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Card update!

zappy

Beginning Trainer
Well, I didn't manage to reach these fora for a long time, so here's a little card update!

First of all, teh Zapdos!
http://img437.imageshack.us/img437/7097/zapdoscopy3zv.jpg

Second, Articuno!
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/593/articunocopy9ad.jpg

That's 'bout all the serious ones. I also made a few ToS cards (Tales of Symphonia), but I'm gonna warn you...

DON'T LOOK AT THEM UNLESS YOU'VE FINISHED THE GAME!

Clear?

Card 1.
Card 2. (only minor spoilers on this one)
Card 3.
Card 4. (only minor spoilers on this one)

Comments and rate, don't use paint anymore (^-^).
 
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Cipher 2008

Well-Known Member
Zapdos is very nice, no mistakes or errors at all. 10/10.

Articuno, likewise, except you spelt Paralyzed wrong. Still, 10/10.

The TOS cards are nice, too, but...you're gonna really hate me after this...corrections.

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CARD 1
Retribution
Flip a coin. If head, each of the Defending Pokémon is now affected by a Special Condition of your choice. If tails, this attack does nothing.

Indignation Judgement
Flip a coin. If heads, the Defending Pokémon is now Paralyzed. Either way, Mythos Yggdrasill can't use Indignation Judgement during your next turn.

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CARD 2
Rising Falcon
Flip a coin. If heads, this attack does 70 damage plus 10 more damage.

Falcon's Crest
Choose up to 3 of your opponent's Benched Pokémon. This attack does 30 damage to those Pokémon. (Don't apply Weakness and Resistance for Benched Pokémon.) Lloyd Irving can't use Falcon's Crest during your next turn.

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CARD 3
Judgement
Flip a coin for each of your opponent's Pokémon in play. This attack does 40 damage for each heads.

Shining Bind
Choose up to 3 of your opponent's Benched Pokémon. This attack does 30 damage to those Pokémon. (Don't apply Weakness and Resistance for Benched Pokémon.) Kratos Aurion * can't use Shining Bind during your next turn.

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CARD 4
Meteor Storm
Flip a coin for each of your opponent's Pokémon in play. This attack does 50 damage for each heads. This attack isn't affected by Weakness or Resistance.

Indignation Judgement
Flip a coin. If heads, the Defending Pokémon is now Paralyzed. Either way, Genis Sage can't use Indignation Judgement during your next turn.

Apart from those, very nice TOS cards, 9/10 each. Actually, 9.5 for Card 3, my fave. :D
 

zappy

Beginning Trainer
I noticed the different wording on card 2 and 3 for the same effect before, too. Was too lazy to edit it. :p

Although I'll have to correct you: both Judgement and Judgment are correct, but the game uses Judgment.
 
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Wobbuffet fan

Guest
Aw, no more Paint, zappy?

On Zapdos's PokéPower the "If tails... your Defending Pokémon" should be "Active Pokémon." Don't ever refer to your Pokémon as the Defending one.

Articuno's Body should really be a Power since it's not innate and not triggered by an event.

Other than that I love the quality of the cards. I've never played ToS, but I enjoy the cards anyway. A final note: when you don't know the illustrator, I recommend listing the site it came from so that someone receives credit.
 

zappy

Beginning Trainer
Wobbuffet fan said:
Aw, no more Paint, zappy?

On Zapdos's PokéPower the "If tails... your Defending Pokémon" should be "Active Pokémon." Don't ever refer to your Pokémon as the Defending one.

Articuno's Body should really be a Power since it's not innate and not triggered by an event.

Other than that I love the quality of the cards. I've never played ToS, but I enjoy the cards anyway. A final note: when you don't know the illustrator, I recommend listing the site it came from so that someone receives credit.

Nah, I really got tired of Paint.

If I should credit the art of the ToS cards, then I would have to credit the ones who did the graphics for that game. Those screens were in-game, you see.
 

zappy

Beginning Trainer
Rufinito18 said:
its great and all..but Its too powerful....

I'm assuming you're saying that for attacks with Light/Dark energie costs. Those aren't Basic Energies, so you can only have four of them in your deck. That's why attacks are more powerful when they have Light/Dark energie costs.

(Light cards don't excist, anyway... >_>)
 

+Flame Claw+

Space Rebellion!
Articuno and Zapdos, look great! There are some tiny font errors. Since when has Zapdos needed Dark energy?
 
Great cards zappy, even though I don't have a clue what "tales of symphonia" is.
10/10 I didn't notice a single mistake, and I liked the pictures. Hope to see more from you.
 

zappy

Beginning Trainer
shelldude1 said:
Great cards zappy, even though I don't have a clue what "tales of symphonia" is.
10/10 I didn't notice a single mistake, and I liked the pictures. Hope to see more from you.


Lets just say it's one of the best NGC RPGs, along with SoAL.

Maybe I'll be doing more Tales of soon, I have some inspiration for Zelos!
 
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ronnie

Guest
The fusion of Swampert, Blaziken, and Sceptile is Swampblazptile
 

King Shuckle

Don't be daft
Pretty good cards you have there. Good luck on any future creatiobn you may have, however, at this point, a set number and rarity symbol would be appropriate now. 9.5/10 for the whole group.
 

munchlaxboy

Catching up on XY
Very well done.
Zapdos 90/100- I LOVE the picture, but something just bothers me with the opponent able to practically block its attacks half the time.
Articuno 65/100- The attacks are much better, but the Articuno pic doesn't go with the backround AT ALL.
 
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