Can anyone offer me help with my poison team?

[Deoxys_Shadow]

Even though Poison pokemon are not my prefered type I want to make a kick but team with them, but so far I've been stuck and need some help. Here's what I got so far.


Venusaure ;003; (Grass/Poison) @ (open)
Special Sweeper (Overgrow)

Slug Bomb (Poison)
Worry Seed (Grass)
Grass Knot (Grass)
(open)

I imported him from my FR at lvl. 37

Crobat ;169; (Poison/Flying) @ (open)
Physical Sweeper (Inner Focus)

Toxic (Poison)
Fly (Flying)
Mean Look (Normal)
Payback (Dark)

Drapion ;452; (Poison/Dark) @ (open)
Physical Sweeper (Battle Armor/Sniper)

Cross Poison (Poison)
Crunch (Dark)
Earthquake (Ground)
Iron Tail (Steel)

Toxicroak ;454; (Poison/Fighting) @ (open)
Physical Sweeper (Dry Skin/Anticipation)

Revenge (Fight)
Rain Dance (Water)
Protect (Normal)
Focus Blast (Fight)

Tentacreul ;073; (Water/Poison) @ (open)
Special Sweeper (Liquid Ooze/Clear Body)

Surf (Water)
Slug Bomb (Poison)
Swagger (Normal)
Ice Beam (Ice)

Gengar ;094; (Ghost/Poison) @ (open)
Special Sweeper (Levitate)

Shadow Ball (Ghost)
Thunder (Electric)
Energy Ball (Grass)
Psychic (Psychic)


Anyway thats what I have so far any help or comments would be helpful.

 

[Deoxys_Shadow]

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[Chimchar/Turtwig Killer]

I think that you could give Drapion a choice item such as choice specs. It's an ll attack set and it should work.

 

[spareux]

please do not listen to the above post and give drapion choice specs.
belongs in an rmt.
post it in-game since mono type teams don't work in d/p really.

 

[Chimchar/Turtwig Killer]

Okay, i forgot there was an rmt place. Could a mod close this please? and R4J if you aren't suggesting something please don't degrade my ideas

 

[spareux]

I'm suggesting you don't give something using physical attacks and that has 60 base special attack as an item that multiplies special attack by 1.5.
Seems like a pretty good contribution to me.

 

[Chimchar/Turtwig Killer]

I said a choice item. I don't know which one boosts what. I'm not a battler, im a collector

 

[parasectdude]

I said a choice item. I don't know which one boosts what. I'm not a battler, im a collector

Then why did you rate?

 

[Chimchar/Turtwig Killer]

Because I thought that the choice item that boosts attack would work. I'm not a super battler, im a nooby battler. I know my basics.

 

[Rampardos]

What are these pokemon's natures? It's quite possible they could have a bad nature stat, in which case you should see if you could get a better nature more suited for the pokemon.

If you have these Natures, your in a good state:

Venasaur- Quiet - Up in Special Attack- Lower in Speed

Crobat- Careful - Up in Special Defense- Lower in Special Attack

Drapion- Adamant- Up in Attack- Lower in Special Attack

Toxiccroak- Adamant- Up in Attack- Lower in Special Attack

Tentacreul- Calm- Up in Special Defense- Lower in Attack

The one thing I would recomend is to replace the fly move on your Crobat for some other flying TM move.

Gengar- Modest - Up in Special Attack- Lower in Attack

 

[Prio]

Metagross Smash!

 

[dark rift]

sorry but your Toxicroak moveset is horrable.
I think this might be better

Toxicroak @ Black Sludge

Bulk Up (Fight)
Brick Break (Fighting)
Stone Edge (Rock)
Poison Jab (Poison)


Black Sludge does Rain Dances Job already. Poison Jab is a very effective poison move belive it or not. Focus Blast Doesn't suit it because it is a special move so replace it with brick break. Bulk Up is A great move for the Physical Sweeper Toxicroak is and Stone Edge will teach those flying types a lesson.

the Crobat isn't that good eather

Crobat @ no item

Theif (Dark) take lefties etc from opponent
Roost (flying) to restore HP
Cross Poison 1000000 times better then payback (don't give payback to fast pokemon!)
Confuse Ray > Toxic when thief is used first


hope that helped.