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Cheesy's Strange Adventure (revived)

  • Thread starter ■■Cavan♠2■■
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■■Cavan♠2■■

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My old thread got burned down, so here's a new one:

Plot (read or be confused):
Cheesy is a cheese who is part of an interplanetary organisation to thwart evil. Cheesy hears that the Black Gang is in a desert. Cheesy infiltrates the desert to find the gang.
Now In Comic Form!

Episode 1: Desert Days
Episode 2: The Melted Cheese Episode
Episode 3: Tempestous Battle
Episode 4: Chaddress Unknown
Episode 5: Bad Aim at the Sky Pillar
Episode 6: Slow Modem
Episode 7: JumpMan's Comeback
Episode 8: Garb Garbage(Note: the confusing speech bubbles in [SPOIL]the ACDC[/SPOIL] part of this strip are a joke on the relation of he position of a speech bubble tail and the speaker)

If you want Cheesy to make a cameo in your comics, PM me.
19 sprites of Cheesy are currently made.
Also, if you want your character(s) to make a cameo in this comic, PM me (do NOT post your character sprites in this thread) with the sprites of the corresponding character(s).

Extra Comics: ( First 3 from old comic thread)
Funny Little Comix 1: Tying the Knot
Funny Little Comix 2: Cooking Comes From the Heartless
Funny Little Comix 3: Mushroom and Crash

Credits:
This website for the desert backdrop, and other Golden Sun objects.
This website for other sprites, which I may or may have not recoloured etc.
Me for Cheesy sprites.

Any storyline suggestions would be appreciated.
 
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SecretMew

Well-Known Member
Hmm.. This comic seems quite original in it's plot. Nice to see that you added those "heartless" there too on the extras xD. I think you should try to make the "effects" quite better, like more shading if possible, they make the objects more realistic. Cheesy has got good shading though. You have a nice comic, I think they'll be even better later..
 
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Bagonclaw

Guest
[Warning] I'm just giving crit to help you make your comic more appealing so people will post in it [Warning\]
Comic # 1: The background behind the bottle is very blocky. Consider making it look better. Unless it's a magic bottle. 0_o
Comic # 2: Shade the Cheesy water.
Comic # 3: When tempest lizard is busy looking like a drunk sniggering, make his eyes look more natural. Also, find some electriciy sprites.
Go to theshyguykingdom or the Spriters Rescorce to find this stuff.
Comic # 4: Find some ice sprites from the places mentioned above.
Comic # 5: Don't use smileys in speech bubbles. Say somthing like: "Sweet!"
Comic # 6: Fine.
Comic # 7: Maybe you should say: "Hey! Look, Cheesy! My invisible clothes!"
In all the comics, only bigify by hundred precents. Want to know how to "bigify" if you only have paint? Get a photobucket account and upload the sprites there. You can bigify pics there.
Well, follow these steps, and you are on your way to greatness!

_BC_
 
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■■Cavan♠2■■

Guest
Finally, I am done! I managed to improve my comics. It took me a while, and I had a vacation in another non-internet-accessible place for 3 weeks. Anyway, I am using a new image hoster. I hope you like my comics!
 
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Magical Trevor

Guest
I love how you've done the idea a cheese in a desert.
 
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■■Cavan♠2■■

Guest
I've now done te 8th comic. Happy reading!
 
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Bagonclaw

Guest
Much better. The only thing I advise that you do now is shape Cheesy up. He looks blocky. Oh, wait! I think Jumpman is still zoomed in by a different interval than he is supposed to be. Only zoom by intervals of 100.
 
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Hejiru

Rev up those fryers
Hahaha! I like Cheesy's Adventures!!!!!!!11
Will there be a episode 9?
 
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