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Forgotten Chain

Lonely and Forgotten
I really hope this is a joke. It's horrible. The only humor that comes out of it is how bad it looks. The spriting is bad, nothing matches. And that red blob with black around it... Is that supposed to be Strawberry Clock? Plus, nothing at all makes sense. Its just words thrown under horrible pictures.
 
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Tabby Catty

Courtney loves Ruby
another one of your creations? I see this will be intresting I guess I'll sit back and watch the mindless humor flow into my brain (no offense)
 
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Draconis

Currently active.
Forgotten Chain said:
It's horrible. The only humor that comes out of it is how bad it looks. The spriting is bad, nothing matches. Plus, nothing at all makes sense. Its just words thrown under horrible pictures.
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I agree with Forgotten Chain, this is a poor excuse for a comic. The backgrounds are subpar, and it makes absolutely no sense. Before anyone claims I'm being harsh, take into mind that I have read a lot of webcomics, both sprite, and handdrawn in my time, and while I have seen worse than this, it's still not in anyway entertaining. I'm not saying you should try to make it perfect, every webcomic has it's flaws, just try harder next time.
 
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Chinese Teletubbie

Orange Champion
Okay the spriting is really bad and its just stupid a bear walks up to a strawberry and says 'hows life?'
and then this jackass guy on the hill suddeny appears and decides he doesn't like the bear and just decides
to shoot him. Oh and its way too violent
 
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Bandana

*~Friends/Rivals~*
I'm sorry but I don't like this comic (thats a 1st for me)
Its too offensive and you spelt the, t3h which just put me off right away.
Sorry
 
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Sora

AKA Snagger Outlaw
Dear SPPf,

I can no longer live with myself now that I have read this halfassed comic. I have taken a cyanide pill and gouged my eye out with a screwdriver.

Good bye cruel world,
Sora

(Note: The above is a joke in case you couldn't tell.)
 
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Double update:Greeny HATERS and CESC in mars
 
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Chinese Teletubbie

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Okay EP 2 is just bloody stupid People have a right to hate a comic you know especialy one as dumb as this one.
You wasted so much time doing EP 2 I just laughed t it that you'd wasted so much time doing something as domb as that.
And all the swearing in that was pretty dumb too. Man i bet people are also gonna be pointing out how stupid Episode 2 was.
Get a grip on yourself
 
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This comic is so horribly done, I could dress up as this for Halloween. I hope that this is seriously a plot to make you look like some three year-old, because I died twice reading this. Do you know how idiotic you must be to come up with this? I'm sorry for sounding so rude, but this comic is worse than the Atom Bomb itself. I don't even know if CC would even matter now, since this is just plain Spam. I know not to ever read this again. Thank you for destroying two minutes of my life. ~FF
 
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forever flame said:
Thank you for destroying two minutes of my life. ~FF
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youre welcome


zuloon said:
If you were trying to burn people's eyes out, you SUKceeded.
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Yeah i now
 
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Tabby Catty

Courtney loves Ruby
Do you realize how rude that was? I felt relieved you didn't use any of my comments but that was rather rude of you to say that about those people thats not cool I bet you probably made them really ticked off your glad you didn't use any of my comments because I'll be so enraged and you don't want to see my temper because its ugly.
 
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Chinese Teletubbie

Orange Champion
Can I just add to my comment befor that your second episode wasso horrible that i couldnt listen to it for very long and I was wondering How many peoples comments did you curse at and stuff. Cause you really need to snap out of it
 
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Tabby Catty said:
Do you realize how rude that was? I felt relieved you didn't use any of my comments but that was rather rude of you to say that about those people thats not cool I bet you probably made them really ticked off your glad you didn't use any of my comments because I'll be so enraged and you don't want to see my temper because its ugly.
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yeah u got some hard temper!
 
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Solid Kirby

Back, I guess.
Oh, boy, Mystery Comic Theatre Material. Way I can tell? The comic's bad and the author's additude is subpar. >>

Anyway, I've been hovering over your comics for some time, and I can tell that you've, if anything, gotten WORSE in comic making. Let's see what we have here.

  • Breathing Panels (Means the panels constantly change in size)
  • Disconjoined Panels (None of the panels actually touch each other, or are relatively close to each other)
  • Lack of plot(I know enough about Conker's Bad Fur Day to get by in this case, but not everyone will.)
  • Overuse of swear words(No...Just...No. This comic's screaming "WANNA BE GANGSTA" all over it. One of these days, one's going to sock you for making fun of them.)
  • pre school sprite editing (Any Dipstick can draw a circle and add teeth. Any Dipstick can also move around and change the color of ten tiny squares so they look like teeth, as well.)
  • Text Under Panel (Unless you have a VERY good reason for it (with MCT, this is so My speech dosn't interfere with other text bubbles), there is no excuse for it. None. Especially if the comic's not a journey comic)
  • The Magical Floating White Box (It's blue box in this case, but you get the picture. The strawberry thing looks like it was slapped on there without any attempt at making it look decent)
  • Slight 1337 speak. (Did you know that it's easier to type "he" than it is to type "3h"? That's what I'm talking about.)

And that's just from the first comic.

Listen, if you want this comic to be any good, stop with the blissful unawareness of critics, stop pissing everyone off because you know your comic's bad and start taking our advice.
 
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Devil G said:
Oh, boy, Mystery Comic Theatre Material. Way I can tell? The comic's bad and the author's additude is subpar. >>

Anyway, I've been hovering over your comics for some time, and I can tell that you've, if anything, gotten WORSE in comic making. Let's see what we have here.
  • Breathing Panels (Means the panels constantly change in size)
  • Disconjoined Panels (None of the panels actually touch each other, or are relatively close to each other)
  • Lack of plot(I know enough about Conker's Bad Fur Day to get by in this case, but not everyone will.)
  • Overuse of swear words(No...Just...No. This comic's screaming "WANNA BE GANGSTA" all over it. One of these days, one's going to sock you for making fun of them.)
  • pre school sprite editing (Any Dipstick can draw a circle and add teeth. Any Dipstick can also move around and change the color of ten tiny squares so they look like teeth, as well.)
  • Text Under Panel (Unless you have a VERY good reason for it (with MCT, this is so My speech dosn't interfere with other text bubbles), there is no excuse for it. None. Especially if the comic's not a journey comic)
  • The Magical Floating White Box (It's blue box in this case, but you get the picture. The strawberry thing looks like it was slapped on there without any attempt at making it look decent)
  • Slight 1337 speak. (Did you know that it's easier to type "he" than it is to type "3h"? That's what I'm talking about.)
And that's just from the first comic.

Listen, if you want this comic to be any good, stop with the blissful unawareness of critics, stop pissing everyone off because you know your comic's bad and start taking our advice.
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oh...i r sad now,but really i put 000.01% efort in this comic
 
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