here, but his trainer needed him. He’s been thinking about it recently, about what would his purpose be if he succeeded? But did he succeed? He wasn’t so sure. He was still alive, and that was enough proof. His existence meant failure, and his true failure was from existence. He shouldn’t be alive, but he couldn’t do anything about it. He was immortal, and his own blessing was his suffering.

He was one of the most unique legendaries of the world. He was a blue dragon type with blue, jet-like wings at both sides. Where his legs should be were replaced with figments of what seems to be feathers. Half of his body was colored white and blue; white below and blue on top. His arms were small, but big enough the ensure battle and other possible activity. There was a hollow red triangle on his chest and his eyes were colored red in the iris. He was his first legendary, the Eon pokemon, Latios.

He knew Latios was thinking about his past and his memory, but there was no way he could help. But that was no problem, he never needed help. He knew everything about pokemon thanks to his father and his will for adventure thanks to his mother. But he had the most suffering among everyone, even his own pokemon. They could never level up to the pain he went through. And helping will only make them suffer more, which is why they must never know. He began the problem, now he has to fix it. But if there’s one thing he’ll never admit is that he’s afraid. Survival is the only thing he can do in this world, and he is threatening it. He’s the only person he’s afraid of, and his pokemon obey every order because they know what he’s capable of.

‘I shouldn’t be afraid, I’m the champion!’ he thought, ‘I’m Brendan Birch, and I have nothing to fear…’

‘…but fear itself,’ thought someone else.

His eyes shot in shock as he sat up and looked around. He was close, very close, and there’s no running away. He was coming, he’s come for his suffering. He lied back down with a determined face with thoughts of encouragement in his head.

‘You may have been the cause of my suffering throughout my whole life, but now I want to end it,’ he thought, ‘I’m Brendan Birch, and no doppelganger can change that. I hope you’re ready…’

He reached into his bag and pulled out the weapon. In his hands was a weapon of sheer death, a weapon that could end life in the blink of an eye, a weapon that can take life, love and dreams away; the perfect weapon…

‘…because I’m ready to end it,’ he said as the moonlight glistened upon the gun…
 
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Literate

black cat, black cat
O_O *speechless* WHOA! SUICIDE!

This sounds like a one-shot to me actually. And I read it.

Just one little mistake I happened to get and it is here:

He lied back down with a determined face with thoughts of encouragement in his head.
There is no such word as 'lied' it is 'laid' or something.

Anyway, I've rethought it over and it wasn't suicide. *thinks* Okay, maybe it is. *shrugs* You may never know.

~PEACE~
 

Demise

...An orange blob...
@_@

Ditto, litestars...ditto

It does sound like a one-shot, to me. I can't really obtain a scene where a fic would start out with the character already a champion or undefeatable person..[SPOIL]Though I probably would...O_O...[/SPOIL]

A gun? Say...how old is he? If he was sort of a preteen or teenager, they normally wouldn't have a gun.

More like a pocket knife, I mean...that...is what kids can get thier hands on...or scissors, or a shard of glass. (though no one in thier right mind would do that)

Kill description! ^_^....I mean, 'WOW', nice and vivid description. Easy to imagine...sort of...

Great job for putting description before revealing the species of pokemon it is. I like guessing, that way I can use your description to see if I can guess the right pokemon.

One question: In the title:

'Brendan's Struggling'

is it suppose to be, if you take out contractions:

'Brendan is Struggling'

or is it Brendan's Struggle, in a owner type way...because if it is, it wouldn't make sense because 'struggling' is a verb, and 'Brendan's' meaning 'own'

If not...*thumbs up* :D

G' luck.

Eevee says: Tasch!
 

Black Murder Heavangelon

Ow! Ow! Harder! Ow!
Yay! Readers! I hardly get those here! To answer your reviews (P.S. this isn't a one-shot):

litestars: I thought it sounded better that way. I don't trust my spell checker so much, always telling me to use 'its' instead of 'it's' like it doesn't exist. And i don't trust that Paper clip guy that always pops up whenever i open a document......

darcstars (say, are you two related?): this is actually a short story, probably about two or three chapters, most likely two. If i get enough reviewers i might make a sequel.

and the title was a mistake. It was supposed to be 'Brendan's Struggle'. I can't change the title for some reason.

Well, be ready for the next chappie! May be the last.
 

Literate

black cat, black cat
Black Murder Heavangelon said:
Yay! Readers! I hardly get those here! To answer your reviews (P.S. this isn't a one-shot):

litestars: I thought it sounded better that way. I don't trust my spell checker so much, always telling me to use 'its' instead of 'it's' like it doesn't exist. And i don't trust that Paper clip guy that always pops up whenever i open a document......

darcstars (say, are you two related?): this is actually a short story, probably about two or three chapters, most likely two. If i get enough reviewers i might make a sequel.

and the title was a mistake. It was supposed to be 'Brendan's Struggle'. I can't change the title for some reason.

Well, be ready for the next chappie! May be the last.
I mean, lie and lay is pratically the same thing. 'You lay down.' 'You lie down.' It portrays the same meaning. I use lay though.

And yes, we're siblings. I signed up first though. *mutters copycat*

~PEACE~
 

Demise

...An orange blob...
Yay! Readers! I hardly get those here! To answer your reviews (P.S. this isn't a one-shot):

litestars: I thought it sounded better that way. I don't trust my spell checker so much, always telling me to use 'its' instead of 'it's' like it doesn't exist. And i don't trust that Paper clip guy that always pops up whenever i open a document......

darcstars (say, are you two related?): this is actually a short story, probably about two or three chapters, most likely two. If i get enough reviewers i might make a sequel.

and the title was a mistake. It was supposed to be 'Brendan's Struggle'. I can't change the title for some reason.

Well, be ready for the next chappie! May be the last.

Uh-huh, I would consider it harder to write a long fic when the main character is already a champion.

Though if you have any alternate solution, such as something different, then it wouldn't be so hard...wouldn't it?

Two chapters, is a bit short, isn't it? Well, you can extend it a bit longer if he doesn't killhimself. ^_^

How old is he any way? Is he allowed to carry a gun when he could just kill someone with his pokemon? Why does he seem like he's paranoid? ANSWER please.

I have a old man wizard instead of clip-it. *Mutters Stupid clip* I hate it whenever I try to create my own stories.

I think you can change it by editing the first post.

MAY be the last, don't lose interest! Only one more chapter or two more.

Ah, now that I think of it, you can display Brendan's struggle, like fans (yep), people popping up constantly demanding for a battle, news reporters banging on his door. Things like that...or not...if you sort of set low goals for it. -_-

Yes, we're siblings, she posts more than I. *coughstupidcoughcomputercoughhoggercough*

litestars is a grammactical maniac and I criticize on the plot and main basics of the story.

Anywayz, g' luck on your last/second chapter.

Eevee says: Tasch!
 

The Great Butler

Hush, keep it down
Hey, not bad. It's a nice change from all the 'become the champ' storylines, and it shows that *being* the champion isn't always a guarantee of happiness. Good job.

Uh-huh, I would consider it harder to write a long fic when the main character is already a champion.

..........

*coughminecough*
 

Demise

...An orange blob...
....Well, in my opinion, it is hard to write a fic like that, except my upcoming fic would have an alternate story side than a champion.

Good bye, I'll disappear until next chapter is up. ^_^
 

Black Murder Heavangelon

Ow! Ow! Harder! Ow!
Heheh, this is what I like from reviewers, guessing things they don't know hwne I know the answer. But before any more confusion occurs, Brendan's NOT gonna kill himself...or is he?

I might start working on chapter 2. after some careful thinking, this story should be about 3 chapters. but i think chapter 2 may be a bit short. i may update today or tomorrow. but look forward to it.

P.S. he stole that gun...
 

The Doctor

Absolute Beginner
Hmm, I know I put that bottom jaw down somewhere... Ah, here we are.

*pops jaw back into place*

This story is great, love it so much, particularly Blackheart the Shiftry. This story would work well as a one-shot, because the audience knows what happens at the end, evn if it's inconclusive.
 

Black Murder Heavangelon

Ow! Ow! Harder! Ow!
OKay, here's chapter two. It's quite long for any chapter I've made in a while, but please take the time to read it. In this chapter, we've got some equal enemies to Brendan's pokemon. But this won't be the last chapter!

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Brendan’s Struggle (part II)

By Black Murder Heavangelon

‘Today is the day I’m gonna end it,’ he thought, ‘no more pain, no more suffering, just one pull of the trigger will make it go away…’

“Hey Brendan,” a voice from behind said, “you okay?”

Brendan turned around to see his Swampert snap him back to reality in worry. He turned back and continued walking.

“Yeah, I’m fine,” he said.

The rising sun of the next day wouldn’t be enough to change his views. His pokemon were walking by him as he led them to the next destination of his choice. However, there was nothing more to do in Hoenn anymore, so Brendan really had nowhere to go. He wouldn’t return to his hometown; he likes being alone. So most of his walking is used for his mental alone time; the pokemon tag along outside of their pokeballs in case he’s attacked and to intimidate any foolish trainer thinking they can beat him.

“Brendan?” his Aggron, Titanium, asked, “what are you thinking about?”

Winged Neo, his Xatu, shot him a death glare after his question. Brendan’s pokemon knew better than to ask of his thoughts when he dislikes nosy people to great extents. Even Winged Neo knew better than to dare take a peek into her trainers mind. But as much as she respects her trainer’s privacy, she’s been feeling some discharge coming from Brendan at times. Sure, a little sympathy for their trainer couldn’t hurt, but Brendan never needed sympathy, he pities sympathy.

“I’m thinking of…a certain person,” he answered.

“Like whom?” his Swampert asked, feeling it was someone familiar.

“…someone that’s still a part of me, in a way,” he answered, “someone who went away when I least expected it and who’s been my reason the whole time…”

Swampert felt his assumptions were correct. He was thinking of someone, but he feels like he shouldn’t mention her name for some reason. If she means a lot to him, then why would he keep it to himself? He knew as well as his trainer knew, that he can’t stop thinking about her, at least that’s what he thought. So if this is the type of matter he believes, then the answer is just some alone time, he thought.

“Do you want to be alone?” Swampert asked.

“…yes. That would be beneficial,” he said, “wait for me by that spring over there,” he said pointing to the miniature waterfall with a small pool by some trees; the typical pokemon hangout.

He walked into the trees were the light began to weaken. His pokemon stopped following him at that point because it was what he wanted. They walked over to the spring and decided to wait for their trainer to come back from his walk. Winged Neo and Hyper, the Heracross, waited on the trees nearby, Titanium and Blackheart, the Shiftry, laid down for some rest, Swampert waited by strolling around in the water, and Latios sat on top of the waterfall looking at the sky.

“So Swampert,” Winged Neo asked, “who was Brendan thinking about?”

Swampert pulled his face out of the water to reveal some kelp in his mouth and spoke.

“Phee phas phinphin phout phay,” he said through the kelp.

“Don’t speak with your mouth full!” Winged Neo said.

Swampert swallowed the kelp and repeated.

“I said, he was thinking about May, a trainer he met long ago.”

“So, what’s she like? And how do you know about her?” she asked.

“Sometimes, when Brendan needed someone to talk to, he’d talk to me about any problem he had. He told me all he knew about May, so from what I heard, she’s a kind and caring girl.”

Winged Neo looked away and pondered for a moment. No longer interested in the subject, she decided to change it.

“Brendan’s been acting kinda weird lately,” she said.

“What kind of weird?” Swampert asked.

“Weird for our trainer. He’s not acting like himself. I wonder if something’s bothering him,” she said with worry.

Swampert then recalled the weapon Brendan had a few months ago. It was when Team Aqua and Magma were seriously at it in trying to awaken the titans. When he defeated a grunt and knocked him out cold, Brendan took a gun that was in his pocket and kept it for that day just in case things got a bit messy. The mess was over soon, but he still kept that gun. If Brendan’s still holding that gun…

“I’m gonna go look for Brendan, he should be back by now,” Swampert said getting out of the pool.

“I’m gonna help,” Winged Neo said, “I have a better eyesight from above.”

“Hyper, your coming?”

Hyper removed her mouth from the sap-soaked tree hole and said.

“Sure, I’m pretty full now, so I got nothing better to do.”

“Titanium, we’re gonna need your help too, whether you like it or not,” Swampert said.

Titanium lifted his body enough to shoot a glare at Swampert and grumpily get up. Swampert turned to Blackheart.

“Blackheart, you stay and keep watch,” he said.

“Got it,” Blackheart said as he lazily raised his hand in agreement.

“And Latios,” he said turning to the Eon, “you just keep doing what you’re- hey! Where’d he go?”

Latios had disappeared from the spot he was last seen in. He left way before Swampert and Winged Neo’s ended their conversation.

“He’s gone…” Swampert said in minor shock.

“Oh well, let’s look for Brendan now,” Winged Neo said breaking the momentary silence.

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Titanium strolled through the only part of the forest big enough for him to fit in. the trees were high above a distance from Titanium’s head. The sunlight shined through the leaves leaving little glints on Titanium’s armor. Titanium didn’t really want to look for his trainer; but he proved to be a really great friend he can trust. But if there’s anyone who knew betrayal, it was Titanium.

‘I have to find Brendan. I don’t want to betray him. If only I hadn’t taken friends for granted back then, he’d still be alive,’ he thought.

When Titanium was just an Aron, he had a friend who was an Anorith. The two were childhood friends, always inseparable; they never left Granite cave alone. Whenever one of them was hungry, the other would share his food, even if they couldn’t eat it. There friendship would’ve lasted forever, until…

“Anorith!” the Aron yelled.

An Aerodactyl outbreak occurred in Granite cave, pokemon who weren’t supposed to be found in Granite cave. They were all hungry, and wanted something prehistoric to munch on. Anorith were the prime prey for Aerodactyl’s back then, and just so happened to have been standing there.

“Aron!” he yelled as he choked through the Aerodactyl claw that cornered him to the ground.

Aron wasn’t strong enough to take on three Aerodactyl’s, in fact, he wasn’t strong enough at all. He couldn’t watch his best friend get eaten by three monsters.

“Aron, help me!” he continued to yell.

Aron didn’t know what to do. The three Aerodactyl’s waited to see if he would fight, or run. Aron had come to a decision and chose the one mistake in his life; he ran. He turned the other way and ran as fast as he could away from the cries of terror and betrayal.

“ARON!” were the last words he heard from his friend, followed by the sound of squawking Aerodactyl fighting over who gets their lunch.

He ran as fast he could until he could run no more. He rested for a few minutes until he heard footsteps from afar. They were getting closer and closer…

“Oh, cool! An Aron! Ready Marshtomp?” the trainer said.

“I’m ready!” he heard from the Marshtomp, “Wait Brendan, this Aron looks tired. I think he’s been in a rough battle.”

“Well, in that case, I’ll just catch it and heal it at the pokemon center. Sounds good?”

“Okay.”


‘…and that’s how I met Brendan,’ he thought.

He was still haunted by the memories of his deceased friend; he couldn’t get the image out of his memory. Sure he was the one who ran, but it was still no excuse for him to call anyone friend. He didn’t deserve it; he didn’t deserve any of it. If he had stayed and fight, at least he would still be alive. But no, he isn’t alive, and he wasn’t coming back…

“Rock blast!”

He heard the command out of nowhere as five huge boulders shot at him. He destroyed the first boulder with a slash of his claw, the second oncoming boulder with a slash from the second claw, the third with a whip of his tail, the fourth with another claw, and the fifth with a headbutt of his horns.

‘Where’d that attack come from?’ he thought as he scanned his surroundings for the attacker.

He soon spotted the attacker who was just up ahead on the road he was on. It was a big dinosaur like pokemon with red feathers by it’s side, two sickle like claws, big grey skin, a burly two-tipped tail, two eyes separated by red marks that look like eyes, and two sharp fins under the red feathers by it’s side.

“Hello dear Aron! Old friend. Just how long have you been missing me?” the pokemon said.

‘N-no, he couldn’t be…’ Titanium thought with horror as the attacker revealed his identity.

“Long time no see Aron, oh wait, you’re an Aggron now, aren’t you? Well, lucky you! I guess you have been raised by a tough trainer, weren’t you?”

“A-Anorith?” he said.

“It’s Armaldo now!” he said with great hate.

“But…I thought you were-”

“Dead? Of course I would’ve been if you hadn’t betrayed me!” he said with extreme anger, “when you ran, an ancient power rose from me that gave me the strength to fend myself from the Aerodactyl’s you RAN FROM! I thought you were my best friend! Did you really think I would forget such a day?”

“But, how did you evolve?”

“Luckily, I was caught by some white-haired trainer who trained me to what I am today.”

‘Trainer!? With white hair!?’ he thought.

“I agreed that if I helped him destroy his greatest foe he’d helped me destroy you. Today’s the day I take my vengeance upon you. The only forgiveness I will accept is your death!”

“…”

Titanium was too shocked to move. He couldn’t have been caught by the same trainer as Brendan; he was the first wild pokemon on his team. But now wasn’t the time for questions, it was time to fight, for his life. The Armaldo ran to him with his sickle claws out and ready. It was a fight to death, and he wouldn’t lose…

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The skies were calm for a spring sky. Winged Neo sensed no change in the weather in the future, but the weather wasn’t the only thing she was worried about. The calm atmosphere gave her enough calmness to think back to her past when she was still a Natu. Because she had a strange behavior for a Natu, she did not make many friends. The other Natu like her don’t judge others by their looks or behavior, they judged them on the mind, and Winged Neo didn’t have much of a great mind to others. In fact, she was an outcast, a hated outcast. No one wanted her so she ran, or flew, away.

When she couldn’t fly anymore, she ran into a tribe of Skarmory. She wanted to join them and in time, they accepted her. She still had trouble making friends just because of who she was, until one day, the Skarmory couldn’t take it anymore.

“I swear it wasn’t my fault!” a Skarmory said.

“Enough! It doesn’t matter who started it, if both suspects deny, then both are responsible for their treason,” said another Skarmory who was bigger and had scars all over it’s face.

The Skarmory being judged was in an accident where he and Natu accidentally killed a tribe member. It started as a prank to some other Skarmory who has been giving trouble to both pokemon. The prank was simple, push the Skarmory into a pool of water. When the prank had succeeded, the Skarmory was swimming for his life while cursing at the two who he knew would’ve done this. However, the Skarmory who was a part of the prank pushed a log downhill that led to the pool where the unfortunate Skarmory was drying himself off of. When the log collided, it knocked the Skarmory out cold and into the water, where it drowned.

“Natu insisted on the prank!” the Skarmory said.

“But you pushed the log! I just wanted to push him into the water, not get him killed!” Natu objected.

“It doesn’t matter! It’s both your faulty and now, my son is dead. Natu, I hereby banish you from our tribe!”

“But…it wasn’t-”

“OUT WITH YOU! And for you! You backstabbing *******, you are hereby sentenced to death!” he said as the other Skarmory cheered upon his decision.

Natu slowly walked away from the crowd in sadness, forced into exile for something she didn’t do. She felt somewhat responsible, but her thoughts were interrupted by a full force steel wing. She landed hard on the ground and turned to face her attacker.

“You did this to me!” the Skarmory who assisted with the prank yelled, “because of you, I’ll soon be dead!”

Other Skarmory grabbed him, with their beaks, by his wings and tail and dragged him away.

“If I ever escape the execution, I’ll hunt you down to death!” he yelled as the Skarmory dragged him to his doom.

Her fear was ease knowing there was a slim chance of him surviving the execution, but the pain from that steel wing may never go away.

She kept walking and walking until she could walk no more. She found herself in a grass patch near a sandy land were a sandstorm was raging. She stared at that sandstorm for hours as she sat in her poorly made nest until someone came from the sand.

“Cool! A Natu!” he said.

By his side was a Lairon and a Marshtomp who were excited about making a new friend, well, save for the Lairon.

“I wanna new friend! Lairon doesn’t talk so much,” the Marshtomp complained.

“I do talk, just not to other people a lot and to myself sometimes,” the Lairon retaliated.

“Actually, Marshtomp is too strong to keep the Natu conscious and Lairon is half rock, so, I’ll just throw a pokeball at it and see what happens, ‘kay?” their trainer said.


‘…and that’s how I met Brendan,’ she thought as she flew by a few Altaria.

She was the one who thought of the prank, but he made it worse. It wasn’t her fault really, was it? It doesn’t matter now. He’s gone, and she’s safe. Nothing could make her feel any guilt heavier than this…

“Hey! Watch where you going!” she heard from behind.

Winged Neo looked back to see the Altaria get pushed away by a silver flying pokemon, who jetted forward to Winged Neo and collide with her with great pain. She was knocked hard and barely managed to stay airborne after the crash, but that was no accident. It was on purpose and the pokemon felt like living steel…wait.

Winged Neo saw her attacker floating their by using his wings to stay airborne. It was a silver bird with red steel feathers covered by silver ones. It had a steel tail with a hole edged at the side and had yellow eyes. There was not a part of it’s body that wasn’t covered in steel.

“I said I was gonna hunt you down to death Xatu, and I mean what I say!” he said as he glared upon her eyes.

‘IT can’t be! He’s back..?’ she thought horrifically.

The Altaria who saw Winged Neo get attacked flew over to defend the Psychic type.

“Leave him alone!” said one Altaria, as he turned to Winged Neo, “right?”

Winged Neo stared in sarcasm hinting her answer.

“I mean, leave her alone!”

“She did nothing to you!” another Altaria said.

“Nothing!? Because of her, I was almost killed!”

“I don’t know her, but I highly doubt it was her fault!” the last Altaria said.

“I don’t want your opinion, I just want revenge!”

Winged Neo flied in front of them and confronted the Skarmory.

“If it’s revenge you want, then so be it. If you want me dead, you can go ahead and try,” she said with deep and hidden anger.

“Wait! You don’t have to do this,” an Altaria said.

“This is my battle, and I must finish it. I don’t want you to get hurt just because you care. Just remember that no matter what, never interfere. This is something I’ve wanted to do for a long time,” she said.

“Well said Xatu, but now, we fight!” he yelled as he jetted toward Winged Neo.

“Have it your way,” she said as she flied closer to Skarmory, “and my name’s Winged Neo!”

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He sat there snoozing the day away as if he were in a lazy daydream. But he wasn’t dreaming. He was dreaming about an important person that was in his life and who had just disappeared. His mother, a young Nuzleaf, gave birth to him at a young age. His mother never liked him, but he wanted to stay and bond with his mother, but she wanted no bonding at all. When he evolved into a Nuzleaf, his mother couldn’t take it anymore. She ran away and never came back.

‘Mother, what happened to you?’ he thought, ‘why did you run? Did you hate me? Why didn’t you tell me?’

He could never forget that fateful day, when his mother ran away forever.

“Momma! Momma!” Blackheart yelled.

He searched almost every, until he found her whistling with a leaf.

“Momma!” he yelled.

“What is…” she said then gasped as her were eyes filled with shock

“Look momma! I evolved! Isn’t this cool?” he said eagerly.

Surely enough, he had evolved, into a tree-skinned, single leaf, long-nosed, kid like pokemon. He had waited a long time for this day since he was a Seedot and discovered the facts of evolution. He was also excited that he was one step closer to the “magic” of puberty, or whatever it was called.

“Now I can fight better! You don’t have to worry about any-” Blackheart was interrupted with a hard slap from his mother.

He fell to the ground and almost cried when he looked back to see his mother demonically glaring at him like he was someone who she hated with great extents. She walked away in anger as Blackheart failed to understand. He didn’t know why she did that, and to her own son, but maybe their trainer may have an idea.

“Brendan?” he asked his trainer, who was checking his pokedex and it’s progress.

“What Blackheart? I’m busy,” he said impolitely.

“But my mother hit me! I don’t know why she did that!”

“What? Let me see,” he said as he placed his pokedex down and inspect the bruise.

The red mark on his cheek ensured that Blackheart was hit by his mother. Brendan then asked.

“Why did she do that? Did you tell her you evolved?” he asked.

“Yes, but she still hit me! Why wasn’t momma happy?” he said feeling tears ready to stream down his face.

Brendan pondered a bit then got up, saying that he was gonna have a talk with Blackheart’s mother. He left to go see where his mother went, so Blackheart waited, and waited, and waited some more. Finally, Brendan came back with his hands in his pocket like he wasn’t gonna say anything.

“So, what did she say?” he asked.

“…she wouldn’t speak. But I think it may be connected to the day-care,” he said.

“…can we go there soon?”

Brendan checked his pokenav as Blackheart awaited his answer.

“Sure, we have time, but in the meantime, you’ll have to fight a few battles.”

Blackheart gleamed with eagerness. Sure, he may have to hurt a few pokemon in the process, but it’ll be worth it.

When they arrived at the day-care, the old couple wouldn’t say anything about Blackheart when his egg was laid. Blackheart chuckled a bit when his trainer said that he ‘isn’t exactly the only one who knows what goes on behind the day-care walls’ and that ‘the old couple take a lesson or two from it.’ But no matter how many questions they asked, they got nothing. The only pokemon who were in at the time was a Corphish, a Lombre and a Wobbufet.

Even though Blackheart was disappointed, he still had to return the favor of fighting other pokemon at the time. After he managed to defeat all of the pokemon Brendan wanted him to fight, they retired to the Pokemon Center, to encounter a fateful surprise.

“Brendan!” Marshtomp ran to Blackheart and their trainer in urgency.

“What is it Marshtomp?” Brendan asked.

“I can’t find Blackheart’s mother!”

“What?” Blackheart said.

“She left a note!” Marshtomp said holding a piece of paper.

Blackheart knew her mother would write only in his language, so he took the letter and read to himself.

‘Dear all who were precious to me,

I can’t take it anymore. I’ve decided that my life was meant to be short. I had dreams and a future to look forward to only to have my dreams crushed and my future redirecting in a painful detour. This isn’t the way I wanted my life. I can’t stand it! Blackheart, if you’re reading this, you must know that you weren’t made on purpose. I wasn’t ready to have you, but I did against my own will. Your father doesn’t deserve anything, and you don’t deserve me. It pains me to watch you grow up the right way when I failed to do so. Goodbye all who were precious to me, you will never see me again.

Love,
Nuzleaf.’

Blackheart dropped the letter reading the final words of the letter. She was gone, and she was never gonna come back…


‘…so I was stuck with Brendan ever since,’ Blackheart thought.

He knew why she left, but did she really have to run away? Was he too much to bear on her life? He sat up as all of these questions popped up in his head. She was forced to give birth to him, that may have been the answer. But if it was, wouldn’t she have tried to kill him? Blackheart was under so much extreme stress, he didn’t notice the yellow star figment rising from the water.

The creature watched as Blackheart thought to himself. In an instant, it rose out of the water and attacked Blackheart with a full-sledged crabhammer. Blackheart toppled a bit after the attack but managed to stabilize himself to see his opponent-out-of-nowhere.

It was a red lobster monster with a star on it’s forehead, two giant pincers, a blue lined mouth, eyes partially shaded by it’s red shell, a horizontal fin at the end , two small mid-legs and two burly legs. It’s pincers were bigger than normal and were covered in countless scars.

“Would you mind telling me why you attacked out of nowhere?” Blackheart asked.

“Do you not know what a challenge is? I’m proposing to fight you,” it said; the feminine tone in it’s voice told Blackheart his opponent was a girl.

“Why? And do I know you?”

“No, but your mother does,” she said with a hint of evilness.

“Wh-what?”

“Remember the good ol’ day-care? It was a lot of fun wasn’t it?”

“Wait, how do you know my mother?”

“Your mother was my friend’s husband.”

“You….mean?”

“My friend was a Ludicolo, and when we were in a day-care, he had a sudden interest in your mother.”

It all made sense now. The running away, his ability to use Leech Seed, the Corphish and Lombre that were at the day-care… Blackheart was filled with an unruly rage that’s very destructive inhabiting a dark type. A great black aura arose from Blackheart as his eyes burned of a great forest fire.

“Yes, I can see your hate. I sense great power from you. I hope you put up a better fight than Ludicolo.”

“A better fight? What happened to my father?” he said, his voice still in rage.

“I killed him,” she said with a creepy darkness in her eye, “I couldn’t deny it; I was in love with him. But he went behind my back and your that proof! You’re proof that my love has failed me, so the only way to completely satisfy my lust for destruction is to destroy you! You are living proof that my love’s betrayal still exists! You must die!”

“I don’t care if you loved him or not, or if he’s my father, but no one keeps answers to questions I’ve been looking for!”

Both of them dashed towards the other, in hopes of killing their opponent and surviving.

Will continue chapter in next post.
 

Black Murder Heavangelon

Ow! Ow! Harder! Ow!
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She had been searching for possibly an hour, and still no luck. Hyper didn’t know why she was looking for her trainer, but if Swampert told all of them to look for Brendan then it must be pretty bad. Tree after tree she hopped on the search for her trainer, occasionally taking a break to suck on sap every now and then. She wasn’t worried about being attacked by some predator or something, she was pretty strong for a Heracross. She was worried about encountering a pokemon that would fight her to the death.

‘Why is the world like this?’ she said as she nestled onto a tree a punctured it’s bark with her mouth, ‘Why must we eat one another to survive? Can’t we just eat berries? I’m so gonna kill whoever came up with that ‘bug-eat-bug world’ crap.’

She ran as fast as she could.

She didn’t want to become prey at such a young age. It has only been 4 months since she was born. Right now, she was being hunted down by two Fearow’s, each one aiming to drill peck through her shell. Her life was her reason to run, but their reason was for her life, and because they were hungry.

She tripped on a rock that came out of nowhere and fell on the ground hard. She knew the Fearow hoped for a slip-up. She braced herself for a brutal stabbing from the oncoming Fearow’s and wasn’t expecting anyone to save her.

“Yo, big birds of ugliness!” yelled some voice.

She looked up to see a small human-shaped pokemon like a little kid that was blue and white, a Meditite. She thought how stupid the Meditite was trying to stand up to the obviously stronger Fearow.

“Pick on someone your own size!” he yelled.

The two Fearow looked at each other then bursted laughing. The Meditite then jumped in the air and kicked one in the stomach. While the other was recovering from the laughter, the Meditite side-kicked him in the face. The other Fearow got up and tried to stab Meditite with it’s powerful beak, but it jumped in the air and cross chopped it’s neck. The attack had killed the Fearow while the other Fearow saw his friend dead before his eyes. In a fit of rage, the Fearow attacked Meditite, but Meditite assumed a chi gathering signal with it’s hands and a glint appeared in it’s eyes. Before impact, Meditite disappeared and reappeared on top of the Fearow’s head. He grabbed his upper beak and pulled back as far as he could until a loud cracking sound was heard. The Fearow’s head plopped to the ground as the Meditite got off of the carcass and walked over to Heracross.

“You…killed them,” she said in fear.

“Don’t mention it. I should be thanking you…wait, what did you say?”

“How do you live with that?”

Meditite shrugged his shoulders and said, “it’s a bug eat bug world, better do your part, I guess.”

“…”

“Now, if you don’t mind, I’m hungry,” he said as he walked over to the carnage he created.

Heracross didn’t want to be around for whatever he meant by his hunger. She walked away and to a beach where a few trees were planted. She wasn’t hungry, but the scenery was beautiful at least. The sun was still in the sky and no humans were in sight. She soon heard footsteps from behind, very faint footsteps, that would belong to a small pokemon. She turned around to see the Meditite with a few blots of dirt and blood. There was a chunk of meat in his hands which he just finished off.

“Don’t you feel any guilt from eating something else?” she asked.

“A little bit, but you gotta do what you gotta do to survive,” he answered.

“I guess that doesn’t apply to me. All I eat is tree sap,” she said as he walked over and sat by her.

“At least you have it easy, I have to kill for my food,” he said, “and believe me, when someone says they could eat a horse, they could, maybe and or will eat a horse.”

Heracross continued to look at the sea. Another aspect of nature that hides many dangers. Octillery’s eating Clamperl and Krabby, Remoraid’s eating flying Ninjask, Sharpedo’s eating just about anything. She couldn’t believe how brutal the world was, but he was right, you gotta do what you gotta do to survive, just don’t be the prey.

“Well, I’m gonna go take a dip in the ocean,” he aid, getting up, “don’t wanna stay dirty forever, I believe in personal hygiene.”

She watched as he dove into the ocean. What dangers could befall on him in the future? He saved her life, but in this world, she’d be too afraid to repay him. She didn’t know what could happen. Would she survive long enough to know?

“Darn it! Since when was dirt so hard to get rid of?” Meditite said as he tried to scrub off a botch of dirt on his arm.

Heracross noticed something breaching the surface of the water. Black fins with triangles cuts at the side…Sharpedo! Heracross yelled to Meditite that there were Sharpedo in the water until Meditite noticed. However, Meditite only heard Heracross from a distant, so hearing her was a problem. When he saw one of the fins pass him, it took about 2 seconds before he realized the danger he was in. He yelped when a Sharpedo jutted its teeth out and bit Meditite. Heracross watched in horror as Meditite was pulled to the bottom of the sea.

Below the water, the Sharpedo was having a rough time keeping it’s prey in it’s jaw because it kept punching at him. Finally, Meditite’s fist glowed as he punched the Sharpedo so hard, it let him go. Before Meditite was about to swim back to the surface, a whole herd of Sharpedo began to circle him. Seeing that he was totally surrounded, he focused his powers into white spheres and released them in all directions. He swam back to the surface for much needed air.

Meditite lifted himself out of the water, and to Heracross’ relief, still breathing. He turned to Heracross and said to her.

“Hey! Do you know any bug moves!?” he yelled.

Heracross just stood there in horror and fear, not responding to his question at all.

“Come over here and help me! Do you really expect me to fend off all of these guys by myself?”

Unexpectedly, a Sharpedo bit and pulled Meditite’s leg into the ocean. Heracross was frightened that he was going to be eaten, but she couldn’t do anything about it. She didn’t want to die because she tried to save him, but it was the brave thing to do. Meditite was frustrated with the Sharpedo biting his legs, so in an effort to attack all of the Sharpedo at once, he focused his chi into little balls of light around him and shot in all directions, striking all of the Sharpedo in the water. With the shark pokemon momentarily stunned, he swam to the surface to escape from them. When he breached the surface, he saw that the Heracross ran away. Angered, he yelled her name into the sky as the shark pokemon were ready to feed again.

She ran as fast as she could.

If there was anything about survival she knew, one must save themselves by luring the predator away with something of greater value, even if it’s another life. She didn’t want to be a part of that philosophy, so she did the one thing she did best; run. She kept running and running until she saw some light up ahead. Her running soon turned into a walk as she carefully approached the blessing light.

The ruffle of the bushes alerted him of something in the forest. His pokemon jumped out to protect him from the possible enemy. His Marshtomp, Nuzleaf, Lairon, and Natu jumped in front of him as he watched the pokemon walk to them. She walked as if she were tired and hungry and looked like she was weak and defenseless. He saw the innocence and pain in her eyes and told his pokemon to step back. He noticed that this was a Heracross and was small for a Heracross. He approached her with caution as he said.

“Hey there, my name’s Brendan. Are you lost?” he asked.

She saw that he was being careful with her, but her real attention was on his pokemon. That Natu looked to small to try and eat her; that Marshtomp didn’t look so carnivorous; that Lairon seemed to be a loner; that Nuzleaf looked like it wouldn’t cause any trouble with her. She must’ve found her place, a place away from the world. She walked over and hugged the stranger in sadness as she cried onto his chest. The movement was sudden, but he figured this Heracross has been through a lot of pain. He patted her head as he soothed her.

“I guess you’ve been through a lot, haven’t you? Don’t worry, join me and your pain will be over…”


‘He saved me…from this world. I can’t give up looking for him, I owe him so much,’ she thought.

She wasn’t brave enough to face this world. She’d run any day if it saved her life. She was a coward, and she accepted that. But would you be called a coward if you were staring at death in the face? She fears death almost as much as the next person, but in this world, she fears everything. She fights for her life, and that’s good enough of a reason to keep fighting.

“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!” a maniacal voice that echoed through the trees was heard.

Hyper stopped in her tracks and looked around her surroundings for the source of the voice.

“I’m very, very hungry, but there’s no food in miles. But just now, I’ve found something to eat. Mind joining me for dinner? You’re the main course!” the voice said.

“W-who are you!?” she asked with fear chilling down her spine.

“I’m here and there, near and far,” it said sounding closer with each word, “right behind you,” it said appearing behind Hyper.

At that moment, an invisible force pushed Hyper into a tree. When she fell to the ground after impact, she saw her attacker. He was a slim pokemon with red lips, black eyes, almost-natural human hands, a red cap-like headwear with two small yellow spots and three polyps on a triangular side, red pants-like clothing with thin feet and a yellow spot on each knee. He was a Medicham. This pokemon sent ice-cold fear into her body, because he had a mad look of hunger.

“Well, aren’t you a delicious, defenseless Heracross?” he said.

After she stared into his eyes out of fear, she noticed that the look in his eyes could only belong to one pokemon, a pokemon who wasn’t satisfied with death and hunger.

“You….you’re that mad Meditite I met long ago, aren’t you?” she asked quietly.

“Well, let’s just say I struck a growth spurt,” he said with a hint of evil in his voice.

“Why are you doing this?”

“Didn’t you learn anything when we met? You gotta do what you gotta do to survive, just don’t be the prey,” he said with dark emphasis on the last part.

“But, I’m not your prey.”

“Yes you are! I don’t have to be a bird or a plant, predators are still predators, why are humans so dominant?”

Hyper didn’t know what to do. She was going to be eaten by the least expected pokemon she thought of, and by a pokemon she never knew could eat her. The homicidal malice in his eyes told her he would stop at nothing until his hunger is satisfied. He licked his lips as he advanced towards the horn beetle pokemon.

“You can’t eat me like this,” she said, hoping she wouldn’t have to fight him.

“Of course I can’t. I have to beat you to death before you are soft enough for me to rip your limbs off.”

Well, so much for avoiding a fight, Hyper thought. There was one other law of survival that Hyper conveniently knew. She stood up and faced the Medicham in the eye, to his surprise.

“But, isn’t there another rule of survival your forgetting?” she asked.

“Hmm, now what would that be?” he said, curious.

“If all other tactics of survival fail, then the prey will fight back to the end.”

“Ah, yes. How could I forget such an important rule, especially since I’m the predator?” he said managing the evil tone in his voice.

“Well, I plan on fighting for my life and I won’t hold back,” she said as she braced position.

“A delicious idea, but I won’t stop until my hunger is ceased!” he said also positioning himself, “and this is for running away!” he yelled as he charged toward Hyper.

Hyper knew there was no turning back. She had to fight, and to the death, if she was going to survive. All of the bravery she failed to muster all of her life had breached its point at that moment. She stood her ground as he attempted to ram his fist into her stomach.

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He stared at the sky for what seemed to be an eternity. His blue draconic feathers waded against the wind. The cliff he was levitating on had a view of the whole forest and beyond if anyone was at the top. Latios began to think of his moments with his trainer and try to get his memories back while he was at it. He remembered how it happened, his feelings of failure swept through him because his existence told him. His existence was proof that he failed, and he wasn’t good at existing anymore.

“Okay guys, ready for a day of training?” he told his pokemon.

Each of them gave a cry in assurance as they awaited Brendan’s orders.

“Today, we’ll be doing various exercises. Jogging, push-ups, stretching, all that stuff. You guys ready?”

His pokemon gave another cry of assurance as they gave a positive gesture. He turned around and began running.

“Today’s first exercise is a jog on the beach. Let’s go you guys!” he said as his pokemon began to follow him.

He ran along the beach as his pokemon followed. There were on the shores just off of Mauville city, where the thunder gym leader lived. Most of the trainers on that route watched as his pokemon followed him. His Swampert was jogging on all fours, sometimes resorting to his hind legs as he nobly followed his trainer. His Shiftry, though tough running with his wooden feet, ran with ease along the sand. His Xatu flew at a careful pace to ensure that she flew at the same height above the ground, although specific instructions from her trainer said to ascend and descend at a steady pace, which she resumed doing after reminding herself. His Heracross was to run three seconds steps, fly for three seconds then back on the ground again. His mighty Aggron was to walk, or run if he felt like it, as fast as he could, in order to help his leg muscles to dodge speedy opponents in battle.

Their jogging route directed into an uncharted beach where the team was stills jogging. After about 3 hours of their nonstop exercise, Brendan decided to have a little break.

“Okay guys, I think that’s enough jogging,” he said as he wiped his brow of sweat and watch his pokemon pant, sweat, and faint, “who wants lunch?”

After having a delicious lunch served by their trainer, the pokemon prepared for another workout by either resting or warm-up exercises. Blackheart decided to walk around a bit before beginning another exercise; he was curious of the rest of the beach.

“I didn’t know birds sleep on their backs,” he heard Swampert say.

“Shut up,” was the response from Winged Neo, who Blackheart guessed was exhausted from the 3 hour flight.

He walked off to a shore where the tide was beginning to settle in. the water was just inches away from the rocks that acted as a wall on the beach. He kept walking curious of what the rest of the beach looked like; of course there was a possibility of him walking until he circled the whole continent. He heard weakened cries of pain coming from ahead that sounded like a wounded dragon. Blackheart walked a bit faster wondering what the creature that made the sound was. Soon, he came upon a blue and white dragon, completely immobile, although still breathing. Surprised and not knowing what to do, he ran back to the lunch area where everyone was eating to tell his trainer of the mysterious pokemon.

“Brendan! Brendan!” he yelled as he waved his leaf fans in the air.

Brendan looked up from his kettle to see Blackheart waving at him like an idiot.

“What is it?” he asked.

“Brendan, you’re not gonna believe this,” he said panting more than he did.

“What could there be that I find unbelievable?” he asked.

“Just come here! Everyone!” he said turning to the fainted pokemon on the sand, “you’ve gotta come see this!”

He led them all to the same path he took. Eager to show what he found, he practically ran ahead forcing the other pokemon to keep up. After about ten minutes of running, everyone soon saw what Blackheart was so worked up about. Lying there immobile, was a blue legendary dragon, with jet wings, forearms, feather-like legs, and a hollow red triangle on its chest. The legendary was bruised with cuts and was bleeding terribly; there wasn’t a square inch on the pokemon’s body that wasn’t blood-riddled.

“Oh…my god…” the pokemon exclaimed.

Brendan cautiously took out his pokedex and waited as the pokedex gave his information.

Latios, the eon pokemon.

Even in hiding, it can detect the locations of others and sense their emotions since it has telepathy. Its intelligence allows it to understand other human languages. They and other Latias make a small herd of only several members. They rarely make contact with people or other pokemon. They disappear if they sense enemies.


‘Did this one lose its way from its herd?’ he thought as he closed the pokedex, ‘it’s too beaten up. No way could it be lost. Was it in a battle?’

He slowly walked over to the hurt pokemon and tenderly touched the Eon. Reacting to the contact like chemicals, the Eon opened its eyes and shot up trying to fly away. It pushed itself off the ground using its forearms and tried to fly away. The pokemon were surprised by the sudden action as they watched the Eon trying to fly away to the ocean. They watched it float off the ground then hit it over and over again. When Brendan realized it would drown into the sea if it tried to fly over it he tried to stop the Latios from flying at all.

“Guys, help me keep it grounded!” he yelled.

“You heard the boss!” Swampert yelled as he ran to assist his trainer.

Heracross, Swampert and Titanium tried to push it onto the ground, Shiftry pushed the Eon away from the sea and Xatu was helping everyone with her psychic force. The Eon yelled as he tried to escape the clustering pokemon around him. He swung his claws back and forth in fear, one of which had accidentally clawed Swampert in the face. Ticked off, Swampert retaliated.

“Oh, that is it!” he said as he punched Latios onto the ground, knocking it out of its struggle as the pokemon took a second to realize what he just did.

Latios was knocked out cold. He couldn’t remember what happened after that instant. He woke up a couple of hours later inside a Pokemon Center where the moon was shining through the glass window. He had a blanket covering his whole body from his neck to his jet-wings. Beside him was a white haired trainer looking through his pokedex.

“Where am I?” he thought into the trainer’s mind.

“You’re in a Pokemon Center, where pokemon come to get healed. You were a bit of a handle, but we managed to get you inside,” he answered.

Latios looked to a ball glistening on a drawer that was white, lined with black, and decorated with red triangles.

“What is that?” he asked.

“That’s your pokeball. See, in order for pokemon to be healed, they must be owned by a trainer,” he explained.

“Did, you say, owned by a trainer?”

“Yeah. You’re mine now Latios, it was for your own good,” he said maintaining his cool.

“Wait, did I do it?”

Brendan cocked his head in confusion, not knowing what the Eon was talking about.

“Do what?”

“No, I couldn’t have failed,” Brendan felt that the Eon was beginning to talk to himself, “Latias, the Soul Dew, Alto Mare, are they…still there?”

Brendan couldn’t answer; mostly because he didn’t know how. He had never heard of Alto Mare or the Soul Dew. If there was any answer he could give without disappointing him, it was no answer at all.

“……”

“…no. I must’ve failed,” he began, “To save Alto Mare, I had to sacrifice myself. Because I am still alive, I must’ve failed. I failed everything, I failed Alto Mare! I failed Latias!”

Latios broke down in tears as Brendan helplessly watches the Eon mope. If he wanted to give some comfort of any kind, it was a trusted movement of the hand. Brendan placed his hand on the Eon’s neck and moved it back and forth in a comforting motion. Latios noticed the touch, so he took in the comfort he was feeling from this mysterious trainer.

“Listen, just because you failed something doesn’t mean you should always cry about it. If it’s a small failure, don’t even bother crying. If it’s a big failure, it’s okay to let it out, but not so much. You don’t want to end up crying your whole life. Don’t let it get to you. You’ve got your whole life ahead of you. Live it to its fullest.”

Latios wiped a tear away from his eye as he looked at the trainer in the eye.

“But, Alto Mare…”

“Look, I’ve never heard of Alto Mare, but even though it may be gone forever doesn’t mean you should mope about it that much.”

“How can you say that? There was a whole civilization there that I failed to protect!” Latios said.

“So? Atlantis is gone and you don’t see people crying about it. Same thing goes for Pompeii and the Wooly Mammoths. This was history, and all history is let by as the future makes its way to us. You have to let go of the past to make way for the future.”

Latios carefully took this all in as Brendan watched his words work. He was right. He failed, but it’s history now. But he was connected to it like father and son. But how could he let go of something he lived in for all of his life after failing to protect it? The answer wasn’t the clear, but he was right about one thing; let go of the past so he could see the future.

“What is your name?” he asked.

“Brendan.”

“Brendan, your words helped me see the truth that I was blinded from. Although it will take time for me to accept my failure and move on, I thank you. Therefore, I wish to make my life by being your trusted pokemon.”

“You mean you’re…” Brendan said not believing his words.

“I’m willing to accept you as my trainer. You have helped me, so I want to help you.”

“Wow Latios, I was planning on letting you go, but if you insist…”

“I’ll be willing to fight for you, to the death if I must.”

“Let’s not get carried away there. Latios, I’m glad you’re willing to let me be your master. So as your master, I want you to help me.”

“In what?”

“I’m going to compete against the Elite 4, four of the toughest trainer in all of Hoenn holding pokemon trained to be strong from scratch. Me and my pokemon are confident that we will prevail, but we need one more pokemon, a strong pokemon, almost as strong as my Swampert…”

“Me?”

“Yes.”

“Very well. I’ll fight for you against this Elite 4, and I promise I’ll make you proud.”

“You’ve made me proud enough already,” he said with a smirk itching on his face.


‘...that was how I met Brendan,’ Latios thought.

Brendan managed to save him from a life of sadness and mourn. He was more than happy that he was owned by a great trainer such as Brendan, but he might be even happier if he knew what really happened to Alto Mare. Until then, he’ll continue to dream and wonder what could’ve been, even though he may never know the answer...

“Are you the great Latios?” came a voice from below.

He looked below to see a green dragonfly-like pokemon with red bug-like eyes and a tail striped green and dark green. Latios was curious of what the pokemon wanted, but didn’t feel like connecting with another pokemon. However, this pokemon seemed really anxious to meet him, so he hovered off of the cliff and onto the ground next to the pokemon. Upon closer inspection, Latios saw that it was a Flygon, a popular dragon pokemon bearing the ground type trait.

“Yeah, I’m Latios, what do you want?” he asked.

“I’ve come for my salvations.”

“Salvations?”

“Oh, my bad, I mean blessings.”

“Blessings?”

Latios didn’t know what this pokemon was talking about. Blessing? Did the Flygon think he was some sort of god? He knew how powerful Flygon could get, so he had to be very careful with this.

“I have no freaking idea what you’re talking about.”

“You mean, you don’t remember?” it said in disappointment, “I saved you from dying!”

“Saved? Dying? Sorry, but you didn’t do that, my trainer did.”

“I found you on the beach all bruised up and bleeding! I healed you with all the healing techniques I knew! I dragged you as far from the desert as I could!” it said with it’s anger reaching a dangerous level.

“Huh?” now Latios was really confused.

“When I was a Vibrava, I found you near the edge of the desert. I gave you all the berries I had and dragged you to the nearest beach!”

“But how did you do that without getting seen by people? To get to the beach nearest to the desert, you’d have to cross a town full of-”

“That’s not the point! I thought if I saved you, you’d give me blessings of power like no other!”

“So you only saved me for the power I could give you? I’m sorry, but I cannot give you access to that power. I won’t even give you a portion of my soul.”

“But I saved you from death!”

“You should’ve just left me there then,” he said as he floated back to the cliff.

As he floated toward the cliff, an inhaling sound was heard from behind. Soon, a loud exhaling sound was heard, followed by the blast of hot flames that struck Latios hard and painfully. The flames crackled with a sort of electricity meaning that the fire was draconic. He looked back to see the flames seep out of the Flygon mouth.

“If you won’t give me power, then I won’t need it if I can defeat you!” she yelled.

“Wait, first you prayed for power from me now you’re aiming to kill me? Not very picky, aren’t you?” he said.

“Be quiet! I wanted power from the most powerful dragon in the world…”

“You know I’m not the-”

“I said shut up! …but it turns out my efforts were in vain. If you won’t give me power, then I’ll keep fighting you to the death until you give me power or if I have proven myself more powerful than you.”

“And how will you come to the second conclusion?”

“When I kill you!”

“Hmm, death? Or give power to him?”

“I’m a girl!” she said out loud.

“Well, I don’t think I can give other pokemon power, and I’m sure as hell I don’t wanna die…”

“Then I have no choice. Have at ye!” she yelled as she flew towards the Eon.

‘Crap! What have I gotten myself into? I don’t wanna fight, but I don’t wanna die! But there’s no other choice, I must fight back. I wonder if my companions are having this much trouble? I’m pretty sure Swampert is okay…’

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He slammed against the tree and fell to the ground. He was tired and battle-scarred; he couldn’t be losing! He looked up to see his opponent who had been pulverizing him for the past hour. He was a green dragon-like pokemon with yellow eyes, yellow polyps on his back, a tail that looked like a leafy bush, and two sickle-like, green glowing blades on each of his wrists. He was the toughest opponent he has ever faced. Sceptile.

“What’s the matter Swampert? I thought we were supposed to be equal,” he said looking at the scars the mud fish was covered with while he only had a few.

“I have no reason to fight you,” he said through his teeth maintaining his anger.

“Our trainers are mortal enemies; he hates him, I hate you. We fight to the death.”

“But it’s not like our trainers will fight to the death.”

“That is where you are wrong. As of now, our trainers will meet and the final confrontation will begin there.”

“You mean…”

“Yes. Only one will survive.”

“You’ll never get away with this. My friends will help him!”

“That is where you are wrong once more. As of now, my companions are dealing with them, one by one by one,” he said with an evil chuckle.

“No…it can’t be!”

“Face it Swampert. You, your friends, and your trainer were destined to die by our hands! Today is the day he’s gonna end it! Today…” he said as he finished the last sentenced with an evil laughter.

Today was the greenest day of all. Each pokemon are now reliving their suffering from long ago. They need help, but they won’t be getting any. But no matter how you see it, no matter how much each pokemon has suffered, no matter how much they all suffered all together, it will never equal to Brendan’s true suffering. It would never equal to Brendan’s struggle…

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Hmmm, a homicidal Medicham, a hypocritic Sceptile, a heart-broken Crawdaunt, a revenge seeking Skarmory, a power hungry Flygon, and a very very ****** Armaldo. hmm...
 

Literate

black cat, black cat
Okay, it's eight o' clock pm now so,*starts putting up fingers, "take a bath, then go to sleep"*... I won't fine-comb it through. There were some very plain mistakes. Easy to see but yeah, this was long. Maybe on Sunday I'll review it fully, but I've got one thing to say:

They are all cowards? The pokemon, all cowards? Wow... I know who his rival is! It's the 'other' guy...

Oh and one last thing, you have to write out numbers. 7 > seven. And the flashbacks were mostly the same for all pokemon. I'll wait for the last part. ^_^

~PEACE~
 

The Great Butler

Hush, keep it down
Nice little technique of tying each vignette into the larger picture there. Description's good, plot's good, everything's good.

You're doing very well. Keep it up, and I'll be waiting for the next part eagerly.
 

Demise

...An orange blob...
The trees were high above a distance from Titanium’s head.
Capitalize.

It was a big dinosaur like pokemon with red feathers by it’s side, two sickle like claws, big gray skin, a burly two-tipped tail, two eyes separated by red marks that look like eyes, and two sharp fins under the red feathers by it’s side.

Have it your way,” she said as she flew closer to Skarmory, “and my name’s Winged Neo!”

Flew not flied.

Their jogging route directed into an uncharted beach where the team was still jogging.
No 's' after 'still.'

“Wow, Latios, I was planning on letting you go, but if you insist…”

I’m going to compete against the Elite 4(four), four of the toughest trainer in all of Hoenn holding pokemon trained to be strong from scratch. Me and my pokemon are confident that we will prevail, but we need one more pokemon, a strong pokemon, almost as strong as my Swampert…”
Type numbers out.

“Then I have no choice. Have at ye!” she yelled as she flew towards the Eon.
'Ye'? Uh....

Hmmm, a homicidal Medicham, a hypocritic Sceptile, a heart-broken Crawdaunt, a revenge seeking Skarmory, a power hungry Flygon, and a very very ****** Armaldo. hmm...
Okay. O_O Interesting pokemon. Heh.

When he defeated a grunt and knocked him out cold, Brendan took a gun that was in his pocket and kept it for that day just in case things got a bit messy. The mess was over soon, but he still kept that gun. If Brendan’s still holding that gun…
Tsk, bad boy. What would I do??

T^T So nice. I think I missed a bit of grammar mistakes, I'm sure litestars will finish it.

O_O Er, Brendan's pokemon actually are scaredy-cats. I thought they'd be strong but thier past are frickin haunting them.

I wonder.....[SPOIL]if Brendan's going to die, or the OTHER person. Hahahaha! I wonder if May got anything to do with it....[/SPOIL]

I look forward to it. One more thing...[SPOIL]Brendan STOLE that gun?! Sorry, I couldn't get over it. Tsk, tsk, I'd kill him. I mean...he STOLE it! Argh, stealing is a crime, having a illegal weapon is another. He'd be going to JAIL if the police caught him...O_O ARGH! He stole it! *keeps muttering*[/SPOIL]

Alright, I'm okay, still a bit ticked off. I look forward to teh next chapter...if there are going be any...*creepy music plays*

Eevee says; Tasch! ;133;
 

Literate

black cat, black cat
Rest of Review

Okay, here for the next part of the review.

‘Today is the day I’m gonna end it,’ he thought, ‘No more pain, no more suffering, just one pull of the trigger will make it go away…’
Caps that.
“Hey, Brendan,” a voice from behind said, “you okay?”
Comma that.
“Yeah. I’m fine,” he said.
Run-on.
“Brendan?” Titanium, his Aggron, asked, “What are you thinking about?”
Switcharoo. And caps that.
“…Someone that’s still a part of me, in a way,” he answered, “Someone who went away when I least expected it and who’s been my reason the whole time…”
Caps that.
“…Yes. That would be beneficial,” he said, “Wait for me by that spring over there,” he said, pointing to the miniature waterfall with a small pool by some trees: the typical pokemon hangout.
Caps that. Punctuate that. Change that into a colon. Over load of semicolons.
“So, Swampert,” Winged Neo asked, “Who was Brendan thinking about?”
For some reason, I hate lowercases starting sentences.
“Hyper, you're coming?”
I think you need that.
Hyper removed her mouth from the sap-soaked tree hole and said, “Sure. I’m pretty full now,and I got nothing better to do.”
That would be best as one sentence.
“Oh well, let’s look for Brendan now,” Winged Neo said, breaking the momentary silence.
Puntuate that.


Well, I'm done with the first part. I'll edit the rest in later.

~PEACE~
 

Black Murder Heavangelon

Ow! Ow! Harder! Ow!
Okay, it was tough for me keeping tack of all the mistakes in here, it being the longest chapter I've ever written. So thanks for keeping an eye out for my mistakes.

And yeah, they are strong, but their pasts Are frickin' hauntin' them. Each of them have a problem, and it's a different one for all of them, if you look close enough...

So, who is Brendan's rival? You'll find out in the next and final chappie!!
 

Astinus

Well-Known Member
I found a really big mistake!

“Your mother was my friend’s husband.”

o_O; That's a real big mistake. I'm not sure how you want to fix it.

Another thing: I thought Swampert had a nickname, Riverbank, I think? So, how come all of a sudden, he doesn't have one? Weird.

The Star twins pointed out everything else. Especially the Pokémon's flashbacks. They became a little monotonous, repeated. I didn't like it when Brendan found the Pokés so soon after their incidents. I would have liked to seen them struggle more before meeting their trainer.

This is still rather interesting. I would really like to know who this 'other' guy is. And who will be the winner in this little personal war.
 
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