Oh ^.^ hi! It's okay if you don't review quickly, real life takes priority - I symphathise with you and hope things turn out fine.
'She raised a farewell hand'?
lol, no, I know what you mean. I know that it's technically not a word, but I'm not adverse to making up words when no one can mistake it's meaning, and somehow 'farewelling' appeals to me more for this particular sentence. And thanks for pointing out the 'too' -_-;; dunno how that one slipped through.
Anyway, yeah, Brother escaped. I was leery about whether that was clear enough when I first wrote it, but no one complained, so... *shrug* With Vulpix, there was too much happening for me to feel comfortable focussing on Keegan
and Bill at the same time; so I focussed on Keegan and when she got the chance she looked to see what was happening to Bill, only to find his vulpix was injured, see?
^.^ Thanks for the compliments, although it's ironic you thught the title was good - I hated that title, I thought it was cheesily cliche, but it was the only one I could think of at the time.
Thanks again, luck to you.