Chimetu's Adventures!

[Magic kid930]

Hello. I made this ocmic because my other comic was a failure. So this time:

I haven't used default colours no matter how much it may look like them.
I've at least tried to add humour
I've got more characters
I've got better speech bubbles

so here's the comic:

Comics:
Episode 1 - No-one important
Episode 2 - Ready, Steady, Look!

Fan Art:
none

Please ost constructive c+c

 

[Magical Trevor]

well better but not good. Even hough you said you'd tried to add humour it's not very funny. You need a bit off work on your comics

 

[Magic kid930]

Thanks mutten, I'll try to make the next one a bit more humourous, if I can think of anything that will add humour

 

[zeppelin]

humor=good
ill be fair and give it 7/10

 

[Magic kid930]

Thanks wooper, but next time please tell me a bit more. but thanks for the comment

 

[Magic kid930]

Sorry to DP, but episode 2 is here!

 

[Controller of Flames]

The link for two doesn't work.

 

[Magic kid930]

Fixed that problem, should work now

 

[Neopolis]

humor=good
ill be fair and give it 7/10

Number ratings are forbidden. -_-

Either way, I kinda like the fusions, but as said before, you do need work on the humour. You need to add at least some shading to the background too. That teachy TV and the stool look weird, they're made for overworld sprites, not for trainer sprites.

 

[Electrode]

Well the backropund needs more shading but your starting the plot in an original wayThe fusions are good but kinda boring and the whole fusions going on a comic adveture I think this should be alittle semi random but all in all it's a good comic

 

[Magic kid930]

Well, electrode, I thought of what you said and I've decided Chimetu is gonna do one thing in some comics, then then next set of comics are gonna be something completely different (although there might be some things related to a past comic e.g if Chimetu wins "Ready Steady Look" then he might get Fan Mail).

Also, there are gona be more characters. So far I've only got 4 but I'm working on some more.

 

[Joe Vega #4]

Hmm... not bad. Just slant the direction of the floor to the left and shade the background.

 

[zeppelin]

episode 2 is better..8/10 mabye more pannels..

 

[Electrode]

episode 2 is better..8/10 mabye more pannels..

number raings are banned

anyway the real reason I want to post is when does the next epi come out I need to crit

 

[SoulGuardian]

Hello. I made this ocmic because my other comic was a failure. So this time:

I haven't used default colours no matter how much it may look like them.
I've at least tried to add humour
I've got more characters
I've got better speech bubbles

so here's the comic:

Comics:
Episode 1 - No-one important
Episode 2 - Ready, Steady, Look!

Fan Art:
none

Please ost constructive c+c

Wow! Good comic! Please continue it!

 

[Magic kid930]

Ok. I was just waiting to see if people liked the first 2 comics and because most people do, I'll continue!

Expect Epdisode 3 soon.

 

[SoulGuardian]

Ok. I was just waiting to see if people liked the first 2 comics and because most people do, I'll continue!

Expect Epdisode 3 soon.

I can't wait! Please make it soon....