BV's Sprite Thread

[Blue Vortex]

Revamps

Recolors

Reposes

Fusions

Others
(none)

 

[sandragon13]

not bad, actually
the colors are slightly too vivid on the recolors though
the onix repose is really well done, but the caterpie's body is way too small and steelix's tail doesn't quite fit right
otherwise, they don't look half bad
keep practicing
-sandragon13;330;

 

[Blue Vortex]

Thanks I'll see if I can fix them later. For now lets see if I can find more poses that fit.



Edit: I got a new pose for regirock. Say anything you want about.

 

[Psychic]

Not very good. It seems like you didn't read the tutorials very well.

The revamps aren't revamped at all; all you did was recolor them. You have to fix the shading: there isn't enough. The highlighted area need to be more common and larger, and you need shaded areas on all of them, plus they lack black outlining.

The recolors were all right; they're pretty easy to do. However, the Typhlosian is the bad one. The green is too bright, the shading on the black body is too drastic (more subtle changes with the shading) and the flames go from too light a blue to too dark a blue (again, the color change is too drastic).

All you managed to do with the reposes was make the Pokémon look messed up. At least, the Caterpie and Steelix look like they were squished. I see no difference with the Onix, and with Regirock...well, it's a boring change, and you need to edit the shading, now.

The fusions aren't anything special, because all you did was give them different tails. Also, the Espeon's tail doesn't look right: it should be longer and a bit thicker.



Meh, keep working at it. You just need more practice. Try reading the tutorials.

~Psychic

 

[KirbyXD]

Not very good. It seems like you didn't read the tutorials very well.

The revamps aren't revamped at all; all you did was recolor them. You have to fix the shading: there isn't enough. The highlighted area need to be more common and larger, and you need shaded areas on all of them, plus they lack black outlining.

The recolors were all right; they're pretty easy to do. However, the Typhlosian is the bad one. The green is too bright, the shading on the black body is too drastic (more subtle changes with the shading) and the flames go from too light a blue to too dark a blue (again, the color change is too drastic).

All you managed to do with the reposes was make the Pokémon look messed up. At least, the Caterpie and Steelix look like they were squished. I see no difference with the Onix, and with Regirock...well, it's a boring change, and you need to edit the shading, now.

The fusions aren't anything special, because all you did was give them different tails. Also, the Espeon's tail doesn't look right: it should be longer and a bit thicker.



Meh, keep working at it. You just need more practice. Try reading the tutorials.

~Psychic

You practically said everything that I was going to say. On the Caterpie the head looks like it's about to fall off.

 

[Blue Vortex]

Looks like I have a big day ahead of me. Well lets see what I can do.