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Combuskin Combustion

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Jirachi-Celebi-Latias-boy

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Ash and co. arrive in a town called Teal town. Ash and co. enter the pokemon center. While there they meet a trainer named Monte who loves fire pokemon. He collects them and is really intrested in Ash's Torkoal and May's Combuskin. They play together and have a nice dinner. While they are asleep, Monte sneaks into their rooms and takes combuskin but he cant find torkoal so he settles for one. When may awakes and discovers that her Pokemon is gone, she freaks out and wakes the whole place. They search for the Pokemon but have no luck. Than they see Monte with the combuskinbut he runs at the first sight of them. He runs into the woods where he meets team rocket. They con him into helping to take the restof the pokemon. When they arrive Monte uses his Quilava to fight them. His pokemon is extremely strong and to make things worse, it evolves into Typhlosion in the middle of the fight. Typhlosion knocks out Grovyle, Pikachu and Beutifly. Those are the only pokemon on pur heroes because the rest are still at the center. With both sides out of breath, Team rocket double crosses Monte and steals not only Grovyle, pikachu and beautifly but typhlosion and Combuskin too. Monte cries over this but may comforts him, promising to get his pokemon back. Timmy encouraged by May's words sends out his other Pokemon, Camerupt. Camerupt, uses eruption to burn up the balloon.(the meoth one) This releases th captured Pokemon. Than they all combine their attacks and it sends team rocket blasting away again. They return to the town. They have a meal, enjoy a good nights sleep. Than the next morning, they say farewell to Monte and he apoligies for all the trouble he caused. May forgives him and they wave goodbye as they go on to their next destination.
 

Yami Ryu

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You must want to be banned, for you seem to love breaking the rules three times over already.

Rushed. Lacky. Tacky. Scripty. Little description, little plot, little of anything to make it nothing more than something one would write of for an essay about a book or a show you'd watch. No, wait, forget that, this wouldn't even qualify as an essay as most people try to put effort into that.

And I can tell this has no effort or thought put into it. And if there is, it's so minimal a magnifying glass would fail to show it.

Go read the rules, and I mean read as use those colored orbs called eyeballs and that grey mush in your skull called a brain and look, read, and take in the basic rules that you seem to love to ignore.

Or you're most likely gonna find yourself with a cartload of closed threads and little respect to your name for it.
 
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i HAVE NO RESPECT FOR SOMEONE WHO THINKS THEIR BETTER THAN EVERYONE. If you think your so great, than go be a king somewhere. I hate when you have to write a script because they are so freaking tacky. You are almost board by the end of it. Its a fanfic regular episode of pokemon. The rules here are here to make hte users look like idiots and the mods look smart. I could write a fanfic that was chosen to make into a hit movie and it probabky wouldnt be accepted here. You guys are nothing but bullies who hate pokemon.
 

Yami Ryu

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Jirachi-Celebi-Latias-boy said:
i HAVE NO RESPECT FOR SOMEONE WHO THINKS THEIR BETTER THAN EVERYONE. If you think your so great, than go be a king somewhere. I hate when you have to write a script because they are so freaking tacky. You are almost board by the end of it. Its a fanfic regular episode of pokemon. The rules here are here to make hte users look like idiots and the mods look smart. I could write a fanfic that was chosen to make into a hit movie and it probabky wouldnt be accepted here. You guys are nothing but bullies who hate pokemon.

>.> you make no sense. How could I be a king when I'm a girl? And anyways, I don't think I'm better than anyone. I just know I'm better than you X3

Anyways, seriously, we don't hate pokemon. We just dislike people like you that can't follow the rules, *****, moan and groan, like you're doing, and if you can't write a script, then how would you get it made into a movie? If you can't even write a fanfic that is. And I said what you wrote was scripty, so I think you'd be better off with script if you can't even describe anything.
 
Read the rules and stop flamming everybody ¬¬ This is your warning I'm getting sick of having to clean up after you because you're too idle and all ME.

Sandra
 
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