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CaC illustrations

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bass_forte

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Below are some artworks I've been doing for a fake TCG set that I'm doing with a friend. C+C please:

Dusclops original
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Dusclops with SFX - final. SFX done in the GIMP.
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Beedrill - yet to be coloured
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So yeah. Any comments/criticisms?
 

Who Said Pikachu?

Pikachu Spotter
First off they're too small and you can't enlarge them which makes it harder to comment.

1. It looks a little messy from what I can see, doing the colours around the dusclops first and then the blue around them would of made the colours stand out better as long as you didn't go over them.

2. Who doesn't like burst effects? they're so pretty. Anyways, the colouring looks nice and effective, the dusclops looks good as well, same goes for above.

3. Not enough people draw Beedrill, poor bug. Anyways, he looks neat. Comments would be, his wings are a bit small and the one closest to us should be overlapping his body as apposed to behind it as it looks like all the wings are on one side which doesn't work. His head's a bit too long and the antennae are too short. Also the back part isn't a cone, it's more a circular shape with a cone on the end.

Anyways, well done over all and continue to draw more!

Happy Hunting!
~Pika!
 
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bass_forte

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Who Said Pikachu? said:
First off they're too small and you can't enlarge them which makes it harder to comment.
True. I better save a full-size copy next time. Stupid me...

Who Said Pikachu? said:
1. It looks a little messy from what I can see, doing the colours around the dusclops first and then the blue around them would of made the colours stand out better as long as you didn't go over them.
I assume you're talking about the original. Yeah, I stuffed up. Well, after SFX all that stuff was gone anyway. >_<

Who Said Pikachu? said:
2. Who doesn't like burst effects? they're so pretty. Anyways, the colouring looks nice and effective, the dusclops looks good as well, same goes for above.
Thanks.

Who Said Pikachu? said:
3. Not enough people draw Beedrill, poor bug. Anyways, he looks neat.
Beedrill = one of the best-looking Pokémon around, IMO. =D
Who Said Pikachu? said:
Comments would be, his wings are a bit small and the one closest to us should be overlapping his body as apposed to behind it as it looks like all the wings are on one side which doesn't work.
I wanted the wings smaller than they are on the real Beedrill, because I reckon that they are too big, and make him look like a messed up bee/butterfly chimera, but that's just me. Gotcha on the positioning though.
Who Said Pikachu? said:
His head's a bit too long and the antennae are too short. Also the back part isn't a cone, it's more a circular shape with a cone on the end.
Yep, I'm still mastering the design. I'll take it into consideration when I redo him in colour.

Who Said Pikachu? said:
Anyways, well done over all and continue to draw more!

Happy Hunting!
~Pika!
Thanks. ^_^

And now for an update: Custom Castforms! Thumbnails this time, 'cause they're full size.
Moonlight Castform - I love this guy!


Morning-Sun Castform - needs a bit of design work. The scan omitted some light clouds behind them, but meh.


Synthesis Castform - Yeah, bad name. Aside from that, I just need a little more care with Castform's face and 'hair'.
 
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bass_forte

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New drawing. Class is boring. (Ooh, it rhymes! >_> >_< <_<)

Meteorshower Castform. I like the way he turned out.


Would've had Fog-Spirit Castform too, but he turned out badly. Meh.
 

Kaiviti

Polynesian*
those are very very good!! Excellent pencil work ^^ plus the coloured ones are also very very good!!
sorry ^^; i'm not a good art critic....*walks away*
 
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bass_forte

Guest
Bump fro great justice.

Fog-Spirit Castform. It pretends to be a ghost in fog, yada yada yada. It's bigger than the others 'cause I drew it double size, after it screwing up in my face yesterday at the other size.The right-hand one has its head chopped off because the scanner didn't pick up the trail from the front one.
 
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bass_forte

Guest
No C+C? :(

Rain Castform, nothing new here.


Smog-Cloud Castform, obviously appears on smoggy days. (If that's a word.)


Thunder-Cloud Castform. Self explanatory.


The colours turned out badly 'cause my scanner doesn't pick up light shades, but hopefully you can imagine what would be there.

So... C+C, anyone?
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Update November 22: Rubber Ducky!

A Poké-Tool I'm working on.

C'mon people, this would have been a quadruple post had I not deleted an resubmitted the last post... any comments at all? :(
 
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bass_forte

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*bumps thread*

Pixel art of Rubber Ducky, a Porygon2 doll. Yeah, the shading sucks. Any suggestions as to how I could improve?
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Simple blur effect.
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There's several 3D model-lattice things behind the main doll, if you can see.

Any C+C? Please?
 

guiltysparkzz

AKA mattgcn
OMG :O Someone sprite those Castforms, quick! They rock!

Seriously though, I'm not much of a critic, since I can't really see many mistakes judging by how terrible my artwork is, all I can say is wow :)
 
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bass_forte

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^Thanks. Moonlight Castform is definitely becoming a sprite... just when.. >_>

Something new.

A Manta Ray line, soon-to-be sprites. I hope. Any design ideas? They look too generic to me :/
 
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bass_forte

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Manta family, redone.


Kyuo -> Kyuumi -> Kaihinsou
 
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Master Ein

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Awsome dude they toatly rock dude perfect shading and drawing
 
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bass_forte

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I wouldn't say anywhere near perfect... but thanks all the same.

Manta line again. They're watermarked this time; I just remembered that I don't want anyone stealing my stuff again. >_>


Family, possibly final version


Kaihinsou in an alternate pose
 
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Ring's Jealousy

Guest
RAAH.*ahem*
they're good, from what I can see yet...
1. the rain castform doesn't show up.
2. there isn't a word in the known dictionary known as Smoggy (from what I can tell, anyway... :p) there is Foggy, though.
 
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bass_forte

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Rain Castform died AGAIN!? Blah. Reuploaded.

Smog is a word. :p Portmanteu word, Smoke + Fog, most famously in London.
 
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