Bug Eeveelution

[Nick Alert]

I would appreciate a LOT of C&C on this.
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[Kaburadon]

I think it is amazing!!
But only one thing (that will make it perfect):
Remove the left eye because it lookes like it is in the center of its face.
If you will fix that it will be amaaaazzzzinnng!!!

 

[DANdotW]

The only thing I don't like is the angle. It would look slightly better if it faced forward a small amount more, and if it lowed itself on its front legs with a tilted head.

Other than that, I think it looks great. I agree about the eye, too, unless the lowest pink teardrop is its eye.

Iota

 

[Averyy]

I think it looks great but it just doesn't look eeveelution-ish. I guess it's just the angle, as said above.

 

[Hyper Stan]

overall its good but you lack shading from other parts
the reason its not looking as much as an eeveelution is because its no longer a mamal but an mamal legged insect
theres also to many colors

 

[Kindrindra]

Well... it's good... but it doesn't look that eeveelution-ish.
Not just because it's an insect... All eveelutions are slightly... fluffy. This one isn't.
And I don't really like the fact you used wings, since wings are more towards flying... but, hey, if Kricitune can have wings, then I suppose that's okay.

But, still... the head looks weird. The head isn't eeveeish at all. The one thing it really needs is some more cuteness or elegance. Cause, that's what eevee and its' evos are known for. But, sprite-wise, it's perfect.

 

[Yami Ryu]

... no not all Eeveelutions are fluffy. Umbreon isn't. Jolteon isn't. Glaceon isn't. etc. Tho Kindrindra is right. It needs something, all Eeveelutions have something. Elegance and Grace or cute n charm. This has niether, no beauty about it even in a buggy way. It also looks to much like Caterpie, coloration wise.

The eyes and the head mark don't match up. The eyes suggest the head is pointed more towards us; the head mark and antenai suggest otherwise, creating a mixup. There's also no shading at all on the hind legs, the collar makes it appear that the head isn't attached to the body, and the wings being attached to this collar make it all the more crowded.

 

[aclover]

wow. thats all i can say. its wicked

 

[BynineB]

I notice that the front leg showing is super fat compared to the other one...
Other then that, this is much better than I could do.

 

[PlexOnFire]

Amazing. Only thing is, it just doesn't look like an eeveloution if you know what i mean. Its a hard balance to get right though. And you've done a good job
Just needs a little bit more. If you do give it another go. Be sure to show us.
8/10