Chaos Sneasel's sprite thread

[Chaos Sneasel]

Hey everyone! I'm new to serebii [though I had been checking out the forums as a guest for a little while before signing up] and I thought I'd jump right in and show you some of the things I've made.
NOTE: I'm basically a beginner spriter, maybe been doing this for a month or two [but not a constant thing], so these probably aren't going to be that good. Any comments and criticism welcome, as long as you don't tear me apart- remember, I've only just begun.

These are the first sprites I ever made

Here's a rainbow starmie with a silver jewel in the middle

These are the three trainers in the story, riding their pokemon[first time I attempted to do something like this]

Chartini, Drameleon and Dragizard

Crocosquirt Totoreep Charigatr [who is under construction]and Nidocross

West's trainer cards

Raze's trainer cards

Ola's trainer cards

And that's all for now. Criticism and comments welcome, but keep in mind I'm new at this, so try not to tear me apart if they're not great as I'm just a beginner at this, and these were my first stabs at spriting.


~Chaos Sneasel ;215;

 

[Jasmine Lover]

Your trainers need shading.
they are just one color
They are realy nothing special just recolors

 

[Kitsune]

Yeah Chaos, I was gonna warn you, try to add some shading to your trainer sprites. (I'm making tutorials for the site, I'll make that one next) See, they look 2-D with only one shade. The best recolored trainer would have to be Olas (Minus the green mouth) I like your sneasel/Scyther/Heracross, however. And the Pokemon nicknames. ^.^

 

[Chaos Sneasel]

The first trainer is shaded- it's just a recolored team magma grunt, though I did mess up the shirt when I put the logo on.

I just want people to tell me if they like the recolors, which is why I basically only posted recolors, and the names of the pokemon. I have other stuff, I just didn't post it because I wanted to know if people liked the recolors and their names.

EDIT: Whoops, I accidentally recolored the red of the mouth, as it was a match with the red of the uniform. My mistake.

~Chaos Sneasel ;215;

 

[Jasmine Lover]

The recolors and nicknames are great
Try to post different things besides recolors

 

[Chaos Sneasel]

I will, I just have to dig them out of my paint files.

~Chaos Sneasel ;215;

 

[Kitsune]

I don't think names count here...
>_>
<_<
*ahem*
But yes, when you recolor, try to put on, y'know, more than one color...The Pokemon recolors and mixes, however, are very nice, especially for your first. Your trainers just need some work, that's all. As I said, those are very nice for your first ever sprites.

 

[Jasmine Lover]

Cool they are going to look cool
what are the other things you make

 

[Chaos Sneasel]

EDITED
Got rid of the trainer things [I'll repost the pokemon later in a more condensed format] and added a rainbow starmie

~Chaos Sneasel ;215;

 

[Chaos Sneasel]

EDITED
Added a new sprite-Chartini

~Chaos Sneasel ;215;

 

[Chaotic Houndoom]

Pretty go as far as I can see.

 

[Chaos Sneasel]

UPDATED
Added the whole Chartini family- Chartini, Drameleon and Dragizard [names need work]. Comments and criticism, please.

~Chaos Sneasel ;215;

 

[Eevee_Master]

I like them! There cool! I also like the rainbow starmi ^.^

 

[Chaos Sneasel]

Thanks! It's good to get some positive feedback in the early stages. More coming soon [hopefully very soon, working on some stuff now]

~Chaos Sneasel ;215;

 

[Eevee_Master]

Yay! I want to see it ^.^

 

[Chaos Sneasel]

UPDATE
I've added Crocosquirt. Comments and criticism, please[again, the name needs tweaking also]. More coming soon

~Chaos Sneasel ;215;

 

[Kitsune]

>: Quite nice, CS!
>: I like Dragizard (sp? [The Charizard one]), but the left (our left) wing seems to be unattached...

 

[Chaos Sneasel]

Yeah, it is unattatched, because I got rid of the part that hooked the bottom of the wing to the head because I had to get rid of part of the head and it just messed everything up and made it look worse.

~Chaos Sneasel ;215;

 

[Chaos Sneasel]

UPDATE
Added Totoreep. Don't know why, but when I saw that Totodile's face in the midst of the fluffy yellow Mareep body, it had me laughing out loud for at least 5 minutes. C&C please.

~Chaos Sneasel ;215;

 

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About loading the old ones, it doesn't, you just have to refresh.