Cipher Returns:XD002 (G)

[Pete the Unstoppable]

Each comic is short, that is cause imageshack won't allow me to have big pics, so I will post 2 comics each time. Note, I will not have an entire chapter finished in one post, so dont think a chapter is just 2 comics.

Chapter 1:XD002 Vs. The Police
Comic 1:http://img164.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic14dq.png
Comic 2:http://img164.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic28ls.png
Comic 3:http://img163.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic34so.png
Comic 4:http://img192.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic40ua.png
NO, Chapter 1 is NOT done.

 

[pharaohguy530]

Cool. I expected short like you said, and the first one was funny, with mario! I didn't expect that. So I'll say 3/5.
I'll see more in other comics! Can't wait!

 

[~Sirnight~]

I've seen shorter. The first waqs funny and the second I didn't get. Use more of the first one stuff.

 

[Pete the Unstoppable]

Comics 3 and 4 have been added, I already had them, just needed to upload them.

 

[~Sirnight~]

Better... random, but better.

 

[Tabby Catty]

it was ok some tips are that rounded rectangle bubbles fit more words than ovals and the lines on them look a bit sloppy.Also be careful what your doing when putting people from different games in too because they could look messy due to the styles (I did the same thing when HMM started I was going to use the Tokyo mew mew over worlds from the playstation game until I realized that they wouldn't fit so I heavily edited some sprites for the mew mews and aliens) but it sounds intresting I'll keep reading.

 

[Blaze Dragon]

Haha! Mario being the bad guy, I wanted to see this for ever!

 

[Avegaille]

Lol, although this the first page seemed hillarious, you still need to work on a few things... =P

Text bubbles, maybe you should try using that rounded rectangle to make it look much neater and so that the text doesn't go out of the bubble...

And also, if you're going to focus on a character, try zooming in more... it would make a better effect...

Add something to the background, not just some land and a sea... put some objects here and there to make it look a bit more realistic...

Hope to see some improvement after this...